Mortal: Since 500 Years Ago
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Chu Wuji traveled through the mortal world and came five hundred years earlier than Han Li. He knew the plot well and planned in advance, but never relied on the plot, because from the moment he appeared, everything changed. More than five hundred years later, Han Li first entered Yellow Maple Valley, and Chu Wuji was already famous in Yue Kingdom; In the Xutian Palace, Han Li was still struggling to survive in a dangerous situation, but Chu Wuji had already taken the opportunity; From the Chaos Star Sea to Tiannan, from the human world to the spiritual world, the further Han Li walked, the more he discovered that that person was already walking in front of him. Many years later, Han Li became the Taoist Patriarch. Looking back on this life, I find that there is always a lingering shadow above my head. That was Chu Wuji.
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Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
It looks good, but the pace feels too slow. More to come.
You can be very creative. You can go to Tiannan to get the Tian Bottle and use it for hundreds of years. There is also the Tianyuan Pagoda.
Overall, I would rate it as an excellent work. It doesn't follow others' lead and writes its own original plot. The language and text are a bit clichéd, but it's not bad at all. It's better than those who write anecdotes, don't convey the meaning of their words, and make bad jokes. One of the shortcomings I feel is that Gold Finger is not good enough. If you want to give people a sense of immersion and satisfaction in fan fiction, Gold Finger cannot be too weak. Otherwise, you will not be as good as the original Han Li, or not much different from him, and it will be very unpleasant to read. It means that you have a crushing advantage over Han Li. The other is the magical weapons, magical powers, skills, fighting skills, and the cultivation process. These can be written carefully. A big highlight of the original work of Mortal is the wonderful fighting skills. There are many magical weapons and magical powers. The training process is mysterious and mysterious, and it gives a refreshing feeling of upgrading. Another person, you just had one fight and didn't get two moves, but your magic power can't keep up. You have always said that your magic power is deeper than that of the same level, but after all the companions fought, I haven't seen anyone with weak kidneys like you. Since your magic power is deeper than others, you must show it. In a fight of the same intensity, others are weak and you are still tough. This shows how powerful your skills are. Subsequent important opportunities such as the Gold-eating Insect, the Golden Thunder Bamboo, the Xuantian Xuantian Immortal Vine, the Golden Que Jade Book, etc. Need to be dealt with. I think it is inappropriate for some fan fiction to give these to Han Li. These are great opportunities in the spiritual world and even unique and irreplaceable opportunities. You can just grab the other unimportant ones. It is simply incomprehensible to give these away, unless you write a better opportunity than this, and you will not look down on these. My personal suggestion is that the more you write, the better.
Listen to authority. Mainly because you have to use the gold coins or something to buy it. To be honest, I don't want to read it.
The pace is a bit slow, who are the heroines?
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Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
It looks good, but the pace feels too slow. More to come.
You can be very creative. You can go to Tiannan to get the Tian Bottle and use it for hundreds of years. There is also the Tianyuan Pagoda.
Overall, I would rate it as an excellent work. It doesn't follow others' lead and writes its own original plot. The language and text are a bit clichéd, but it's not bad at all. It's better than those who write anecdotes, don't convey the meaning of their words, and make bad jokes. One of the shortcomings I feel is that Gold Finger is not good enough. If you want to give people a sense of immersion and satisfaction in fan fiction, Gold Finger cannot be too weak. Otherwise, you will not be as good as the original Han Li, or not much different from him, and it will be very unpleasant to read. It means that you have a crushing advantage over Han Li. The other is the magical weapons, magical powers, skills, fighting skills, and the cultivation process. These can be written carefully. A big highlight of the original work of Mortal is the wonderful fighting skills. There are many magical weapons and magical powers. The training process is mysterious and mysterious, and it gives a refreshing feeling of upgrading. Another person, you just had one fight and didn't get two moves, but your magic power can't keep up. You have always said that your magic power is deeper than that of the same level, but after all the companions fought, I haven't seen anyone with weak kidneys like you. Since your magic power is deeper than others, you must show it. In a fight of the same intensity, others are weak and you are still tough. This shows how powerful your skills are. Subsequent important opportunities such as the Gold-eating Insect, the Golden Thunder Bamboo, the Xuantian Xuantian Immortal Vine, the Golden Que Jade Book, etc. Need to be dealt with. I think it is inappropriate for some fan fiction to give these to Han Li. These are great opportunities in the spiritual world and even unique and irreplaceable opportunities. You can just grab the other unimportant ones. It is simply incomprehensible to give these away, unless you write a better opportunity than this, and you will not look down on these. My personal suggestion is that the more you write, the better.
Listen to authority. Mainly because you have to use the gold coins or something to buy it. To be honest, I don't want to read it.
The pace is a bit slow, who are the heroines?
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