Master Qiao An

Looking at several excellent Western fantasy novels that I like, they all have a distinct core. The Devil's Thief focuses on realistic descriptions to build that wonderful real Western fantasy society. Opening your mission log focuses on describing the constant reunions and separations between people, and satisfying your curiosity in the process of exploring the world. The Devil's Book aims to portray the hypocritical and cunning nature of the devil. This book is confusing, sometimes adventurous, sometimes involved in political and historical processes, sometimes involved in some kind of "obvious" big conspiracy. I personally think that there are two very important points in novels with the theme of mages. One is adventure, that is, freely traveling around the world and appreciating the novelty that different civilizations bring to you. The other is growth during the adventure process. Unfortunately, neither can be seen now.

This book is finally finished

He has a particularly weak character, is very loyal, and is emotionally fragile and sensitive. But other than that, the plot is very good in all aspects. It is the best DND novel I have ever seen. Five-star praise.

It's too ink-stained. Except for the first time I went to school to test hundreds of chapters, I haven't gone to school yet. I've been writing some unanswered questions.

The character of the protagonist is written with unique characteristics and will not be expanded casually. It slowly changes with age and becomes more and more independent. She is shy, angry, sad and happy. I have seen more than 2,000 people and I still don't know which female pig's foot is? Secondly, every supporting role, such as teachers, classmates, friends, etc., Is written very well. For example, the first mentor is amiable, an agricultural mage, and benefits society. It's a pity that he died, but he saved his soul and may be resurrected later! ? ! The second mentor is a gamer. He likes to make money by investing in stock funds, has M beautiful lovers, and studies undead virus plagues, etc. Story background The writing is a bit big, but so far there is no problem. I want to know how the author fills in the gaps. The main plot is the colonization of the New World and the stories that have to be told in the Old World. The end of various young kingdoms and old empires, kings and emperors. There is also a huge underground world, abyss VS heaven Emotional and passionate world The interests of the colonists and the aborigines, the friendship between the pig's trotters as descendants of the colonists and the aborigines, and the friendship between the colonists of the same status, who does the pig's trotters help? Shortcoming! ! ! How do other mages increase their intelligence after pig's feet are released? According to the pig's foot mage level 12, only 3 points are currently added. The other 20 mages are estimated to have 20-30 intelligence. However, the pig's trotter has an intelligence of over 40 and is only at level 12. Counting myth 6, the myth is too BG. Other myths are not as perverted and unreasonable as the pig's trotter. Also, I think the BG of the cloud network storing energy is a bit big. If you have money, wouldn't it just be a super fort that just throws away tens of thousands of spells? ? One man becomes an army? One versus a billion? Also, casually adding bloodline is not in line with your genes. If you add too much, you will definitely have a genetic conflict and you will die instantly. The smell is a bit common sense. If you say you have a good physique, you should at least have more than 100. Who would have thought that there are so many great mages at all times? Their physiques are not much different from yours. You can transform but they can't? You have myths, and so do others, but there are relatively few of them, and there are quite a few accumulated over thousands of years. No one develops mythical spells? Just kidding. PS The book is still highly recommended, but the writing on strength is a bit poor, much worse than other DND books. Although it is poor in this aspect, it cannot stand up to the author's good writing. I feel that this book should not be unknown.

Picking up artifacts at the beginning is nothing, but the setting where everything can be quantified is really unaccustomed to it. Everything can be known by looking inside, and the attributes can be increased by 2 points and 2 points. There is also a mission mode. It is too systematic and game-like. How can it be like this in life. I personally feel uncomfortable with it, but let's take a look

The left and right of the inner vision spell are actually equivalent to the data in the normal system, but there is a problem. Everyone can see the data. Will there still be conflicts and battles? If I see that your data is obviously higher than mine, will you still fight? In addition, can't data changes also be seen? Suddenly after a few days, your intelligence score increased by two points. Wouldn't others be surprised?

There is no core, and the protagonist's development is completely drifting, without a clear main line. The biggest role of supporting characters is to push the protagonist to get involved in various events. The most ridiculous thing is to forcefully get involved in various major events that are far beyond the scope of ability when the level is low. Survival depends entirely on the aura of the protagonist.

An interesting mage book. The plot and writing are very good, so why are there so few readers?

It's because the protagonist's character is not likable