During Those Years When I Was Fishing in Zhenwu Division

The description of human nature and sophistication is quite good, and I really want to continue reading it. But I agreed, and the performance turned out to be particularly outstanding. The most unbearable thing is that the upgrade is too slow. I only upgraded to Tempered Body after it was put on the shelves, and I lost all desire to watch it. It turns out that Gou is slow to upgrade. He is afraid of being discovered that he upgrades quickly, so he can save more attribute points and upgrade at critical times.

There's the salted fish that was obviously promised! The early stage was fine! It can also be said that there is no way! In the later stage, it is extremely wasteful! If it weren't for pig's feet! I don't know how many times I have died. I just said it, the protagonist is going to marry a saint again! Since I said I want salted fish! In the end, I didn't do a single thing about Xianyu, it was not Xianyu's business! But they all did it! For example, I am currently writing a competition to recruit a bride! You can't write it like that! Something was stolen! Wei Guo also wants to investigate! And Wei also wants this item! Send someone from the Soul Palace realm! You are just a little shrimp! The ending saves the saint. Competition to recruit a bride! The supreme saint wins! I chose you because I thought you were more pleasing to the eye.

The medicine refining system in the book is not perfect. With such a good system, the protagonist can completely rely on elixirs to improve his strength. It shouldn't be like going to the drugstore to buy herbs and boil them. Can't elixirs be used? Aren't elixirs easier to measure than herbal medicines? The protagonist added too much poison to the medicine he prepared. The protagonist gave the medicine to others in the early stage. The medicine soup was so much missing, but it still had the same effect as before? The title of the book says "笱", but I can't tell where the "笱" is at all? Since the protagonist is immortal, can the time span be wider? After all, the author is already immortal and the author still feels like he is racing against time to fill the plot.

After reading dozens of chapters, I am still in the early stages of physical training. There are golden fingers and hairy ones, but I don't want to improve my level.

The worldview is unreasonable and uncomfortable to watch. As mentioned earlier, those who can enter the Zhenwu Division are all geniuses. A group of qualified ones can be eliminated, and only one out of ten can break through the physical training within a year. However, it takes several years to even get started with the lowest level of ancient martial arts. Half a month of training is not as good as absorbing a low-grade Yuan Stone. A mid-training person is almost seriously injured by a piece of silver thrown by a late-level training person. Still without the use of martial arts, is it possible that a late-stage Martial Emperor can easily kill a mid-stage Martial Emperor. A big family in a town can only report to the government when faced with bandits who have no warriors, just like a town with tens of thousands of people can't produce a single warrior. Is this kind of world reasonable?

There is something wrong with the world view, the country's armed forces are so useless, the talent selection situation is so wide, and they were killed so miserably by a few wild men. Is it really a lie that the country has not yet been destroyed despite being so wasteful?

The uncle has more than 90 cards and it's still early days

From the second chapter to nearly half of the 100th chapter of the novel, the male protagonist's strength is still stagnant at the early stage of the ninth grade. With such a level, he dares to play high-level roles above the fifth grade and is still controlled. The author conceived such a narrative, what was the point of writing it? Where's the fun? After experiencing such a huge plot, the hero's strength is still at the early stage of the ninth level. The narrative of the first fifty chapters seems to be redundant, like a running account. After dozens of chapters of nonsense, the improvement of the realm is minimal. The male protagonist is unable to promote the progress of the plot. As a result, after taking a hundred steps at the beginning of the whole story, he finally took back ninety-nine steps. In fact, he only made one step forward. This narrative technique is really boring. The reasonable arrangement of the plot should be that before the protagonist experiences this important plot, his cultivation level should be at least promoted to the middle to late stage of the ninth level. In this way, the protagonist can show his due strength when facing the climax of the plot. As the story progresses, the protagonist finally reaches the ninth level of perfection, and his martial arts and sideline abilities in all aspects should also be greatly improved. Only in this way can readers have expectations for whether he can break through the eighth level copper skin realm. The author must understand that in the novel, the system upgrade and the world of immortality are laid out, and the four stages of initial, middle, late, and perfection are divided between the ninth level and the first level. If within a hundred chapters, the protagonist fails to break through the threshold of the ninth grade, then this kind of narrative will inevitably make people feel like deliberately delaying the plot to fill up the story. In order to make up for it, the pit of system upgrade should at least be filled through the experience of cultivating the immortal world, and the protagonist's cultivation level should be upgraded to the level of the Immortal Emperor. If the author's layout is for the protagonist to slowly upgrade in the early stage and then suddenly achieve a big jump in the later stage, then such a narrative strategy may cause the entire story structure to collapse. This ended in a bad way, directly claiming that the system had some connection with Tiandao Jade, and then ended hastily. If you really write it like this, you will definitely get a lot of criticism. This approach will directly lower the grade of the entire novel, making it appear rough and incomplete.

He's already immortal, can't he just be honest? Must waste. I read more than 50 chapters twice at a time and gave up the book decisively.

He is obviously supposed to be a secrecy person, but he always likes to take the initiative to tell the truth. After suffering a loss once, he still wants to tell the truth. I am really convinced! There are also always words in the writing that must not reveal the secret of immortality. Who can know this thing, unless you have a fairy spirit that spreads over people and spreads fragrance everywhere.