Come Back 1992

Are there any book friends who have read for 15,000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

Very good, come on, the author is great

I tried my best, but the words are mixed with semi-vulgar and ordinary dialects. Some parts are not fluent at all. I don't know if the author read it after finishing it. From the beginning to the present, there are all facial-like characters, with zero description of emotions, zero description of scenery, zero description of data, and zero description of characters. There is no sense of immersion at all, just like a running account, without ups and downs. If it's for everyday writing, the sense of immersion is very poor. There is basically no interaction between family members, and the protagonist's previous daughter is like a background. You don't need to guess to know that the purpose of rebirth is money. Can you come up with something new?

Let's talk about the braised pork business. In an era when wages were generally around 150 yuan, the protagonist offered employees 300 yuan and a bonus of 5% of sales, which works out to 8900 yuan a month! Can't find anyone for the protagonist? With such a huge cost, how can it outperform its peers? No one will tell you how much you pay in a monopoly business. Why should you pay high wages in a business that can be done casually?

I suggest the author change the setting of traveling through time and becoming an uncle. After all, your setting at the beginning is really poisonous.

A college student in Guangzhou in the 1990s said that people usually have three thousand or four thousand a month, and it is better to be more realistic when writing chronology.

In the early stage, the protagonist opened franchise stores, purchased wineries, and also operated pig farms and fertilizer farms. Can you introduce the financial situation? Or open a bank, or make tens of millions or hundreds of millions in a few months! Constant expansion always requires money, right?

I read a few chapters, but the reading settings were so weird that I didn't continue reading.

Generate electricity with love? No no no! Too much self-pleasure!

I feel so excited about writing, I feel like I can write wherever I want