Rebirth Begins with Comic Book Adaptation

You can delete a few chapters and rewrite it as a cool novel. You can be tougher when asking for help. For example, the protagonist, Miss Yu, you can read the script first. If you still feel there is no potential after reading the script, I will leave in a few days and so on, instead of giving Yu Youqing a night. Considering the time, there is no need to be so concerned about face when changing the character of Yu Youqing. If the script looks good, I can agree. Writing so many chapters is very clumsy and very annoying. Why no one criticized me later? It's because they all ran away. Give me 4 stars to encourage you.

The plot is vulgar and cliched. If it was still interesting ten years ago, it is still written like this now. The author is a man of many talents. It's so funny, I think this is a routine written by the studio, the kind that casts a wide net!

The first 10 or 20 pictures are not interesting and a little bit toxic. The following chapters basically describe some plots of the anime. As for watching anime, it is not bad. But the author always wants to bring out two people who don't know whether they are the female protagonist or the female supporting character, to tease or hint at the male protagonist, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. In addition, in the subsequent TV series filmed by male protagonists, the female protagonists and female supporting characters always look for these two girls. Will the audience not suffer from aesthetic fatigue? Are you too good at tying him to death?

I really like this neither fast nor slow rhythm, come on!

The author of Cuckold Shrimp, the plot of the ex-girlfriend at the beginning is completely given to a supporting female character. It can be given to any girl at the beginning. It must be written about the ex-girlfriend to disgust people

After reading more than 200 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore, it's so boring. Basically, it transfers the "modern" comic content one by one, how the male protagonist is into the novel through meticulous photography, and then transitions to the next work of the novel through a small amount of space (about the number of words in one chapter) (copy and paste the number of words in the comic to eight or nine chapters) To sum up: how does the author turn comics into movies by himself? After filming, he continues to copy the next comic, using a small amount of space to connect it; people who read it are dry. There should be at least one of the emotional scenes, face-slapping scenes, and counter-attack scenes in your novels to highlight the highlights of the novel.

An old routine. Originally it was said to be a novel plot, but it turned out to be the same routine as before.

The style of this book is relatively less violent, just plain and simple.

Screenwriters, in China's unspoken rules, they don't have a role. They have to be ranked behind the store manager. What is the meaning of writing this book?

There is no point of catching people, just like running water.