First Lord of Earth

I was immediately persuaded to quit after reading less than 2 chapters. I all have the same talent. As a result, only the protagonist can use it and no one else can use it. Are you stupid?

You want to write about everything, but in the end nothing can be written well. It's too complicated and messy, the center is not concise, the protagonist's personality changes, and there is no desire to be a lord and hegemony, and he treats the people below him too kindly. I've seen a lot of your fusion of worlds. There is no one who carries the memory of the original world like you. You are just asking for trouble for yourself. Gao Shun has been subdued for dozens of chapters, and he has to worry about his past world and Lu Bu's memories. You can't accept your fucking way of writing. There is always a person in my heart who I loved deeply in the past, and I can't keep him if he has a husband. You Jinlian takes Wu Dalang, Qingwen thinks about Brother Bao, good guy, you came to this world just to fulfill others. The best way to write it is that none of these people who came have their original memories. It's just ability. Can the people you conquer be sent directly to the territory by the system? Why bother looking for it yourself? It's unnecessary and a waste of time. You miss the point. Also, can this item and equipment not contain too many modern technological products? I can only say that your novel is very average. Have you read other people's Lord novels? It's not shameful to learn from them. What you wrote is really not good!

This is too poisonous. It is said that everyone has god-level talents, but in the end only the protagonist uses the talents!

When I saw a monster from the world of cultivation being beaten to death by an ordinary person from the world of Li Shi, my IQ was pressed to the ground and rubbed again.

His mother's fifth-level mortal transformation only has 6,000 kilograms of strength. Using all her strength is only ten times the strength. Are you trying to argue about fantasy floor tiles? The description is so painful that the result is not as strong as the martial arts world, so I am speechless.

The explosive troops that should be included in the lord's article are not included at all, and all high-end troops are used without ordinary troops. As a result, there are almost a million people but only 10,000 or 20,000 troops. In an ordinary non-magic world, one hundred draws is not a small amount, but this is an extraordinary world. This population should have at least 100,000 troops. Now there are only 10,000 or 20,000 troops, which is not even enough to defend the home.

Personally, I feel that the writing is good. I wanted to praise you a few words, but after reading the comments below, I didn't dare to praise you. I can only say, come on, those trolls are probably your peers, and they are jealous of you!

The beginning of the writing was pretty good, but the writing got better and better later on. For example, is it really good for all people to practice spiritual practice? It doesn't matter if there are few people. When there are many people, there will be so many resources, and who will do anything when everyone is practicing! There are still more than 200,000 people and tens of thousands of troops. Do you know how much space would be occupied by 200,000 to 300,000 people together? I also divided my troops to divide the territory. My hometown is a bastard. If you really want to expand your territory, you should slowly expand your territory. What's the point of traveling a thousand kilometers away to expand? And I always think about other people's resources. It says that resources will appear wherever there is a territory. But what about the resources of your own territory? After you have some resources at the beginning, there is no mention at all.

All kinds of things that I carelessly pressure the protagonist to grow up are really disgusting. . . I can tolerate it before, but I really can't bear the protagonist giving up farming in another space and not using the army of bones and undead. . It really disgusts me. The most disgusting thing is that I gave up the different space and chose another undead army terracotta warriors and horses. . . What? ? ? Are the terracotta warriors and horses more beautiful than the bones of beasts?

The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes. What stands out is the personal force value. I have been playing with the army, but in the end it feels like the army has no effect.