Gou Becomes a Big Boss in the Fairy World

Selling sheep's head for dog meat, pretending to be cool, going out with the clan to kill people, killing someone's father, and still knowing that someone has hatred for you, but you still keep it? Just because she's a little girl, she can't do it? Turning around, the little girl was taken in by an unknown woman. What the hell are you doing? Is it easy to wait for someone to kill you in front of you? ? ? And when you killed the disciples of Wufeng Mountain, you didn't say you wouldn't kill them unless they were innocent. When the boss wasn't around, you showed up and pretended to be from another sect and killed a bunch of disciples. Did they provoke you? Doesn't it take up a good place for you to practice thunder? That's for the sect. It has nothing to do with ordinary disciples. It's not like it can't be cultivated elsewhere. And what are you doing? What would you do if someone still has a big boss who hasn't left? He always said that he killed people for the sake of enlightened Taoist heart and clear thoughts. He got into big trouble twice after only 300+. If there were no cheats, he would have been found by Tianjishu. He died without knowing how he died. He killed the second generation of the Zifu family before he became invincible after practicing Qi. He killed the golden elixir disciples on the first floor of Zifu. And why do you bring fishing with you if you are so enlightened? Damn it, if you take out your ancient Taoist stele and let the entire world of immortal cultivators know about it, then see if you can kill all the cultivators in the world? ? ? It's outrageous. The article also keeps saying that you can't kill people casually to get heavenly gifts and improve your qualifications. Even if it is difficult to practice, you should not be an evil cultivator who kills people casually. Then you are fishing for law enforcement. Money can make ghosts go around. You take a lot of valuable things and pretend to be weak. The only difference between you and an evil cultivator is that you are hypocritical and hypocritical. You are a real villain. Your Taoist heart is as clear as a mirror and everything you do is righteous. Do you think you are doing human affairs? You said you weren't in a woman's way, but you lost your virginity in less than 300 chapters. If you said you were in a bad mood that night and couldn't control it, fine, I tolerated it, but what happens after that? Do you practice dual cultivation every day? Do you really want to be accepted as a Taoist companion? ? ? It was agreed at that time that we would part ways when we got to the Western Sea Territory, and then we were happy to be together. After a few more months, you were still dejected when they left. It was enough. The beautiful virgin lady is confused as soon as she throws herself into her arms? What if they are acacias and want to suck them dry? So irresistible to temptation? Are you hypocritical? Moreover, you are a Gou Daowen, how many days have I been eating with you and you are defenseless? Are you excited? There is another point that makes people speechless. You treat everyone to dinner, and you go around giving things that others don't need. I can't understand it. How about giving a flying magic weapon just because someone worked as a maid for a while? Spiritual stones are not money? Then I went to the inner sect of Xihai Sect and found out that I was a poor man, and I was confused! Having said this, I remembered that this is the first time I have heard that Gou Daoliu is short of money. You have no resources, how can you be poor? No wonder you go around pretending to be a slap in the face. If you don't pretend to be a slap in the face, how can you get the spiritual qualifications? Really good, Gou Dao obtained resources by pretending to be cool and slapped in the face, he has learned a lot. Helping everywhere to cause trouble for strangers, the most speechless thing is that he insists on standing up even though he has nothing to do with him. When he joined Xihaizong, he didn't know anything and just challenged a second-generation singer and entertainer who didn't know the details. It just happened that he was not an inner disciple, otherwise he wouldn't know how he died. There was a golden elixir in his family. What do you think of a first-level foundation builder? Later, the boss of Jindan Yuanyuan wanted to return a small favor to you. You thought about it and then used it on the singer and entertainer? ? ? To be honest, if you insist on saying that you like it, I will bear it. You are a random person. I have only met you once and sang you a song twice (if you say that this song made you have a breakthrough in your mood, that's fine by me. Just think of it as repaying the favor, but what does this thing do to you? ), His childhood sweetheart gave you a tour just to defraud you of money, and you still use the favor of the Jindan boss on her, you are very good at building a foundation! Don't want this favor? Not to mention giving advice, just change it to some spiritual stones! ! ! When you become an inner disciple, you don't practice well, and you have to accompany others to serve as a protector. Do you think it's to repay the favor? What kind of favor is this? Just help you find a place to buy information and agree to accompany someone to download the book? Wouldn't you know this if you just asked anyone who doesn't look poor? After all, you said between the lines that inner disciples have a noble status, and it was clearly written in the article that they befriended you to help you just to take advantage of you. I wonder if the protagonist can't see that, and you, the author, can't you see that? Just feed him poison! Moreover, he also wrote that there are dangers in the book and the golden elixir. Why do you, a first-level Foundation Builder, think that the sect feels safe just because the sect has designated the ruins as an outer sect assessment site? ! ! And I offended someone for this matter. I didn't watch it later. I guess it was just a slap in the face again! It just so happens that the protagonist is lacking everything when he first joins the sect. I guess he won't be lacking anything after this book is finished, right? After that, the person who was looking for the protagonist passed the examination and entered the inner door. He must have a better relationship with the protagonist. After all, he is in the same city and can go to the protagonist's house every day to have dinner. If something happens, can he deceive the protagonist again and cheat the plot? And then the protagonist gets a treasure again? ? ? I can't stand this Gou Dao at all. If you are considered Gou, Han Paopao must be considered a powerful Gou Dao! Although Han Paopao caused trouble everywhere, at least he had time to practice well, while you, the scumbag protagonist, was too busy pretending to be cool and slapped in the face. There are a lot of people scolding you at Qidian. How about you change the title of the book and call it "The Autobiography of Wang Daxia's Pretending to Cultivation to Immortality"? Besides, you are too watery! It's so slow to improve! I've seen that it's more than 300 and you're still building one level of foundation. Don't tell me that before you practice qi, there are transformations and innate warriors and so on. In the first chapter, you opened the third level of qi training and you have a proficient panel. I read in the comment section that it was almost 2 million words before you formed the elixir, and I don't know if it's true or not.

