Start with a Famous Name

To be honest, I feel that the author's writing is good, but the various descriptions are too deliberate, making it a bit tiring to read. And the biggest problem with this book is that the character of the protagonist is very vague. After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't have a clear idea of ​​the character of the protagonist. I would say that the protagonist is smart and cautious, but it feels like he is showing off his cleverness in various ways, which feels very disconnected. It can be said that the protagonist's outlook on life is relatively good, but he is very excited about killing people to get good luck, and he is cruel and ruthless. He dared to take the initiative to kill several "evil youths" who have nothing to do with him just a few days after time travel! Let's say the protagonist's outlook is evil, but it's not clearly reflected in the plot! And there is a second problem, that is, after reading dozens of chapters, the plot always revolves around this market, and I feel that I can't see the main line of the plot. I feel that the plot development is very messy, here and there. Suddenly, I accidentally gathered all four physical training methods + Qing Gong + Disguise + Hidden Weapon + two magical secrets. Then I got it immediately if I was short of tonics, got it immediately if I was short of silver, and immediately discovered the underground secret channel + black market if I was short of money and money. The writing feels like there is no need for the protagonist to search for it deliberately. In this chapter, he is worrying about it, but in the next chapter he gets it accidentally! The overall feeling is that the author's writing is good on the details of the plot, but the outline of the main plot is too rough, putting the cart before the horse, and feeling like showing off the details, which makes it very tiring to read!

I can't appreciate the main character in this book.

The more I read, the more annoying it becomes. I always tell you the results first, and then explain the process in detail. Once or twice, it's okay, but it's always like this. The more I read, the more annoying it becomes.

I don't understand what a man is doing, and a nerdy woman is doing Xuan Shui Gong.

I can read it, but why does this book seem so tiring? What's the reason? Some novels feel so easy to read that sometimes I forget how long it takes to read them.

The rating is a bit low, but it could be higher. The plot is not laggy and is very enjoyable. The supporting characters have IQs and are not that diligent in changing maps. The golden finger is very good. The disadvantage may be that the combat power is a bit confusing. The bottom passage is really a bit unbelievable.

It's good to read, the author writes it very well, and doesn't find any logical loopholes. The character of the protagonist is well portrayed, and he kills decisively.

It has nothing to do with writing ability. After reading a few chapters, I don't know what you are thinking or what you are writing. I don't know what this book is about?

There is no obvious main plot, and the purpose of the protagonist feels very weak. It seems that no matter how you jump around, it will have no impact. Also, the cool points are very weak. The protagonist has learned a lot of skills, but there is no cool cool point. It is recommended that the author can at least use the accumulation of red points as a coordinate. Also, the more powerful skills you learn, the more it will cost. Also, I feel like the author wants to create a world with a lot of technology, but the enemies are so weak, so why can't the enemies master something awesome?

Advantages: Good writing, smooth writing, and the protagonist is decisive in killing Disadvantages: ① The progress is too slow: The background is Kyushu, but after writing more than a hundred chapters, it is still on the small market map. If the main line is the struggle for hegemony in Kyushu, don't suppress the protagonist's level too much. ② Too many foreshadowings: Gang leader Xu who appeared in the plot of "The Evil Young Master" has not appeared in a short period of time. This kind of long-term foreshadowing is easily forgotten by readers. It is not good to bury it for too long. If it appears later, it will make the mini-boss weak. The plot of Dougan Amomori is very good. The protagonist has done all the details in advance, making up for the gap in strength and making it convincing.