Devouring the Stars: Reboot, Serpent of Eternity!

It's a complete self-pleasure flow. There are too many internal dramas, which makes the whole plot very scattered. The main text is filled with too many side sentences, which are all internal dramas and narration introductions, and they are also funny. There are too many descriptions of the Jiang family's martial arts in the early stage, which are all rubbish. There are currently no awesome skills on earth. Just learn the Nine Layers Thunder. There are many skills in the later universe. Besides, the protagonist has a problem, but he suppresses it and doesn't use it. It's quite speechless.

The writing is too detailed and always describes things that are beyond the protagonist's current realm. Do you think we want to see it?

It's really nonsense to see a lot of Devouring fandom's second creations deliberately downgrading Master of the Universe. In the original work, Master Luo Feng had a fight with the Lord of the Universe, but there was nothing he could do. His combat power is higher than his understanding of the law. When Duan Donghe chose the inheritance, he had to rush to put it on the shelves and had to fight hard for the inheritance. However, Duan Donghe couldn't find the conditions in the universe sea to let Immortal and Universe Venerable participate. Who in the serious lineage of God King would want someone below the Lord of Laws? Look at the world of Jin. The God King of Jin is so depressed. The masters of laws who broke into Wuqi Tower have created sixth-level secrets. Without the foundation of the sixth-level secret method, how could they burst out with the attack power of the tenth to eleventh level. The army's assessment by the Lord of Laws is extremely cruel, with almost half of them dying at one time. However, the Venerable Law Master is a student in the world of Jin and has a less cruel elimination rate. And the story about the Master of the Universe breaking through to the level of perfect genes is simply a slap in the face to the will of the original universe. The restrictions are all based on the logic of the universe, so just break through the logic. Breaking through the logic of the universe is a bug virus that needs to be killed by the universe anti-virus.

Long-winded, too much inner drama, thinking I am great

It seems that the author has indeed done some homework, but unfortunately his writing skills are not good enough. The text is too wordy and exaggerated. He tried to write a "funny and humorous" effect, but the actual performance is all nonsense and psychological description. The dialogue between the characters is too homely and seems too childish. To sum up, if the writing is not improved, it will be useless no matter how good the setting and plot are. I suggest the author practice how to tell a good story first.

I can tolerate the rest. It took 30 years to get through the 12th floor of the original secret realm, but there is only one teacher named King. I spent more than 800,000 yuan to purchase resources and was scolded by this teacher. I was accused of reselling resources and was listed as a key surveillance target... I just laughed. I wish you all a happy reading.

It's not what I like to read. The description of the protagonist feels very speechless.

The trap is too big. The cosmic realm has created several perfect genetic clones. If you don't fully understand the laws on your own, it all depends on the clones' genes. The trap is so awesome that you and Luo Feng return to the earth together with the domain master.

What are you writing about? What's the use of hanging it so big? I have been saying to myself, if you don't have the strength, what can you do to make your family last forever?

This is too boring. Why are you talking so much nonsense?