Travel Notes of Zhutianxing

Do you know what the dimensional world represents? Do you understand those nonsensical things that represent Japanese comics? As you put it, our world is still dimensional. The world is the world and what dimension is it? And why are you lowering your IQ for no reason? You are the only one monologue in the whole room. Are you annoyed? To write a book well, it also needs to be logical. How can a world of cultivation and martial arts be so strong? I have no problem with you having a harem. Brother, don't like someone because of some mystery, okay? A few years ago, your novel was still available. There are so many routines now, but you are still so blunt. There are too many monologues in the whole scene, you know? Other parts are okay. But the biggest flaw of this book is the dimension. You can't have a grander view of the world. Three Thousand Great Worlds, Middle Thousand Worlds, Small Thousand Worlds, and Countless Small Worlds. The next dimension is the dimension. And if you follow the traditional world-traveling flow, you should have reached the level of an immortal by now. And there are so many worlds in which you build a foundation. How close is this? So far, there is no final wish to dispose of the body. And you said you can draw people into your world. So why didn't we get some guns and ammunition during the Republic of China? You also wrote about grenades in the article? Do you understand that the atrophy in the early stage is not a bad feeling as you wrote it? Anyway, I've also read those book friends in your comment section. Their opinions differ, but mine is the most pertinent. The biggest failure of this book is the words "Dimensional World".

Those who have never lost do not know the joy of winning; those who have never been hurt do not know the realization of pain; the heart that has never loved does not know the feeling of loss; many things are hard to wait for, it is natural and inevitable; many love appointments are broken after a long time, which is accidental, and even more... With joy; only in days with wind and rain can we verify the authenticity of love; only in a life with gains and losses can we experience true perfection; only in a life with tears and laughter can we grow into a wonderful self; only in a mood of joy and joy can we welcome the arrival of happiness. Along the way of life, perseverance has fulfilled the waiting; the mood has been silent, and it has become a habit; as long as the heart is still there, taste alone, and the fragrance of loneliness is; as long as the dream is still there, walking far away, the feet will measure the time; when the figure has been on the journey, turn around and leave it to the past, how much care, how much love, let the time pass by, and it will be beautiful if you understand it; how much resentment, how much sorrow, leave it to the years to regret, understanding will turn the page. I only wish: a heart with no waves and no obstacles, no obstacles in my body; love with only love, a journey with no difficulties or obstacles, with a smile and a calm attitude.

I didn't want to comment! But the more I read, the worse it gets. I just want to say: What the hell are you writing?

It was okay at first, but the more I looked at the protagonist, the more depressed I became. I didn't see how the protagonist looked like the protagonist.

Don't read it if you are an old bookworm, it will make you uncomfortable, but you can read it if you have a low IQ.

You can have women in the main world, but it would be disgusting if you flirted with women in other worlds. If you delete your book, I will report it to you every day.

Can the golden finger allow Yang Tu to enter the dimensional world that he has heard and seen? ? ?

Wouldn't it be better to just write about a teacher from Earth, and then use a family heirloom to take him through time?

It's so toxic that the supporting characters' minds are almost full of shit and they can't stand it. . .

Well written 👍 Cheers to you💪