Lu Mingfei Training Plan

At first glance, I saw Lu Mingfei's sterilization plan.

After reading a bunch of fandoms, it turns out that this one is the least poisonous... Or the least convulsive. Many other fandoms have higher scores than this one, but they really often make mistakes. What kind of pain, literature, distorted relationships is obviously scum, Shilan's writing is very easy to commit literary youth and insert the so-called Eriyi plot. The first two hundred chapters were normal and suddenly reached the eight hundred chapters of Japan. The first three chapters create regrets or make a knife or deliberately remain a loser. The setting is forced to fill in holes and is inexplicably divorced from the original background atmosphere. Shui's daily control is blunt and cliquey. Controversial CPs such as Lu Xia are not handled well, and a lot of poisonous points have been tasted... This is the only one that despite major changes to the world line, a bunch of elements, and a nearly complete harem of female protagonists, it can actually maintain a rigorous plot structure, the daily main plot is detailed and appropriate, and the character creation is not unfair to others. I just beg the author to finish it well and speed up the relationship progress of the female protagonists. Although the movie "The Scumbag Next Door" is too scummy, after all, it is really planned all the way from the relationship to the end of the bed. You can still learn from it

I have read 200 chapters, and they are all about teasing without marrying, and taking the route of not responding or expressing. The writing is good, but it hurts to look at it. Su Chenliu has almost become a passerby. I don't care about whether or not I have sex, I just worry about being hung up all the time. I haven't even had a confirmed relationship for 200 chapters, and I still treat my fiancée like a guest.

The most ridiculous thing I've ever done is to order hundreds of chapters in one go. It's so fucking stupid. . .

I also saw a love simulation with all-female dragons before.

To be honest, I really like this way of writing

I would like to make some suggestions. I hope the author can put more effort into the construction of characters. You can go to another Dragon Clan fan book to learn from it, called Lu Mingfei's Growing Life. Also, in terms of plot, Lu Mingfei doesn't want to be a superhero.

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The beginning is amazing, but the pacing is not well controlled.

I want to say that the writing is very good, the setting is good, a dragon version of love story, but is Lu Mingfei worthy? This bad guy doesn't deserve so many perfect girls, or there is no one who can.