Hp Dark Ages

First of all, let's not talk about why Voldemort went to China. I can also understand that magic is related to Baihe? The wands are smaller than the white crane. The older the white crane is, the more magic power it can give back? It's a really incomprehensible setting. Others just change their wands and play, but you change to a white crane and start over? The article is about the Dark Ages, but the description of China really dissuades me, let alone all of them dead. Voldemort is only the second generation of the Dark Lord, and this Dark Lord still has such a self-goal. Not to mention, besides being difficult to kill, is Voldemort really powerful? He split his soul, but this did not cause his magic power to weaken, it was just that his body could not bear it. So according to this setting, Voldemort is really not strong. Most of the victories described in the Harry Potter books basically rely on the Death Eaters' noble status and pervasive numbers and abilities to achieve the ultimate goal. Of course, Voldemort is not weak, but now that I see it, I still feel that the author's early description was too deified of Voldemort, and too much based on the white crane setting, which was extremely weakened. I don't know why the existing plot was placed in China. There must be my subjective thoughts in this, but I have also read a lot of articles, and the descriptions really made me feel very uncomfortable, not the kind of discomfort that Dark Wind feels like. Of course, you can also say that the pen is given to you and you write. Or maybe this is a fan fiction or something. Or is it too serious?

In the original work of Voldemort, he caused panic in the UK. It was nothing in Europe. He was a psychopath who split his soul. He was far inferior to Grindelwald in all aspects. It was quite unreasonable to kill the minister at the World Cup in France. As a result, he went to China again. He killed a few and was suppressed. Then he killed a white crane and then counterattacked. No support from the Chinese side? I don't see any need for this paragraph. Later there is a sealed dragon. But you are the author and you are awesome. If we don't like to read it, we can only stop reading it. Bye bye.

Mr. And Mrs. Potter are still dead, Mr. And Mrs. Longbottom are still crazy, Peter Pedro is still hiding in the Weasley family for more than ten years; Regulus Black is alive and clean, Albus Dumbledore is alive, Barty Crouch Jr. Is clean and alive, and Sirius Black is alive without being wronged. That's probably it

If you give a three-star book review, it will be deleted. Why not just stipulate that only five-star reviews are allowed? What's the difference between a cat covering its poop? If the suggestions I make are not pertinent, people will naturally criticize me. Is this because I feel guilty? It's not just deletion, but it's also banned. It's such a big official power🙃

There is no time travel, no system, and no rebirth. Indeed, there are some parts of this book that are worthy of criticism, but this cannot obscure its brilliance. It tells the story of a little wizard starting from receiving a letter from Hogwarts and ending with sending his daughter to Hogwarts, a half-life of an HP aborigine. After reading the entire book, it feels like I have followed him and witnessed everything. Friends who like hp must not miss ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It's really great! This fanfic is really beautiful

The writing style is very good and the author is very hardworking. Why doesn't anyone read it?

What a great book!

Collected, will look at it later when I have time

I think writing about this trip to China is really not good, and whether it is the fire dragon or those white-robed men, they are all pretending and then being beaten to death. Voldemort becomes stronger every time after running out of magic power, which makes people feel frustrated. It is better to just let Voldemort kill them in the first place!