The Legend of the Condor Heroes

I don't want to tear down the cp yet. If you travel through a modern society, there is nothing wrong with playing this. You can wear ancient martial arts. Unless you are an ugly person. The illiterate people in the mountains don't know anything. Otherwise, you can easily feel that you are someone who can't get along with you. Otherwise, Huang Rong is around you since childhood. Your words and deeds, and forward-thinking people are around you every day. If you put yourself in Huang Rong's shoes, would you fall in love with Guo Jing? In the original book, why did Huang Rong end up with Guo Jing? Huang Rong had never been out of the island since she was a child and had no peers to accompany her. Guo Jing was honest and easy to bully. Guo Jing's martial arts at that time was also one of the best among young people. After a long time, he fell in love. How can it be achieved by adding up all these things? Then add a protagonist in the middle who has been with Huang Rong since childhood? With the guidance of one of the best masters of that era, you can't compare to a country bumpkin who just came to the city from the desert in all aspects? Brother, please take this advice and reincarnate as soon as possible? Can Huang Rong like Guo Jing? There is no one else for this protagonist. Even if the protagonist is clearly not with Huang Rong, she cannot fall in love with Guo Jing. Because of the comparison, she may not compare her father with her other half, but there is a peer of the opposite sex beside her, how can she not compare? After a comparison, I still chose a silly boy. What else does this protagonist have?

With this style of conduct, why would you write a time-traveler as the protagonist? It's useless at all, and it makes people feel out of place and impossible to replace.

It is not difficult to see from the writing style that there are high traces of imitation. This is also the reason why it can attract old martial arts fans. Using sentences from the book, could this guy be a descendant of Jin Yong? Of course, there are also micro-innovations in addition to this, such as borrowing the timeline of the Condor Shooting. You can bring out the characters of the divine sculpture a little bit. But the most attractive part is Huang Yaoshi's Peach Blossom Island, Winter Shoes. As long as it doesn't fail to be written, this book should be worthy of a classic name. I certainly won't give any opinions or suggestions, because a story exists in itself. It's just that the story is written out with the pen in the author's hand, that's all. I still hope that the author can write freely and freely.

It's completely plagiarized, with no content of my own at all.

Overall, there is no problem. Is the author's history learned from Jin Yong? If you don't understand history in depth enough, it is recommended that you write less about this aspect.

The writing style is very good, and it has the flavor of old-school martial arts, but it should not be written that the protagonist has traveled through time, otherwise why would the protagonist not take Mei Chaofeng's Nine Yin Manual? Even if Mei Chaofeng didn't take the Nine Yin Manual because he saved him, why didn't he take the Viper that increased his internal strength? If you don't take advantage of the known evil opportunities, then what's the point of traveling through time!

It's very readable, as if I'm back to when I read Gu Long thirty years ago. 😹😹😹

Does the author want the protagonist to travel through every martial arts novel one by one? It feels like you have to drink a glass of water every day. I am really speechless. I think it would be better if you broke this book into multiple novels.

Personally, I think it's very good. It has a martial arts flavor and is worth reading. Many good articles are ruined by one star.

Okay, I admit that I am an LSP. So your book cannot attract me.