The Trajectory of Xin Liye
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"It's a shame, it's such a shame." "Yes, Yatsuha Itto-ryu has the curse of overpowering one's wife. Forget about overcoming friends, it's okay to overthrow one's own wife. How can you overthrow someone else's wife?" "Thanks to you, you are still the Imperial Peach Blossom Sword, and thanks to you, you have become a sword master. It's really great. Don't you think so? Rean Schwarzer?" "Ah, I really can't stand it anymore. I'll give you two gifts and give you another chance. Go back to the past and create a different future." Someone said this and kicked Rean Shuhuaze back to April 1, 1206 in the Qiyao Calendar, the beginning of "Trails of Cold Steel 3", the most important time node.
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Official(7)Scraped 3d ago
Pay attention to out-of-bounds elements
I have only read the author's flash rail fanfics (this one and the first one). The plot structure is well established. The changes made by the protagonist Rean in the previous book and the butterfly effect after the changes made my eyes shine. It saved many tragedies, especially the gentle acceptance of Kezhou. But the shortcomings are also obvious. If you put the perspective of other people, the protagonist is a psychopath and scary. From time to time, he makes some remarks that others cannot understand and acts like he knows everything but doesn't know where he knows it. Examples are the fight with the Crimson Devil and the part about Qia and Ling. I shouldn't need to say more. The common shortcoming of these two books is that elements from other works are mixed together without being properly integrated into the work, which makes people look very embarrassed. The first book is a prequel to Flash 2, and the final volume is even more difficult to watch when it competes with Sister 7. This is when the Heroic Spirits are summoned. It directly copies the settings of Fate, which instantly makes people laugh (at least me). Here is a suggestion that can incorporate this setting into the work: Rean was sent back to the beginning of Flash 3 with the help of a certain being. In order to change Rean's destiny, a certain being gave him the ability to "read world records", and through a catalyst, he summoned part of the "world records" to the present world at the cost of his own spiritual power. Extract the essence of the setting of Summoning Heroes and change it into a setting that fits the world view, so that it will not be embarrassing and not be restricted to death by the setting. (Although it's a foregone conclusion, I hope your next book can improve it) I think the biggest mistake of the author is that he insists on writing cross-border elements without the ability to integrate elements of other works. A work that was obviously good in the first place turned out to be so bad. I believe you felt this deeply when you wrote the final words of the second book. I hope this book won't be mixed with other elements. It was already very uncomfortable when I read the first one.
Where is the plot written?
At the end of Flash Rail 4, it's still Li Rail.
Why is this book doing so poorly?
Doesn't the author pass it on? :::::
This guy seems to be writing four books at the same time.
He wasn't originally called the Bad-dressed Treacherous Young Master, and the third magician wasn't also called him. Why did he change his name? .
Like, I want to ask... That's it
Four open? Awesome
Will you be publishing other new fan books?
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 3d ago
Pay attention to out-of-bounds elements
I have only read the author's flash rail fanfics (this one and the first one). The plot structure is well established. The changes made by the protagonist Rean in the previous book and the butterfly effect after the changes made my eyes shine. It saved many tragedies, especially the gentle acceptance of Kezhou. But the shortcomings are also obvious. If you put the perspective of other people, the protagonist is a psychopath and scary. From time to time, he makes some remarks that others cannot understand and acts like he knows everything but doesn't know where he knows it. Examples are the fight with the Crimson Devil and the part about Qia and Ling. I shouldn't need to say more. The common shortcoming of these two books is that elements from other works are mixed together without being properly integrated into the work, which makes people look very embarrassed. The first book is a prequel to Flash 2, and the final volume is even more difficult to watch when it competes with Sister 7. This is when the Heroic Spirits are summoned. It directly copies the settings of Fate, which instantly makes people laugh (at least me). Here is a suggestion that can incorporate this setting into the work: Rean was sent back to the beginning of Flash 3 with the help of a certain being. In order to change Rean's destiny, a certain being gave him the ability to "read world records", and through a catalyst, he summoned part of the "world records" to the present world at the cost of his own spiritual power. Extract the essence of the setting of Summoning Heroes and change it into a setting that fits the world view, so that it will not be embarrassing and not be restricted to death by the setting. (Although it's a foregone conclusion, I hope your next book can improve it) I think the biggest mistake of the author is that he insists on writing cross-border elements without the ability to integrate elements of other works. A work that was obviously good in the first place turned out to be so bad. I believe you felt this deeply when you wrote the final words of the second book. I hope this book won't be mixed with other elements. It was already very uncomfortable when I read the first one.
Where is the plot written?
At the end of Flash Rail 4, it's still Li Rail.
Why is this book doing so poorly?
Doesn't the author pass it on? :::::
This guy seems to be writing four books at the same time.
He wasn't originally called the Bad-dressed Treacherous Young Master, and the third magician wasn't also called him. Why did he change his name? .
Like, I want to ask... That's it
Four open? Awesome
Will you be publishing other new fan books?
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