Every time I see a novel with this title, no one can survive.

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage it was too wordy and Holy Mother, I would help whenever I was destined to have a clear conscience, true or false. A tour guide spent 100,000 spiritual stones to treat the face of a prostitute across the street. He was extremely rich. I'm really convinced that you can catch all the children of luck in one fell swoop. I feel that even if you turn on the prediction plug-in, it won't be so accurate. As long as you test it, you will be a genius. As long as others are grateful and give you something, it must be a good thing that others don't know. Now that I see the protagonist has turned on the good and evil in people's hearts, I won't say what it is. Is there anyone else playing? Human nature is the highlight of the novel. Now just read it as a cheat. There is no resourcefulness at all, so you can be reckless. Anyway, you can see through the bad guys and the good guys at a glance. In the early stage, we talked about the sect's monopoly and all kinds of oppression. In the later stage, it directly became the sect's dogleg. It's called taking responsibility. Don't say that it's not good for others to bully you. They also bear the responsibility. The protagonist is becoming more and more double-standard. It can be seen from his Taoist oath. This leaves room. If you rely on the sect, you will say that the sect is good. If you are bullied by the sect, you will say that the system is poor. One thing to say is nothing more than vested interests and non-vested interests.

The name of the novel is Gou, but the author has arranged the plot in various ways. He has done nearly three hundred chapters of Qi refining, but why does he still have so many troubles? I have never seen such a grinder, and I hate it the most when you are at the lowest level. How important can you be to just do Qi refining? There are so many bad things related to you. I found that there is a common problem in today's novels, that is, the lower the level of cultivation, the more things you experience. A single Qi refining period can consume nearly 300 chapters of stories. Whose Qi refining is so difficult, but when you reach a high level, the training time becomes very long, and the stories you experience become very few.

