Magic Mobile Game
About This Novel
The new book [Welcome to the Magic City] has been released! Zhao Yang, a great monk at the spiritual level who once transcended through the "Magic Mobile Game", was reborn in an era before the game started. With the help of his prophetic ability, he opened an unknown path to heaven. Let's see how he dominates and stands proudly in this life! [Ps: Readers' Q group number is 615.608.154. Those who are interested can add it. ]
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Official(65)Scraped 21d ago
How to say it.
The creativity is quite good, but the character's words and deeds are too bad. A monk who has lived for nearly a hundred years, his words and deeds are not as good as those of a normal 20-year-old young man. Are you saying that you are playing with the world? Or do you mean that you have no pressure and know that you have the halo of the protagonist? There is a very interesting saying that there is a vision gap between humans, and there is also a gap between humans and eagle eyes. However, if a monk reaches a certain level of practice, even if the primary body has been strengthened to a certain extent, no matter male or female, the body will be full of pores, no matter how good or smooth your skin is. For details, please refer to If a short-sighted person looks at a woman with a good figure, a good face shape, and average skin from 5 meters away, she will feel amazing. But when she gets closer to 30 centimeters, it is almost equivalent to the result of makeup, beauty, and filters being cut off in TV shows, leaving only the bare makeup, let alone a monk looking at a mortal. This effect, hahaha. Have you ever imagined that a powerful monk can control his gaze, and if he looks a little carefully, he can see the flesh, flesh and even cells inside through the pores of a mortal? These humans can all be observed through a microscope, not to mention the great monks who have evolved to an unknown extent. This is the difference between immortals and mortals, so, hehehe.
Thoughts after reading
My sense for the protagonist's father is not very good, and my sense for the protagonist has also declined. . The heroine is poisonous
...
Returned from rebirth... Became a loser... Kneeling and licking girls
Qiao Yue is a big failure
Qiao Yue is a big failure, why is the protagonist acting like a kneeling licker?
After reading more than 80 chapters, I kind of understand why there is so much criticism in the comments.
You can't say that this book is not well written, but it just makes people feel depressing. The protagonist tolerates some weirdness or some dirty people doing dirty things because he doesn't want to get involved, but he hates those weirdness from the bottom of his heart. Such a contradictory character really makes some readers dislike it. It would be fine if the protagonist was cold or Madonna-like, but I saw a rich second generation with a little money talking about the filth and ugliness of society after being reborn. The novel itself is a bit illusory, but it is written so realistically that few people will actually read it. Finally, if you, the author, really see this comment, I hope you can reflect on what you want to write and what you want to express. Every protagonist must have a shining point. It cannot be said that the protagonist in the book does not have it, but it is not outstanding enough! Having said so much, you may think that I am a bit nagging. In fact, I rarely write reviews. I just feel that it is a pity that this novel that has the potential to become a hit is a pity that people cannot accept it because of the setting!
I don't understand. I've read dozens of chapters and I don't understand what I'm doing.
I don't understand. After reading dozens of chapters, I don't understand what I'm doing or where the main plot is.
This book is very uncomfortable to read😖😖😖😖It's super uncomfortable, I can't stand it anymore,
To put it bluntly.
Shaped by the author. The protagonist keeps repeating the story of Chunyang Sword Immortal. Are you fucking interesting? Don't know what you want to express? You want to say that you are the Pure Yang Sword Immortal. To put it bluntly, you are not an immortal. Maybe the Pure Yang Sword is an immortal sword. The name may be Chunyang Immortal Sword, and you are a sword slave. The word was repeated dozens of times. And she is also a holy dog and a licking dog. It's not interesting, Shennong can continue watching.
When I read Chapter 29, a poisonous point suddenly occurred to me, and I was poisoned to the point of being poisoned.
When I saw Chapter 29, the main character looked like an idiot, and it wasn't the studio he opened in the game. Did the main character know Qiao Yue who opened the studio very well, and he eagerly ran to help others like a masochist?
If this was a comic with less plot, it would still be watchable and some horror elements added.
No matter what, Lich drives the car, beep beep.
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Official(65)Scraped 21d ago
How to say it.
