
Pirate's Smoke General
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I'm Smoker, and I speak for smoke. What you see is a wisp of smog, But I didn't see the countless particles in the haze, You have your fantasies, I have my own ideas, You deny my haze, I decide my color, You laugh at the insubstantiality of my smoke, I pity your rigid rigidity of thought. You can despise Tianpang's idea, and the plot will prove that it is the best idea. Creativity is a private property belonging to geniuses. Initially, it is indispensable for mediocrity to question and ridicule it. But, so what? Even if you exhaust your brain power, you still have to develop it interestingly. I am who I am, a haze of different colors.
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Official(97)Scraped 1d ago
The combat power of the three generals is actually about the same as that of the Four Emperors
The general's combat power is almost the same as that of the Four Emperors. If you read the original work carefully, you will find that almost every major force in it has a first and three great powers, and the three great powers are not much different from the first. For example, the Big Mom of the Big Mom Pirates and her three dessert generals, the Marine Marshal and the three generals, and the Yonko Kaido and his three disasters. Luffy also has three combat powers: Zoro, Sanji and Jinbe. (Jinbei has already joined the Straw Hat Pirates in the Big Mom chapter) And the manga also says that if the marshal steps down, one of the three generals will not be replaced, which shows that the combat power of the marshal and the three generals is not much different.
The aura of the protagonist is too obvious
After more than 30 chapters, it feels like a cool novel. Just write it well when writing about pirates. I suggest you read the One Piece Code. Although the protagonist is a eunuch, the protagonist becomes stronger through strategy and hard work, and the protagonist's aura seems to be gone.
I am Tianpang myself. If you can, please come to Qidian Chinese website to subscribe!
I am Tianpang myself. If you can, please come to Qidian Chinese website to subscribe! Because this book is a Qidian novel, if you subscribe to Chuangshi, I will have to wait three months to get the royalties, which is really a bummer! So those who have the ability, I really urge you to subscribe to Qidian, where you will be able to reply as soon as possible. It is really difficult to take care of it here in Chuangshi. I just found out that my book was also published in Chuangshi, so I didn't reply before, which was really helpless...
Author, let me give you some advice. Can you write more about the characters, places, and objects that the original pirates had? I have no sense of immersion in your novels recently! . . . Pirate fans, let's write more about the original pirates! Thanks! ^O^
Author, why do I feel that you have raised the strength of everyone except the protagonist?
First, let's talk about how powerful the general is, and then how powerful the Shichibukai are, how powerful the navy is, how powerful the pirates are... What does the author want to do?
Armed Haki can touch the entity of the ability user, and can also strengthen one's own offense and defense, but it cannot completely isolate the fruit's ability. Just like Luffy hitting Akainu's fire-breathing fist with a fist wrapped in armament color, he would still be burned. Even if you don't have enough domineering power, your fist will be directly incinerated.
Author! There is nothing in the world government! Where are the Tianlong people? Did you ask him to fly over? The golden lion is a surprise that no one knows about!
The introduction on the homepage.... I don't quite understand it. But I think if you put it this way, burning the fruit would be more awesome. Without fire, there would be no smoke. . . . .
Adopt Bartolomeo as your younger brother?
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Official(97)Scraped 1d ago
The combat power of the three generals is actually about the same as that of the Four Emperors
The general's combat power is almost the same as that of the Four Emperors. If you read the original work carefully, you will find that almost every major force in it has a first and three great powers, and the three great powers are not much different from the first. For example, the Big Mom of the Big Mom Pirates and her three dessert generals, the Marine Marshal and the three generals, and the Yonko Kaido and his three disasters. Luffy also has three combat powers: Zoro, Sanji and Jinbe. (Jinbei has already joined the Straw Hat Pirates in the Big Mom chapter) And the manga also says that if the marshal steps down, one of the three generals will not be replaced, which shows that the combat power of the marshal and the three generals is not much different.
The aura of the protagonist is too obvious
After more than 30 chapters, it feels like a cool novel. Just write it well when writing about pirates. I suggest you read the One Piece Code. Although the protagonist is a eunuch, the protagonist becomes stronger through strategy and hard work, and the protagonist's aura seems to be gone.
I am Tianpang myself. If you can, please come to Qidian Chinese website to subscribe!
I am Tianpang myself. If you can, please come to Qidian Chinese website to subscribe! Because this book is a Qidian novel, if you subscribe to Chuangshi, I will have to wait three months to get the royalties, which is really a bummer! So those who have the ability, I really urge you to subscribe to Qidian, where you will be able to reply as soon as possible. It is really difficult to take care of it here in Chuangshi. I just found out that my book was also published in Chuangshi, so I didn't reply before, which was really helpless...
Author, let me give you some advice. Can you write more about the characters, places, and objects that the original pirates had? I have no sense of immersion in your novels recently! . . . Pirate fans, let's write more about the original pirates! Thanks! ^O^
Author, why do I feel that you have raised the strength of everyone except the protagonist?
First, let's talk about how powerful the general is, and then how powerful the Shichibukai are, how powerful the navy is, how powerful the pirates are... What does the author want to do?
Armed Haki can touch the entity of the ability user, and can also strengthen one's own offense and defense, but it cannot completely isolate the fruit's ability. Just like Luffy hitting Akainu's fire-breathing fist with a fist wrapped in armament color, he would still be burned. Even if you don't have enough domineering power, your fist will be directly incinerated.
Author! There is nothing in the world government! Where are the Tianlong people? Did you ask him to fly over? The golden lion is a surprise that no one knows about!
The introduction on the homepage.... I don't quite understand it. But I think if you put it this way, burning the fruit would be more awesome. Without fire, there would be no smoke. . . . .
Adopt Bartolomeo as your younger brother?
Waste blue powder report, no matter whether it is good or not, please comment first and add recommendation votes
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No.40-Derivative fan fiction-Pirate Smoke General-119,000 words-2813 collections-Refreshed on 2017/12/10




. The protagonist travels through time and becomes Smoker, slowly growing up. There is a single female protagonist, not Long Aotian.




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