The writing is not bad in theory, but I always felt awkward and uncomfortable in each section while reading it. It can be said that it is purely a piece of writing that is disguised as a dog's skin. In fact, it is an ordinary traditional fantasy. The protagonist always says that he wants to be a dog, but he only pays lip service to it. When something goes wrong, he suddenly becomes violent and then kills indiscriminately. This kind of plot occurs many times. Of course, what the author has been saying is that if you can't take a breath, you won't be happy. Of course, this makes sense, but this kind of plot is very disharmonious in Gou Wen's skin. It can be said that Gou Wen is not cowardly, but this is a failure to grasp the essence of Gou Wen. Gou Wen is not a coward. But it is not about violent killings, but the use of wisdom to retreat calmly before danger comes. What the readers see is the process of using wisdom, not the protagonist who cannot avoid the crisis every time, or even clearly discovers the problem, but refuses to leave, and only violently kills after encountering a crisis. Isn't that the Yakuza style? But this article has nothing to do with the decisive killing of the Yakuza style. Why is Mortal Cultivation of Immortality so popular? Han Paopao is not a coward at all, but he can retreat calmly every time. In a crisis, he can only eat ashes from behind, which looks good, so this is a bit nondescript. It does not have the refreshing feeling of a cicada waking up before the autumn wind has stirred, and does not have the wisdom to deal with the problem calmly. He will only be angry and blood will be spattered five steps away. Also, is there any Taoist heart in it? As a modern time traveler, the protagonist has not encountered any major twists and turns. He somehow understands the Taoist heart and seems to be very firm. Or does he need justice? Not only did it not give me a sense of immersion, I also felt it was very confusing. Maybe I wanted to follow the traditional fantasy formula of the protagonist suffering from great hatred and having an epiphany. However, this is incompatible with the relaxed Gou Dao text. There is no preliminary foreshadowing, and the Taoist heart is suddenly understood, but it lowers the grade. In addition, you may also want to write that good deeds will be rewarded, that is, the protagonist will be rewarded for doing good deeds? The moral is good, and the protagonist's kindness is good, but it just feels very strange, because this element doesn't seem to be related to anything? Anyway, if you take these elements out separately, there won't be much of a problem, but the author just stuffed them all into Gou Wen's system. Not only is it incompatible with Gou Wen, it's old wine in new skin, but the old wine is also written with very messy elements. It feels like the author wanted to write a popular Gou Dao element novel, but his thoughts did not change. While writing the Gou Dao article, all he was thinking in his mind was that "Gou Dao does not mean cowardice", and he kept trying to figure out what the protagonist should do to unleash a big move and show off. This is still the idea of ​​​​traditional fantasy literature. So other stories where the protagonist runs away as soon as he discovers a problem, but this one doesn't work. He is forced to not let him run away, and the protagonist must be suppressed. He must be allowed to encounter a crisis, and then he can't express his displeasure (I have written this sentence many times), and then come out to act cool and show off, especially the kind of typical Yakuza-style plots that change their appearance to seek revenge. The author may not have changed his mind, and thinks that people will feel more comfortable watching plots with pretentiousness. But the author completely ignored that Gou Daowen's readers are different from others. Everyone likes the protagonist who retreats early. Like Han Paopao, when you make the protagonist appear in front of others, everyone will only feel annoying, feel that he is not enough, and feel that he is not running fast enough. So in fact, the author still just wants to ride on the popularity of Gou Daowen. In fact, there is no change in his thoughts and inner thoughts. He still thinks about traditional fantasy, which makes the elements in it complicated and confusing. It has nothing to do with Gou Wen. Maybe he still doesn't know why there are so many bad reviews... Anyway, the whole book feels like a nine-foot strong man with eight-pack abs who insists on wearing a small women's skirt. The feeling of fragmentation is very serious, and the more you read, the more awkward it becomes.

