Konoha Notes

From the beginning to now, seven of the ten sentences of the protagonist must be true. I came to read the novel, not to listen to the true principles. The plot is very bland (the good kind), like ordinary life. But there are too many great truths. Every time I meet someone, I will push a big truth. If I eliminate the great truths in the article, can only four tenths of them be left?

There is too much nonsense, and the way people live is different, and they say that they can try to change because they come too early (in the later stages of Naruto...), But in the face of the known Ben and Otsutsuki, they end up doing politics here, and there is no sense of exquisiteness in politics. It is dry. Many plots are redundant plots derived from the main plot, and even the redundant plots are used to serve politics. . . I didn't see much, I just saw Tsunade returning to the village. Feelings.

The first few chapters are interesting, but the writing is very heavy. Naruto is a fan, and each character has his own personality, but the author likes to write more details about life, food, training, battles, etc. It's good to have details, but too many will make things taste bad. The kind that reflects the importance of the protagonist but is too obvious, the supporting roles are a bit too much, in fact it would be nice to give a little information, and the feeling that makes people guess and look forward to the answer. It's much better than Xiaobai's article. Too many embellishments lead to unburnable fan fiction😕It's neither good nor bad! 😕

The writing is well crafted and has unique insights, but the character of the protagonist is really troublesome, like a dead fish without any emotion.

I think it's among the top 8 fanfics I've read. This novel was really written with my brain, not mindless or extremely passionate.

The author writes these stories from his own perspective, and they are quite delicate. I like to read them. I have read too many fanfics over the years, and there is nothing new. We don't care about the plot time, but it's from the perspective of the character's life. It's good. It depends on whether you can hold on. It will be great to continue writing. It's much better than ordinary Naruto fics.

It's a good slow-paced politicized version of Naruto. It's fun to watch and I'll watch more!

The advantage is that it is written very delicately, and various places are well described, making people want to read more. Disadvantages: As long as you don't touch the battle, everything looks like fairy grass... It has been exposed since the official battle in the Kingdom of Tea. It is not a good thing to write too detailed, at least it is like this during the battle. (Looking at the battle, it basically goes by in one stroke, which is too detailed... To use an analogy in football writing, the start of the fight is approximately equal to the start of the game, the goal is equal to the kill, and there is a series of masters' moves in the middle... Well, it is just like what I am complaining about now, it is long and meaningless) [Anyway, let's look at the performance later. Except for the fighting part, everything else is very good]

Well written, but too little. Every time I have to wait a few days to save a little and then watch again.

I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.