Xiao Yan, the Emperor's Son Who Fights Against the Sky

I walked around with two Half-Saints every day. They were like foxes, tigers, and dogs, but they relied on the power of others. They were dozens of years old and still had the character of a child. So why bother to come out and just let people grab the strange fire? Such a character would not be able to stay on the list even if he became an emperor and went to the world. Xiao Yan in the original work went through all kinds of hardships to develop into a tough, unyielding, affectionate and righteous Emperor Yan. You can only see a man who relies on family power to bully others. You may think that writing like this will make everyone laugh, but in fact, the quality of the protagonist's character is the soul that determines the quality of a book. (Emperor Huang Tian of the Perfect World, Emperor Ye Tian of Covering the Sky) If the protagonist is positioned as a decent character, then he should not do things like brainless villains. He comes to hurt other disciples, and forces them to recruit disciples to rob them. Do you really think Yao Lao (proud, who would rather die than cooperate with the Soul Palace) would accept it with peace of mind?

I feel that this book has lost 3/10 of its readers because of the heroine. In our eyes, the heroine can keep up with the protagonist, instead of being like a vase that has to be watered every day. As the first tribe of ancient races, why can't we find a woman? Do you have to find a Douhuang old aunt over 35 years old? Still a white-eyed wolf, and a 20-year-old with some fighting spirit. To be honest, I didn't write Yun Yun to death. I felt a little bit poisonous. I went to read the original book "Betrayal of Allies" and "Ungrateful". I saw that this book has multiple female protagonists, and 100% will accept Yun Yun. I can barely be poisoned if I accept Yun Yun. I can continue reading, but you accept Ya Fei and I can't stand it. You feel that the Xiao clan has too many resources, right? The Ya Fei in the original book Knowing that Xiao Yan has a girlfriend, he still seduces her, so there is no so-called hard feelings, and there is no so-called loneliness. Some people just want old cows to eat young grass, and supporting roles are supporting roles. Tudou has written their characters clearly, but Tudou did not accept the little medical fairy.

I have a bold idea. After Xiao Yan becomes emperor, Lin Dong has not yet developed. At this time, he goes to Tianxuan Continent to collect Ying Huanhuan and Ling Qingzhu

The front is pretty good... The time-traveling girl added at the end feels like a real failure. The concept of introducing the extraterrestrial devil in advance feels okay, but it's not a bit too early.

Well, fuck it! How did Xiao Xuan know how to fight against the sky? What a boring thing you are doing! Wouldn't Emperor Dou be promoted to the main world? It has remained in Douqi Continent for thousands of years. Have you read the original work?

Isn't the Pure Lotus Demon Fire already in the Xiao clan? Why do we still need the map fragments?

Just like %%, Xun'er in the original book came because of ancient jade, Xiao Xuan became emperor, and Xiao Xuan couldn't get it from ancient jade. Why is Xun'er in the Xiao family? What does she want to do, what does the ancient clan want to do, and the protagonist directly brings two semi-sage strongmen to become apprentices? What kind of ** article is this? Did the author not include ** when he wrote it, or did he think that our original party did not use **, just write it randomly

If you want to write a fan novel, first read through the original work, and then look at readers' posts and some corresponding fan novels. Then I re-wrote the original novel with my own ideas. Since most novels do not have any pitfalls before and after, for example, who has more routes in Wu Dong Qian Kun than Nei Gong, the latter part is completely gone, etc. Finally, write a fanfic based on the original work you wrote. There is no way this book could exist. It is time-consuming, not profitable, and a waste of effort. It has never been possible, and it will never be possible in the future.

As the young patriarch of the First Imperial Clan, he came all the way to the Jia Ma Empire to pick up a 30-year-old Dou Huang who was a bastard who betrayed the sect and his allies. Why did he come with me? It was a pity. Only certain Silver Insects would regard these as regrets. He did save Yun Yun in the Warcraft Mountains, but then he went to the Kakel Desert. Yun Yun's cultivation level could have killed him, and he was called by "Ancient River". So they are opposites but there is a life-saving grace, so don't kill "Even", but the most surprising thing is that Xiao Yan kissed her and sent the strange fire directly. Furukawa worked hard for this woman and joined the Yunlan Sect as an elder for five or six years. There is no love but also bitterness, right? If he directly rejects Furukawa, he will probably go to Zhongzhou and try his best to enter the Dan Pagoda and have a great chance of becoming a seventh-grade alchemist. To put it bluntly, he just doesn't like him, and he feels that Xiao Yan's talent is so good and mysterious. He has seen with his own eyes that he can burst into Douhuang cultivation. Can he not want the old cow to eat young grass? As the leader of the Yunnan Sect, he has to consider the sect. The previous kindness has been repaid, so he has to consider the sect. After all, he has raised you for so long. However, during the pursuit, he was warmed by Xiao Yan and gave up immediately. If you say this, you will definitely be scolded to some extent, but if you look carefully at the original work, the problem is really quite big, so I am very disgusted with this woman and avoid her in the fandom. A person can be selfish and ruthless but cannot have a bottom line. As long as he gives the strange fire to Furukawa to pay back those five or six years, this is more or less acceptable.

I feel like the concept should be okay, but I'm really annoyed by harem stories, especially this kind of stallion-like one that I really can't stand.