Writer: This Kid Has Been Smart Since He Was a Child

I watched the time jump all night long

Can the wrong chapter be deleted? I feel that you have ruined a good book. Maybe you feel that the end of the book is coming soon. Maybe Gollum's high school graduation is the ending. But the development and ending of a good novel are not decided by the author. They have their own souls and are qualified to decide when to end. Maybe we can't You decide your own birth, but your death is your own. You give me the feeling of murder. You killed Gu Lu, Zhou Lin, Qi Caiwei, and all the flesh-and-blood characters in this book. Just like Conan Doyle cannot kill Sherlock Holmes. In this life, I hope you will not forget the souls in your works.

There is no need to do anything about my sister. Just look at the pictures on the Internet and find out the cool words. This kind of mechanical deity has no other benefits except increasing pain. (Either the characters in the book or the readers) Personally, I can accept the jump in the timeline, but the author's jumping method and excuses are really speechless. You can say that Gulu has traveled all over the country and seen the beautiful scenery of the world. To settle, to accumulate. Not only does it fit in with his previous character, but it can also pave the way for subsequent plots. He will write many books. He is no longer in the world, but there is still a legend about him. He is a talented writer who sees the beginning but never the end of the dragon. About Goldfinger's growth, about his friends in junior high school and high school, about those who helped him... Where is everyone's future? I even thought about his reasons for traveling, his family of origin. He cut himself off from his original family. Especially for my father, the author still says the same thing. The timeline has jumped five years, and my son has gone to Peking University, but you still say the same thing. Ha, the logic is missing. As for the heroine, Zhou and CC are both very good girls, and Zhou should be confirmed now. Don't let the protagonist have a harem, as this is not in line with his future career plans. That's even more disgusting. There's also the Sakura Line, which I didn't expect would allow the villain to jump five years for so long. I just want to trample the clown under my feet. I also want to see the growth of the protagonist. After being paid attention to for so long, don't you have some new ideas? For example, he is a writer to better spread Chinese culture. You are also a writer, but as a reader, I do not feel your love for the characters you write. I wrote a long review for the first time in my life, late at night at four o'clock in the morning, for the lovely Gulu.

Before Chapter 340, this book could be rated as five stars, but it cannot be read afterward.

How can an author who doesn't respect his own work respect his readers?

This kind of jumpy writing style is very similar to that of a eunuch, or I don't want to write it, and just give it an ending. The plot of Wenchao is still very enjoyable, but I don't know if the author didn't intend to write an emotional line. The emotional line feels very weak. I can't figure out the purpose of writing about my deskmate going abroad. I feel that the author always wants to express something through these characters. But it seems that the expression is not very ideal, such as the original family. The two titular heroines are exactly opposite in terms of their influence on children. One is deeply influenced by her family. One is that the self-will is very strong. Reality does not require logic, but writing novels still requires logic. Whether you are writing about an incident or a plot, it is basically to pave the way for the subsequent plot. There is a saying that the gun that appears in the first chapter will definitely go off in Chapter 7, but I still haven't figured it out clearly. What is the author's intention in writing about his sister's car accident and his classmate's study abroad? It also jumped four years at a time, which felt very disconnected.

The coins I give are also money. I spend my time and it seems from the ads. It's 18 yuan a month as a gift to me as a member. I'm so disgusted.

I don't know why. It looked good before I entered high school. But after high school, the context and context felt disconnected.

It's not that you can't skip time, but you have to finish things before jumping... I really like the front part, I even spent all night reading the book I found the day before yesterday. I had a good night's sleep in the morning and was ready to continue reading. The result clicked four years later? Later, I began to reflect on "Confucianism and literature disrupting the law"... Is it because of what was said in real life in certain plots? Although four years have passed since the protagonist in the book, it is normal for his personality to change due to some things he encountered. But for the readers, only one chapter has passed, and the change in personality only happened in a moment. Both the rhythm and the mood make people feel a little uncomfortable...

What I like most is the early stage. It gets more and more complicated as it goes on, and I can tell news about the protagonist for several chapters in a row without mentioning it once.