Douluo: the Beginning is Full of Soul Power. Second Lady, Please Calm Down

It doesn't matter if she has a harem, as long as she doesn't accept Ning Rongrong. Disgusting, 99% of the authors are die-hard fans of Ning Rongrong. It's so disgustingly written. In the beginning, someone gets engaged to someone, and in the next chapter, they meet Ning Rongrong by chance, and then come to their house to be their son-in-law. 😐😐😐😐I feel like vomiting. . . .

There are hundreds of millions of people in Douluo Continent. How many people have soul power? How many people have innate soul power of level three or above? Let me give you the answer. When Douluo was first filmed, the population was about 500 million. There are about 150,000 people with soul power, of which less than 20,000 are with innate soul power of level three or above. Wuhun Palace probably owns seven or eight thousand of them, and other sects plus another six or seven thousand. There are still about five thousand free soul masters. Of course, these are only those with innate soul power of level three or above. There are actually more major forces below level three soul power. What is the concept of this ratio? In reality, there are 2 million college students in our country every year. The soul power is equivalent to the first 600 people. This is completely Tsinghua and Peking University, right? Level 3 or higher soul power is equivalent to the top 80 in the national college entrance examination. What is the concept of being over 80 years old? Why is your Marquis Mansion so awesome?

In fact, the subject matter is okay, but the author failed a bit in writing it. The early writing has already made people have no desire to read, or lack of motivation. The character of a protagonist can be said to be completely useless. To be able to be so opinionated and unable to control my emotions after two lifetimes is worthy of being an old man in my last lifetime. There is a small poisonous point in Wuhun's second skill. It is better to change it and copy it, but the effect will be reduced, otherwise the author's purpose is too strong and it is unnecessary. Tang San's skills are not necessarily necessary, not to mention that some magical skills require corresponding weapons to be used. This skill is at least half useless. Besides, no matter whether you can copy the magical skills when you write like this, it will really feel useless to some readers. Sometimes the author still needs to look at things from the perspective of a bystander. It is normal for the author to conceal his talent in the early stage, but the process and ideas of concealing it are really unsightly, the writing is awkward, and it is full of loopholes. There is no explanation on how to conceal one's soul power as an example. Another point is that no matter how you hide it, some people with higher soul power than you can see it. Otherwise, even a genius can hide it. Are you doing nothing by being the spy of Wuhun Palace? Do you think there is no titled Douluo in Wuhun Palace? (After all, you are born with full soul power, not a cabbage) Unless you have a very, very advanced soul guidance device, but it is impossible to produce soul guidance devices with Dou Yi's ability at that time.

The single female protagonist is pretty good, I personally like single female protagonists. Nowadays, many Douluo fanfics are either harems or stallions, which can be said to be a paradise for LSPs. But there is one problem. I remember that using soul skills will reveal soul rings. In the original work, only Ghost Douluo does not show his soul ring when using soul skills, because his martial soul is related to his soul. In the book, when helping Zhu Zhuqing obtain the soul ring, the protagonist used his first soul skill several times, which should have been exposed long ago. As a result, no soul ring appeared. The author still needs to take a look at this scam. Another thing is that the author uses too many uh, this, and alas in the book. On average, there are basically two or three in each chapter. If you use this too much, not only will you look stupid, but it will also show that your writing style is...

The setting is really broken. When you were 2 years old, you were whipped and beaten by your father. Still a dog. Forcibly downgrading is like licking a dog.

Licking a dog, the protagonist is particularly cute

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's so beautiful. I hope the author will update it quickly and make the pace faster. Come on.

In the first 25 chapters, I was baffled by some of the operations on the pig's feet. Do they know you? Emperor Feitian: "It's just a little bit of wind and frost." The latter part is also baffling. The more I look at it, the more it looks like a local. Why bother adding a time-travel setting if you want to send a golden finger? I didn't look at this with a blinding eye. I thought it was a story about a single heroine conferring a god, but I didn't expect it to be the psychological journey of Boiling Sheep.

To Yutian Heng Xiangcao, plus you don't write harem stories, why are you giving Xiangcao to others randomly, especially Tang Yuehua, you are really on a narrow road, no wonder you have a low score

After reading a few chapters, I can't understand it at all. I've traveled through time and my talent is pretty good. In the early stage, I didn't want to plan the opportunity for the little Yakuza, and I didn't want to help the family become bigger and stronger. The little Yakuza knew that they wanted to establish the Tang Sect through time travel, and the main character only had Zhu Zhuqing in his mind.