It took more than 200 yuan and 300 cards to break through to the second big level. I am really convinced. It is so awesome. All I can say is that it is awesome. Not to mention the slow upgrade, there are many poisonous points. I will not go into details one by one. He always shows kindness and charity, which makes me Reading this book makes you feel like I am a heinous person. Even if you have a system, you are so slow to upgrade. It's so disgusting. If you didn't have a system, maybe I wouldn't tolerate it. You have a damn system, and you are so slow to upgrade. Why don't you stop writing?

It's very well written, don't write it anymore! I've read 700 chapters and am obsessed with 600! Don't call it Gou, call it bane! Wherever you go, something will happen! It's so embarrassing to write down things! I want to write but can't write well! Well. . . .

The author had better stop writing. He wrote well at the beginning. Later on, he became more and more promiscuous, causing trouble and offending people everywhere. The Holy Mother's heart is bursting, and it's all about things that have nothing to do with cultivation. They help each other when they see one, and make deadly enemies with them. Does it have anything to do with the word "gou"? Such a good subject is written like this, but it's better not to write it.

After reading many immortal writings by great masters, I personally concluded that if you want to write a good writing about immortality, you must first be a time traveler at the beginning, and secondly, forget that you are a time traveler within ten chapters. How to put it, at most, think about the original world and use modern vocabulary in the first few chapters. After at least twenty chapters, the protagonist should be completely integrated into the world of cultivation. Don't open your mouth and shut up with modern vocabulary, and talk about bullets and the like at every turn. As long as you write like this, you are guaranteed to hit the street. There are few works by great gods like this. Only by integrating into the world can you have a sense of immersion, as written here , often appears in dramas. After more than 40 chapters, the protagonist is still a modern otaku loser. First of all, he is not likable, and he has not integrated into the world of cultivation at all. Readers cannot integrate into it. The events are too many and complicated, and they all appear too early. The protagonist is still practicing Qi, and it is like the end of the world. It is also set that the protagonist cannot run away even if he wants to. So why are you writing this? You have to eat one bite at a time, so this is a good beginning. I write out all the dangers in one go. There is no developmental process. I wish I could go through a hundred years of things in one month. The most important thing is that I am still in the middle stage of Qi refining. Are you speechless? In short, there are too many and too many things written in the early stage, and I can't grasp the key points. The protagonist's personality is not good, and I can't say whether he is a virgin or a coward.

- [He never cultivates good deeds in his life, he only loves killing people and setting fires. [Suddenly the golden shackles are opened and the jade locks are torn off. This fairy world is so big, ten or twenty times larger than the lower world. In such a big place, household registration is actually taken so seriously? It is impossible for people from a big city to go to other big cities. They need to apply for household registration again. It's divided into four categories: A, B, C, and D! All included here are fairy books! The rest are retail investors and gangsters, people who ascended from the lower world or stowaways. Unless there is someone to guide them, can the rest be caught at will? Become slaves, materials, and sacrifices! This is too inhumane Look [Wang Chen] how hard it has been along the way? First, his father went into the secret realm alone and never came back because he wanted to extend his life, and then he was plotted against him and almost died at the age of eighteen. He finally entered the inner sect, but was forced to become a casual cultivator because of the sect. Later, he entered the big sect, and because of the gaze of heaven, he had no choice but to sneak into the upper world. He was chased or killed or spent the whole journey on the run. He finally got to Sendo, but was accidentally caught and used as siege cannon fodder and almost died. He saw him and the fox girl enter the world of the bell... Each plot is written in great detail because of "magic power, human virtue, and heavenly power" "God-killing sword... Evil-killing sword. Demon-killing sword. Ghost-killing sword. Demon-killing sword. Immortal-killing sword. Immortal-killing sword. Immortal-trapping sword. Absolute Immortal Sword (the Four Swords of Killing Immortals) "Evil Nest "Evil Evil"