Journey to the Stars

The protagonist obviously has other women (Su Yuezhi, Yin Hexi from the True Immortal Realm, a third-level succubus maid, a girl from the Astrology Tower), but he lost his virginity of hundreds of years on a broken shoe, and he has a better relationship with Su Yuezhi, and as the Lord of the Four Stars, it's not like he can't find a woman. He was married, but he gave up his virginity to a woman who was probably his brother Yang Zi (and he didn't know how many times he had been fucked by others before he had sex. From Chapter 140, "Is it more important, the brother or the woman?", The temptation was so obvious, and he even shook it hard, bah, shameless thing). In more than 400 chapters, he fell in love with the woman Xie Yun. What was even weirder was the time when the protagonist confessed his virginity. When the woman's secretary went in to clean up, she still felt that the woman was not worth it. Damn, how thick-faced do you have to think like this! That woman herself acted like a hostess. Oh my god, what kind of person was she? She didn't even have some AC in her heart! In short, apart from compiling a cultivation system, this book is passable. The description of the protagonist, the description of his emotions, and the behavior of his backer when the protagonist is in trouble are all rubbish and leave people speechless. Alas, I still haven't read enough books. I even used my brain when reading this book. I was drunk myself...

I think it's quite interesting that the system in the book requires awakening. It means that those who have the strength awakening system will be better after awakening the system, while those who don't have the strength awakening system will always be like that. This is where the discrepancy comes from.

I haven't watched much at the beginning, but the problem is already obvious. There are too many setting issues. 1 There is no telling whether the exchange rate of gold coins or silver coins is true. It's all guesswork. 2 Then he said that sea monster eggs are more valuable, and ended up selling 20 fragments (book friends estimate tens of millions), and everyone got 10 fragments for free. I don't know if I will become a millionaire. 3 As for the exercises and so on, the fourth and fifth levels are advanced exercises, so how do you write for the more than ten levels in the future? Infinite-magic technique? And how valuable is Xian Bu Lun, a high-level person, who can buy a sea monster egg for tens of millions? You have already ordered something, so you, an ordinary person, are really a little bit different from a professional! Do I have to spend all the money in the world to buy the higher-end ones? And just to replace someone with poor talent who can't even reach the first level? If you find someone with 2 stars, he will definitely go for it. Why not? That means that high-level exercises are bad, and the concept of money has collapsed. It means that the high-level skills and above are at least tens of millions. 4 Since the second level is in charge of trains, there are so many trains, how about you? The combat power is also really bad. I was given a setting at the beginning. The second level is so difficult. . . . I don't know how to fix it either 5 If high-level skills are really rare, and high-level skills are really good and rare, refer to the above two points and use your brain. The second level is running all over the ground. A high-level book will cost at least tens of millions. 6 Only a few pictures at the beginning have already appeared things that have appeared in thousands of chapters. The water outside the territory is really deep. You are also awesome. I have laid some things out in the front. It is obvious that the protagonist is a FW, but there is no way to quickly level up. I don't know that I have to write thousands of chapters to see it. 7 There's some kind of thunderous body-building technique that his parents left behind. It's really good. At seven o'clock a year, he does it a little bit a day. Isn't he satisfied? ? ? Still think it's too slow? If you say he is too slow to achieve his goals, I can understand, but people's mentality will change. I understand, but not that fast! 8 The pace is super fast, only a few dozen chapters, and the protagonist already has two good things. The difference in talent means that the book will not be fast in the early stages, and there is no golden finger, but he, the protagonist, acquires treasures very quickly. He has a slow-paced talent and a fast-paced routine. 9 To sum up, the author's writing style is okay, and it doesn't feel like a novice. However, this kind of fantasy really depends on the setting. I don't know if he is a novice, but this setting is more novice than novice. I suggest you write about Xianxia first, check the relevant settings and read related books. This setting is really outrageous. 10 The details are not particularly good. For example, in the Bronze Cross Society, when the chapter is gone, it can be written more mysteriously. I think it should be foreshadowing, but the author did not rewrite it, and the rules are not particularly good. When I was arguing, I felt that only recognizing the chapter but not the person? So if I kill this member of the association and take his stamp, will others not attack me? In the end, I still hope that the author can write better and better and be successful.

To be honest, it's really great. I feel like it's on par with those very popular books. I've been a bookworm for ten years and like this book very much. That's why I'm talking about the two chapters of this book. If I don't like it, I won't even give it a book review. Come on, author.

Su Yan's excellence is that he can always find the most comfortable way to live in his current environment. For example, after joining the Luo family, he chose to open the Luo family's Silong Purchase branch in the city. In this way, he was not staying in the Luo family, but he was also looking for opportunities for himself.

The subject matter and setting of this book are very interesting, but I feel that my strength is not good enough and I feel that my strength has always been at the bottom! One thing is that as soon as I started practicing this book, I was in retreat at every turn, and once I retreated, it was calculated on a yearly basis. After reaching the first level, I thought I would be more awesome, and I was ready to invade the world. However, I was trapped as soon as I entered. I stayed trapped for 2 months. It felt boring after seeing this!

Overall, yes. I like this framework very much, but I hope it can be written more rigorously. There are too many unreasonable things. First, the small world you get only has so few resources. Second, is my wife's sister worthy of your help? Later, she raises her hand to you and hides from her sister. She is disappointed. Third, there is a bug in the competition that occurs once every 500 years. If you want to improve your strength, you can write it from another angle, instead of giving up in exchange for time. 😎Fourth, the biggest poisonous point, you get the world coordinates of the fairy world, and instead of using it as your own back garden to develop, you just pretend to be 13 at someone else's birthday party and just tell it? Just a transaction tax of 1/100,000? And it can't improve its strength immediately. To be honest, I really am not in the mood to read anymore after seeing this. That's it

There is no intention, and there are many poisonous points. Why do you want to help your friend's sister when he causes trouble? Since his parents can peel off his skin, it means they are capable, but the parents don't care? He also said that the sister is a ghost, and forcibly creates a persona?

I tell you what I think is poorly written and you delete the review directly? So what do you do with setting up an evaluation, even if you just state your opinions?

I rarely give rewards, and I don't give rewards on other books. I really like this free book.