Dou Po: the Doom System is Bound to the Beginning
About This Novel
Travel through time and space, become the young master of the Mittel family, and be bound to the doom system. Level 1 system, making the other party suffer bad luck through transactions. Level 2 system, those who are hostile to the host will be shrouded in bad luck. Level 3 system, physical touch or attack can bring bad luck to the enemy... [Drip! If a villain becomes hostile to you, your legs and hands will be broken! ][Drop! There is a fighting emperor who is malicious to you and is seriously injured! ][Drop! The people in the Hall of Souls hate you so much that they will be driven to pieces! ] Ning Yu was sitting at home drinking tea, innocently spreading his hands: This world is still too dangerous. A few years later, Ning Yu relied on his unparalleled talent to quickly defeat Emperor Dou, shocking the whole world. Xiao Yan was shocked: What kind of evil cultivator is this! How come you can practice so fast? The Soul Emperor lamented: I wanted to bully the young and kill him, but when I took action, I felt something terrible. The little medical fairy admires: He is indeed brother Ning Yu~
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Official(3)Scraped 13d ago
After reading Chapter 22, you can be sure that the author has not read the original work.
The writing is messy, and he actually used fists to deal with the strange fire! You don't even need naling to refine the strange fire.
Well, the protagonist is directly Liu Xiahui and the author feels that you didn't write carefully and a lot of the plot is weird. Also, if you can't continue writing, just end it. The skin of the book is not good. I have a suggestion for you. The subject matter and outline of the book are still good. If you change and optimize the details, it will be good to release a new book.
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 13d ago
After reading Chapter 22, you can be sure that the author has not read the original work.
The writing is messy, and he actually used fists to deal with the strange fire! You don't even need naling to refine the strange fire.
Well, the protagonist is directly Liu Xiahui and the author feels that you didn't write carefully and a lot of the plot is weird. Also, if you can't continue writing, just end it. The skin of the book is not good. I have a suggestion for you. The subject matter and outline of the book are still good. If you change and optimize the details, it will be good to release a new book.
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