Douluo: a Scroll of Mountains and Rivers and a Map of the Country

I felt it was inappropriate to pass the technique to the Tianshui Girl Group, and then it actually spread throughout the continent. In other words, Tang Gou and Jade Puppy still got the technique. So what was the use of it in the first place?

I feel like this is just an outline and some discussion of the main plot. I didn't start writing it at all, I said it looked weird!

The writing is a bit inexplicable. What he did in the Holy Soul Village can be said to be a passionate person, but he is extremely indifferent to his women. From the beginning to the end, he never even thought about resurrecting Xiao Wu's mother, nor did he think about helping Xiao Wu get revenge. Other women's families also had no intention of helping. Sure enough, if you have the strength, you can do whatever you want.

The description is not very clear, but I just feel that Douluo is too sorry. There is no mainland unified to take away, but it has been restored to its original state, which feels boring.

Oh haha! It's gone again. Add more and more.

Why doesn't the author update? He won't be in the palace, right?

If there is no lower score, I will give you a zero score.

Author, are you writing an outline?

The first dozen or so chapters are a bit off-putting, but the later chapters are enjoyable and all the off-putting points are filled in.

It's already a bit broken. Unless Douluo World can give some of the origin of Douluo World or something similar as a reward when it ascends later, it can still recover.