After Becoming a Master of Martial Arts, I Became a Cultivator of Immortality

The protagonist is looking for trouble and kills officers and soldiers before his wings are strong. If he doesn't make good use of his talent, he will join a sect first and then he will be a bandit in the mountains. Forget it and stop watching it.

I read Chapter 4 and it was so toxic that I couldn't even read a little bit.

The subject matter is not bad, but I feel that the direction is biased. Although there is a market for reversal of abuse articles, the requirements for writing will be very high. The author still needs to be stable in the early stage and slowly transition. This way, although it will not be very explosive, it can still retain some people. Now I feel that I don't retain many people. The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

The subject matter is novel, I like this type very much.

After watching a little bit, it's another protagonist looking for trouble.

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

First of all, from the first few chapters, it is obvious that the author is a newcomer and does not have much life experience, and he does not know how to use current AI to learn some common sense... There was a flood at the beginning of the story, and a 10-year-old child, instead of setting up a dead fish that had been dead for a few days, and met a bear weighing about a hundred pounds, it would be better to be more direct, just happen to encounter a dying fish, and then pick it up (the fish was eaten alive after it had been dead in the flood for several days... And everything turned out to be fine later on.) Then there is the opening plot, which to be honest is a bit too boring... It feels like a book from a long time ago. First of all, in the ancient setting, for thousands of years, the morale of the elite legions collapsed when the battle losses exceeded 20%, and they basically started to flee after 30%... Not to mention a group of bandits, the guards could beat them all to death... The guards even took their lives to protect the so-called little master and escape. Without the intervention of the protagonist, it is obvious that he is destined to die... In the real world, many young emperors who have perished are not treated like this... The illustrations in the novel are cool, but it would be better if there was some relatively basic logic. Especially if the plug-in you write is similar to a computer (second brain), it focuses on analysis and calculation. In particular, I took a look at the comment section and said it was a bit abusive... It's not necessarily a sadistic novel. Maybe the author just wants to add some training to the protagonist's growth to make it look more real. The problem is that since he wants to be real, any supporting character should actually treat him as a human being. When they encounter similar problems, they are not stupid NPCs who rush to die without thinking. They can also run and know tricks. For such small characters, you give them a normal brain. Children, the protagonist's normal escape or defeating them can all reflect that the protagonist is smarter, stronger, and has grown... You simply reduce the intelligence of the surroundings, as if the protagonist has an IQ. To be honest, this is the way that novice writers wrote many years ago. Nowadays, most popular authors, even novice writers, will appropriately give corresponding brains to supporting characters...

I only read the first chapter, and I died of poison before even finishing it. What kind of dead wood can stop the erosion of the flood, and this dead wood can be carried by a person who has been hungry for a long time. Don't talk about floods like this kind of dead wood. Have you ever seen floods in spring and summer in our south?

What idiot writes like a running account?

Come on, author, I have good faith in you and look forward to this book...