I'm Hiding Opposite Uncle Jiu
by Chuanyuan
About This Novel
[The new book "My Dad's Mental Illness" is released. Time and space supervisor Liu Feng accidentally reborn into Uncle Nine's era in order to deal with the nightmare that reappears every five hundred years. What confused him was that he was reborn in a zombie and lived across the street from the zombie Taoist Master Jiu Shu...
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Official(14)Scraped 7d ago
Do zombies still have heartbeats?
In fact, the material is quite good, but there are too many story lines.
There are so many story lines, and if you don't write it clearly at all, your whole story will be ruined. I don't know why the author is so bold to write this kind of story and this kind of novel. Speaking from my experience of reading books for so many years, there is a scene where the protagonist breaks into a place where many people are using computers. In fact, I think this story has fallen apart. Because it gets harder to write as you get to the end, and it will probably collapse after 100 chapters. And it's not the kind of novel I expected. Anyway, I'll just give you an opinion, it's up to you, although the more I read, the more fascinated I become. Overall, the story line is good, but the more I read, the more confused I became. You didn't write many details clearly. People have the illusion of not knowing why. Because you don't know what the next step is, what he writes, what he means, and why. Anyway, overall, I was fascinated by this. Alas, it's up to you. Anyway, it was you who wrote it, not me. I'll just give you an opinion.
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Uncle Jiu doesn't live in Yizhuang, and the door opposite is probably not a funeral home.
The more I read, the more fascinated I became, the plot was confusing, and I felt like I was going to collapse.
Pretty good subject matter.
It's difficult~
Why should you blame others when the protagonist dies? Whether he knows it or not, he is being cannon fodder, but he is weak and cannot blame others for being strong. If he doesn't know, it can only mean that life and death are determined by fate, and wealth is determined by heaven. He signed up because of his own enthusiasm, and no one threatened him, so he had the nerve to blame others. If he is strong enough, he can defeat the enemy and become the general whose achievements are worth tens of thousands. Okay, that's it. I didn't read the rest. If you have any other objections, you are welcome to refute.
The writing is too messy
It's so messy, it makes my head hurt just looking at it.
make fun of
Write happily and everyone will read happily. In online literature, the most important thing is to make readers happy.
It was quite fun to write, except that the protagonist initially complained about the people in the Space-Time Bureau being a little brainless, but I quite liked the protagonist's character.
first floor
First floor sofa sofa sofa sofa
Too messy
It's too messy, you can't say the idea is bad, right? You can only say that the writing is so fascinating and fascinating. It feels like there should be an outline and it is just written. . How can I say it? It's hard to put it into words.
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Official(14)Scraped 7d ago
Do zombies still have heartbeats?
In fact, the material is quite good, but there are too many story lines.
There are so many story lines, and if you don't write it clearly at all, your whole story will be ruined. I don't know why the author is so bold to write this kind of story and this kind of novel. Speaking from my experience of reading books for so many years, there is a scene where the protagonist breaks into a place where many people are using computers. In fact, I think this story has fallen apart. Because it gets harder to write as you get to the end, and it will probably collapse after 100 chapters. And it's not the kind of novel I expected. Anyway, I'll just give you an opinion, it's up to you, although the more I read, the more fascinated I become. Overall, the story line is good, but the more I read, the more confused I became. You didn't write many details clearly. People have the illusion of not knowing why. Because you don't know what the next step is, what he writes, what he means, and why. Anyway, overall, I was fascinated by this. Alas, it's up to you. Anyway, it was you who wrote it, not me. I'll just give you an opinion.
.
Uncle Jiu doesn't live in Yizhuang, and the door opposite is probably not a funeral home.
The more I read, the more fascinated I became, the plot was confusing, and I felt like I was going to collapse.
Pretty good subject matter.
It's difficult~
Why should you blame others when the protagonist dies? Whether he knows it or not, he is being cannon fodder, but he is weak and cannot blame others for being strong. If he doesn't know, it can only mean that life and death are determined by fate, and wealth is determined by heaven. He signed up because of his own enthusiasm, and no one threatened him, so he had the nerve to blame others. If he is strong enough, he can defeat the enemy and become the general whose achievements are worth tens of thousands. Okay, that's it. I didn't read the rest. If you have any other objections, you are welcome to refute.
The writing is too messy
It's so messy, it makes my head hurt just looking at it.
make fun of
Write happily and everyone will read happily. In online literature, the most important thing is to make readers happy.
It was quite fun to write, except that the protagonist initially complained about the people in the Space-Time Bureau being a little brainless, but I quite liked the protagonist's character.
first floor
First floor sofa sofa sofa sofa
Too messy
It's too messy, you can't say the idea is bad, right? You can only say that the writing is so fascinating and fascinating. It feels like there should be an outline and it is just written. . How can I say it? It's hard to put it into words.
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