Mortal: Start from the Portable Space

Mortal: Start from the Portable Space

by Sanhe Laoju

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96Kwords45chapters
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Traveling through the mortal world Su Qingxian has taken a different path! With the formation as the basis and the kung fu as the supplement! PS: Newbies need to take care of themselves when writing books. If they don't do it well, just tell them directly. I can bear it.

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Book Friend 20230714732_ab34mo ago

Stopped updating?

There has been no update for several days. Are you going to stop writing?

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书友20230629103_ed34mo ago

What a rubbish writing

I explained it in the first chapter, but it was not mentioned later on until the foundation building stage. It was not reflected in the increase in the annual effect of the medicine as the cultivation level increases. Did you write this with you?

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🔥Out of curiosity about Mr. Han, I watched him when he was a child The ancestor concluded: This should be regarded as a fanfic. The protagonist traveled through the novel "The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality". In this world and background, as a visitor from another world, he fully understood the outline of the novel's story and knew the plot direction, so he cared for Han Li in his childhood. Seeing that he was alive and well, the protagonist was relieved, and all he had to do was follow closely. 1️⃣Recommended: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 2️⃣Work information: Word count: 9W (serial) Tags: Time Travel, Goldfinger, Mortal World 2️⃣Tweet: Highlight 1: The storyline revolves around the protagonist, but the protagonist is trying his best to avoid historical errors and reduce the impact on Old Demon Han. Point 2: The same people, different stories, a large number of characters appearing in the novel, but the protagonist knows their personality characteristics because they have read the novel. They are male and female. If the relationship is good, the relationship can be closer. If the relationship is not good, they can be killed directly by attacking their weaknesses. Point 3: The setting of the Golden Finger is interesting. It is more powerful than the Palm Sky Bottle in the early stage. It is directly a space where you can plant things and accelerate growth. Flaw 1: I don't know if the author has read the Mortal Immortal Realm chapter. If so, it should be clear that Han Li at this time is just the clone of the boss and was sent back. At the same time, Nangong Wan came back. Both of them are boss-level existences in the fairy world. Isn't it true that the protagonist is not afraid of cause and effect when he hangs around Han Li? If he is sensed, he can be killed directly through cause and effect? There are many people who play chess with Han Li, and they are all beings who have a deep understanding of the laws of time. In the Immortal World chapter, Han Li went back to the past to kill his childhood enemy. Slot 2: This Heaven Palm Vase was actually brought back by Han Tianzun in the future. At this point in time, aren't you afraid of meeting Han Tianzun? At this time, Han Tianzun was the one who suppressed the immortal world.

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