Yellow Skin and the Big World

The novel constructs a brand new, three-dimensional, complex, and vast fantasy world. I have never seen it in all my years of novel experience. It is super beautiful~ Advantages: The writing is good, the characters are good, the plot is excellent, the logic is excellent, and the setting is first-rate. Disadvantages: The author created many brand-new terms, and the initial reading threshold is high, but after the protagonist escapes, you can read it in one breath. The social system of Jingren has a tendency to suffer misfortune for the sake of misfortune. I hope the author can grasp the construction of the macro system and prevent the logic from collapsing. Suggestion: For the setting party, the more, in-depth, and precise the settings, the better it will look. However, for the author, if the ability is insufficient, it is better not to add too many power systems. The settings are just the skeleton, and the story is the flesh. In other words, as the story unfolds slowly, don't add too many new settings at once, as it will be unfriendly to the author and readers. In addition, the title of the book is rubbish, and you won't click on it when you see it. Come on! 05.28 It seems that it was blocked and eunuched for some reason. If you are not interested, just skip it. If you are interested, you can read it. The current content can be regarded as a short story.