Red Dead Redemption: Golden Empire

With the background of western cowboys, there is no Chinese in the drama.

The name is too dramatic, I can't stand it

Three stars encourages you. If you still can't figure out what world you're writing about and what kind of person the protagonist should be in your next book, you don't have to stick to the author's path. Just write it as a hobby and don't worry about whether it's on the shelves or whether it's good or bad. Let's talk about the problems that have arisen in the 30 chapters of your book that I've read so far. 1. Protagonist The ability, without any foreshadowing, he suddenly had a dead eye. Second, the character of the protagonist was shaped. There was no description of the experience in the previous 20 years. He had no idea why an ordinary person would turn into a murderous guy. Third, the inexplicable feelings. He only met the girl once in total, and he didn't have any conversation, so he ran to rob the prison? If you were so crazy and so fond of me, why didn't you kidnap me the first time you were pointed at a gun? Fourth, the extremely serious Chinese oral habit is more serious than the above three combined. It can easily lead to drama. Do you have an understanding of your own work? You are writing about a white gangster in the western United States, not the Liangshan Bandits of China, nor a Chinese gangster, but a white gangster. The protagonist has a Chinese accent, even if other white people also use a Chinese accent. I can still accept the first three points without thinking about it, but they are just trivial points and have little impact. But the fourth point will be played every minute, okay?

If Pigfoot started to join the family from Snow Mountain, there would still be a chance to separate the family after Hosea died. In the early stage, Hosea was still there, Dutch, Hosea, Arthur, the big three, it was really not that easy to separate the family. As soon as they came down from Snow Mountain, Pigfoot wanted to take Arthur and John with him, it was completely impossible to separate the family.

In this novel, the protagonist is not completely decisive in killing, but sometimes has that inexplicable Virgin Heart. What? Do you have to disgust the readers? Can't you kill thoroughly and decisively? Also, as I said before, the main character is the basic ability, but you, the author, didn't explain it at all. What abilities does the protagonist have? What did you experience at first? A blank face is just a blank face. By the way, can't you explain it? It's equivalent to building a house. You don't even lay the foundation before you start repairing the house. To be honest, the whole process is based on exploration. My scalp feels numb when I see it. When reading this novel, 40% of my attention was thinking about the protagonist's background and abilities. Also, to be honest, these 90 photos are really tiring to look at. The protagonist wants cheats, but there are no cheats. Is it ruthless enough? Oops. Basically, it's neither good nor bad. I don't understand what the author thinks? I am really tired. Forget it, don't read it, it's a disgusting batch. There are more than 90 pictures, and no meat is included. What a fucking virgin Oops, what a great review. In the Western world view, and it was still in that era, if you can still maintain your integrity, you are really a talent.

Why do Western novels always have yellow protagonists?

I read Chapter 30 and evaluated it. What I wrote above is okay, but one criticism is that if the setting of having memories when traveling back in time is added, it may be more acceptable to most people and they will continue to read. Without memories, it feels like a stuck in the throat, just like the feeling of trying to fit into the plot of Red Dead Redemption.

I'm taking two days off. I'll resume updating in 7.3. I hope you can understand.

The book Salted Fish is also serialized and has nearly 500,000 words. I have always thanked all my dear brothers for their support and subscription (bow). Although the male protagonist's name is criticized and the plot also has many flaws, I still want to thank the brothers who have been following up and saving it. I cannot thank you enough. ----Please ask for monthly tickets at the end of the month Next is the idea for the next book. I'm asking for opinions. Do you want to read the story of the universe of Rockstar's GTA series? Or the story of Birmingham during the British Razor Party (I didn't say it was going to be finished. This book is worth a million).

I took a few days off for the National Day. I'm back now, brothers😈