Maoshan: Beginning with the Dharma Protector General to Become a Saint
by A Big Gourd
About This Novel
When he woke up, Li Yuan traveled through time and became Uncle Jiu's apprentice, turned on the body training mode, and determined to become a Taoist guardian general. A violent Taoist guardian was born in Maoshan. Copper skin, iron bones, energy and blood, rebirth with a drop of blood, locking the soul thousands of miles away! All the ghosts and gods were destroyed. Huang Pizi asks for a seal? Kneel down! Meila from Chu came to sing opera, Sadako was captured to dance, the corpse king in golden armor scratched my back, and Qilin was captured to use as a mount. Uncle Jiu: I would like to advise everyone, don't mess with my apprentice, otherwise I will really... Beat you to death.
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Official(42)Scraped 6d ago
The writing is too poor, the author seems to be ignorant and obscene
Too brainless, not recommended to watch, run away!
Is there no other adjective? Always repeating.
Yes, that's it
Come on, author, this is how you write it, to smash the monsters and monsters into pieces. I hope the weapon can be a Fangtian painted halberd or a spear. It's best to learn some martial arts, after all, martial arts is a skill. Only strength, no skill is enough
It is recommended to change weapons. 1,600 Pounds. It's so heavy that I didn't even come here until I finished firing the weapon. Replace it with the Qinglong Yanyue Sword. How nice. Or make a big hammer with blood. Cannot be carried with you
This style is very good, but the progress is a little slower. It is recommended to change the weapons.
As for the weapons, can you change the feel a little? This one is not very domineering. This style has always been a little more invincible. It's good. I think it should be replaced with a halberd or a gun, something like that. It's good.
Can you continue writing? ? ? I haven't seen enough, I want to know the plot behind it, and I don't want to be a eunuch.
The writing is good, but the content could be improved a bit.
If you are a novice writer, I personally feel that it is quite good to be able to write like this for the first time. If the author can, he can slightly optimize the plot content. There are some typos and so on. Although it does not affect reading, it still looks a bit awkward, so try to avoid them. Everyone has their own preferences for radishes and vegetables. I personally think this book is very good.
Was there a replacement later?
In the section where Ren Tingting appeared, was there a change of character? It's so hot on the back, damn it
Laughed hahahahaha
I started to eat bad money. The writing is so damn ugly.
I say hello in advance
Judging from the title of the book, does the protagonist start out as a protector? If yes, I'll watch it. If not, then I'll leave. I was deceived by a book about becoming an emperor at the beginning, but it turned out to be the martial arts version of Ten Meters in One Step.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(42)Scraped 6d ago
The writing is too poor, the author seems to be ignorant and obscene
Too brainless, not recommended to watch, run away!
Is there no other adjective? Always repeating.
Yes, that's it
Come on, author, this is how you write it, to smash the monsters and monsters into pieces. I hope the weapon can be a Fangtian painted halberd or a spear. It's best to learn some martial arts, after all, martial arts is a skill. Only strength, no skill is enough
It is recommended to change weapons. 1,600 Pounds. It's so heavy that I didn't even come here until I finished firing the weapon. Replace it with the Qinglong Yanyue Sword. How nice. Or make a big hammer with blood. Cannot be carried with you
This style is very good, but the progress is a little slower. It is recommended to change the weapons.
As for the weapons, can you change the feel a little? This one is not very domineering. This style has always been a little more invincible. It's good. I think it should be replaced with a halberd or a gun, something like that. It's good.
Can you continue writing? ? ? I haven't seen enough, I want to know the plot behind it, and I don't want to be a eunuch.
The writing is good, but the content could be improved a bit.
If you are a novice writer, I personally feel that it is quite good to be able to write like this for the first time. If the author can, he can slightly optimize the plot content. There are some typos and so on. Although it does not affect reading, it still looks a bit awkward, so try to avoid them. Everyone has their own preferences for radishes and vegetables. I personally think this book is very good.
Was there a replacement later?
In the section where Ren Tingting appeared, was there a change of character? It's so hot on the back, damn it
Laughed hahahahaha
I started to eat bad money. The writing is so damn ugly.
I say hello in advance
Judging from the title of the book, does the protagonist start out as a protector? If yes, I'll watch it. If not, then I'll leave. I was deceived by a book about becoming an emperor at the beginning, but it turned out to be the martial arts version of Ten Meters in One Step.
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