Mortal: a History of Time with Revised Plot
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[Artifact] [Modify the past] [Self-created technique] [Family Cultivation] [No Typical Female Protagonist] [Not Single] Before time travel, Chu Jiangyue watched "The Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality" for the 9th time. Lost consciousness and traveled through the world. When he awakened his past life memories, he was already 12 years old and discovered the history books in his body. In the beginning, you can only modify it once a day. As he became successful in martial arts, Chu Jiangyue began to consume his true energy to make many modifications. Until around the age of 25. The Wild Wolf Gang killed Qixuanmen, and Han Li left. Chu Jiangyue revised the past and obtained the 4 training notes left behind by the God's Hand Valley. From then on, he began to cultivate immortality. Add all the martial arts secrets of the Qixuanmen to the magic of cultivating immortals. It has been revised repeatedly through history books over the years. Chu Jiangyue created his own magical martial arts and even martial arts practice - Hunyuan Gong! After practicing immortality for two and a half years, he reached the 13th level of Qi training stage. Chu Jiangyue came out of Qixuanmen! Modify other people's past, give spiritual roots, and start your family's cultivation of immortality! Take Mo Mansion into your pocket! Obtained 7 beautiful ladies...
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Official(13)Scraped 2mo ago
I am a fan of mortals. After reading your profile, I just didn't want to read it. Why did you accept Mo Mansion Sanjiao? After seeing the profile, I lost interest. You are a bunch of mortals. You have no relationship with Mo Mansion itself and you still force yourself to join. At first glance, this is not the mentality that a time traveler should have.
There is a reason why your book is not popular. See if what I said makes sense. It is best to write about women in fan harem novels who are in the original work. You can portray women who appear less in the original work, such as Dong Xuan'er, Nie Ying, Xiao Cuier, Zhong Weiniang, Han Mengying, Zhou Nichang, etc. Aren't these enough for you to write about? It's OK to show off your own innovation, but if no one is interested and no readers will read it, it's useless for you to show off your own ideas. I see that you keep portraying junior sisters and senior sisters. This is really boring. If you are not interested, you just left it. Your plot chapters are too weak. It takes so long to write one copy. Who has time to read these things? You only have two chapters in one day. It takes ten and a half months to write one copy. The readers will have left long ago. Who would read these boring harem novels? They might as well read eunuch novels. The theme is harem flow, the plot content is eunuch flow, there is no description of dual cultivation, no emotional interaction, and the stamp collection is not well written. Your book has no basic reader base at all. You, a reader of the novel Harem, will definitely leave after reading it for two or three days. Readers of the novel Eunuch will not read it at all. Even if there are newcomers, they will not be able to retain it. You will definitely not be able to continue reading. There is a high probability that you will not finish the book. This is fine for self-interest, but it is unlikely to make money. There is no reader group at all, and there will be no long-term subscription.
Author: Introduction In the end, the girls of the Mo Mansion were successfully persuaded to quit! The girls of Mo Mansion give people the impression that they are mortals without spiritual roots!
Newbies on the road! Thank you for reading!
This data is the most important! To influence recommendations, try to click into the latest chapter... As an aside, it would be great if there was a book recommendation boss...
Tell us about the character of the protagonist
The ancestors × the Lezi people + do whatever they want + be cautious + take it away if they like it. Especially for women, it is not important to accept being a furnace cauldron or a Taoist companion. The main thing is what the protagonist wants to do and whether it can satisfy his heart.
Author, I hope the protagonist will not accept Nangong Wan
If you have collected a lot of money, you might as well follow the family cultivation stream.
Test the waters today
Please guys, please watch the latest chapter! This data is very important because it relates to how long the book can be written!
Boss, may I ask how popular you are?
Illustrations added gifs
If you are interested, please look through the illustrations, I will post the animations step by step.
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Official(13)Scraped 2mo ago
I am a fan of mortals. After reading your profile, I just didn't want to read it. Why did you accept Mo Mansion Sanjiao? After seeing the profile, I lost interest. You are a bunch of mortals. You have no relationship with Mo Mansion itself and you still force yourself to join. At first glance, this is not the mentality that a time traveler should have.
There is a reason why your book is not popular. See if what I said makes sense. It is best to write about women in fan harem novels who are in the original work. You can portray women who appear less in the original work, such as Dong Xuan'er, Nie Ying, Xiao Cuier, Zhong Weiniang, Han Mengying, Zhou Nichang, etc. Aren't these enough for you to write about? It's OK to show off your own innovation, but if no one is interested and no readers will read it, it's useless for you to show off your own ideas. I see that you keep portraying junior sisters and senior sisters. This is really boring. If you are not interested, you just left it. Your plot chapters are too weak. It takes so long to write one copy. Who has time to read these things? You only have two chapters in one day. It takes ten and a half months to write one copy. The readers will have left long ago. Who would read these boring harem novels? They might as well read eunuch novels. The theme is harem flow, the plot content is eunuch flow, there is no description of dual cultivation, no emotional interaction, and the stamp collection is not well written. Your book has no basic reader base at all. You, a reader of the novel Harem, will definitely leave after reading it for two or three days. Readers of the novel Eunuch will not read it at all. Even if there are newcomers, they will not be able to retain it. You will definitely not be able to continue reading. There is a high probability that you will not finish the book. This is fine for self-interest, but it is unlikely to make money. There is no reader group at all, and there will be no long-term subscription.
Author: Introduction In the end, the girls of the Mo Mansion were successfully persuaded to quit! The girls of Mo Mansion give people the impression that they are mortals without spiritual roots!
Newbies on the road! Thank you for reading!
This data is the most important! To influence recommendations, try to click into the latest chapter... As an aside, it would be great if there was a book recommendation boss...
Tell us about the character of the protagonist
The ancestors × the Lezi people + do whatever they want + be cautious + take it away if they like it. Especially for women, it is not important to accept being a furnace cauldron or a Taoist companion. The main thing is what the protagonist wants to do and whether it can satisfy his heart.
Author, I hope the protagonist will not accept Nangong Wan
If you have collected a lot of money, you might as well follow the family cultivation stream.
Test the waters today
Please guys, please watch the latest chapter! This data is very important because it relates to how long the book can be written!
Boss, may I ask how popular you are?
Illustrations added gifs
If you are interested, please look through the illustrations, I will post the animations step by step.
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