
Pi: Starting from Being Called a Big Dog
About This Novel
Relying on the heroic spirit of his life, he shoots for the stars and the clouds. Remembering the Chu River and the Xiang Mountain, and the Wu Yun crossing the moon, they frequently enter the poem. Li Yunzhao, known as the Jiangzhou Succubus, was eaten to death by Lin Miaomiao. "Big dog, I want to eat this!"
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Official(13)Scraped 13d ago
Good looking,,,,,,,,,,, ten words to go to tnn, ten words to go to tnn
You are such a handsome female lead, you are really a genius, you are humorous, I give you 1 star, you are welcome.
To me personally, I feel that the author is too licking Lin Miaomiao. And the core of the whole book is the feeling that I want nothing but Lin Miaomiao.
What an idiot, completely fake.
Very good ah ah ah ah ah ah ah
The early part was very good, but the post-graduation part was a little worse. I felt like the author had no more work to write and could only finish it in a hurry. But overall it's pretty good, especially the four little ones are all positive. I hate those kind of intrigues, under the guise of lighthearted themes.
good
The first part was okay, but it felt too abrupt when I saw the "ghost hitting the wall" scene. The car accident was repeated in succession, and it suddenly changed from a youth romance novel to a science fiction and fantasy novel.
Very well written.
Next came the trial stage. I personally think there are three aspects. First of all, I have to admit that your writing is very good. To a large extent, it is consistent with the original work. Secondly, the protagonist is too perfect, with no flaws, or very few flaws. No matter how you read it, it sounds like a max-level hero coming to kill mobs. Then there are the male and female protagonists. Well, basically there are very few conflicts. And this slapstick is like flirting. The most serious one was just the protagonist's sudden confession. The heroine refused directly. We were separated for about a week. Only then did they understand each other's feelings, slowly. Come together. Finally, the ending is a little rushed. I think you should add more description on the wedding venue. It's just that this is too hasty.
Who is the heroine? Single or multiple heroines?
Personally I think it's okay, the relationship is pretty good
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Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 13d ago
Good looking,,,,,,,,,,, ten words to go to tnn, ten words to go to tnn
You are such a handsome female lead, you are really a genius, you are humorous, I give you 1 star, you are welcome.
To me personally, I feel that the author is too licking Lin Miaomiao. And the core of the whole book is the feeling that I want nothing but Lin Miaomiao.
What an idiot, completely fake.
Very good ah ah ah ah ah ah ah
The early part was very good, but the post-graduation part was a little worse. I felt like the author had no more work to write and could only finish it in a hurry. But overall it's pretty good, especially the four little ones are all positive. I hate those kind of intrigues, under the guise of lighthearted themes.
good
The first part was okay, but it felt too abrupt when I saw the "ghost hitting the wall" scene. The car accident was repeated in succession, and it suddenly changed from a youth romance novel to a science fiction and fantasy novel.
Very well written.
Next came the trial stage. I personally think there are three aspects. First of all, I have to admit that your writing is very good. To a large extent, it is consistent with the original work. Secondly, the protagonist is too perfect, with no flaws, or very few flaws. No matter how you read it, it sounds like a max-level hero coming to kill mobs. Then there are the male and female protagonists. Well, basically there are very few conflicts. And this slapstick is like flirting. The most serious one was just the protagonist's sudden confession. The heroine refused directly. We were separated for about a week. Only then did they understand each other's feelings, slowly. Come together. Finally, the ending is a little rushed. I think you should add more description on the wedding venue. It's just that this is too hasty.
Who is the heroine? Single or multiple heroines?
Personally I think it's okay, the relationship is pretty good