The creativity is quite good, but the character's words and deeds are too bad. A monk who has lived for nearly a hundred years, his words and deeds are not as good as those of a normal 20-year-old young man. Are you saying that you are playing with the world? Or do you mean that you have no pressure and know that you have the halo of the protagonist? There is a very interesting saying that there is a vision gap between humans, and there is also a gap between humans and eagle eyes. However, if a monk reaches a certain level of practice, even if the primary body has been strengthened to a certain extent, no matter male or female, the body will be full of pores, no matter how good or smooth your skin is. For details, please refer to If a short-sighted person looks at a woman with a good figure, a good face shape, and average skin from 5 meters away, she will feel amazing. But when she gets closer to 30 centimeters, it is almost equivalent to the result of makeup, beauty, and filters being cut off in TV shows, leaving only the bare makeup, let alone a monk looking at a mortal. This effect, hahaha. Have you ever imagined that a powerful monk can control his gaze, and if he looks a little carefully, he can see the flesh, flesh and even cells inside through the pores of a mortal? These humans can all be observed through a microscope, not to mention the great monks who have evolved to an unknown extent. This is the difference between immortals and mortals, so, hehehe.
Thoughts after reading
My sense for the protagonist's father is not very good, and my sense for the protagonist has also declined. . The heroine is poisonous
...
Returned from rebirth... Became a loser... Kneeling and licking girls
Qiao Yue is a big failure
Qiao Yue is a big failure, why is the protagonist acting like a kneeling licker?
After reading more than 80 chapters, I kind of understand why there is so much criticism in the comments.
You can't say that this book is not well written, but it just makes people feel depressing. The protagonist tolerates some weirdness or some dirty people doing dirty things because he doesn't want to get involved, but he hates those weirdness from the bottom of his heart. Such a contradictory character really makes some readers dislike it. It would be fine if the protagonist was cold or Madonna-like, but I saw a rich second generation with a little money talking about the filth and ugliness of society after being reborn. The novel itself is a bit illusory, but it is written so realistically that few people will actually read it. Finally, if you, the author, really see this comment, I hope you can reflect on what you want to write and what you want to express. Every protagonist must have a shining point. It cannot be said that the protagonist in the book does not have it, but it is not outstanding enough! Having said so much, you may think that I am a bit nagging. In fact, I rarely write reviews. I just feel that it is a pity that this novel that has the potential to become a hit is a pity that people cannot accept it because of the setting!
I don't understand. I've read dozens of chapters and I don't understand what I'm doing.
I don't understand. After reading dozens of chapters, I don't understand what I'm doing or where the main plot is.
This book is very uncomfortable to read😖😖😖😖It's super uncomfortable, I can't stand it anymore,
To put it bluntly.
Shaped by the author. The protagonist keeps repeating the story of Chunyang Sword Immortal. Are you fucking interesting? Don't know what you want to express? You want to say that you are the Pure Yang Sword Immortal. To put it bluntly, you are not an immortal. Maybe the Pure Yang Sword is an immortal sword. The name may be Chunyang Immortal Sword, and you are a sword slave. The word was repeated dozens of times. And she is also a holy dog and a licking dog. It's not interesting, Shennong can continue watching.
When I read Chapter 29, a poisonous point suddenly occurred to me, and I was poisoned to the point of being poisoned.
When I saw Chapter 29, the main character looked like an idiot, and it wasn't the studio he opened in the game. Did the main character know Qiao Yue who opened the studio very well, and he eagerly ran to help others like a masochist?
If this was a comic with less plot, it would still be watchable and some horror elements added.
No matter what, Lich drives the car, beep beep.
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Fairy-like alien world, the game is brought into reality, eunuch Mo's new work The protagonist who was once the boss of Yuanshen was reborn. He obtained the qualification for the Xianxia mobile game in advance and trained the character to lay a solid foundation for subsequent game updates. Because I had practiced in my previous life, I was naturally cheating in this life, and my talent was very bad. It's okay at the beginning, but it gets more and more naive later on, so it's worth reading the book. There was a female supporting character who didn't look very pleasing to the eye. There was ambiguity at first but it disappeared later. I don't know when the protagonist is acting cool, which is really sad. Hay
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True. Magic mobile game
This book is indeed a bit toxic at the beginning, but if you keep reading, it is really interesting. The author is walking on the edge of 404 (the author knows it in his heart)! I wrote a little bit of poison in the front, but don't just flip over it. I have written so much before, just to pave the way for the development of the protagonist later... No spoilers, that's the sentence anyway, if you want to see it, just watch it, if you don't want to see it, just delete it and leave.
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