Start with the Supreme Humanity

If you don't snatch Aya Qingzhu, what else is there to see if you travel to the past?

The main character has lived for tens of thousands of years, and it's written like a teenager.

The writing is mediocre, just like the instruction manual, and the protagonist is also an idiot.

To be honest, the two worlds that make people speechless are useless. Instead of playing clones here, it is better to study the rules of the human world to improve strength. The author looks down on Feng Xiaozhong and says that he can only cultivate to the realm above the Tao Lord. From now on, Wanxiang is thousands of miles behind Feng Xiaozhong. With city walls and corners, it took Feng Cai a long time to become a Taoist and he even killed himself once in the middle. , Wanxiang spent more than twenty years studying loneliness in Zhetianli, and there is no distinction between the primary and secondary incarnations of the original deity. If it is a past incarnation, it does not matter in the present life, Wanxiang is just Wanxiang. Wanxiang always uses the name Lin Mu, and it is really hard to tell which one is the main one and which one is the branch. The attraction of this book comes entirely from the character setting of the innate god, but the author always writes some other and forcibly added characters.

The subject matter is quite interesting, but a novel that can offend both the plot party and the harem party is a bit outrageous.

Really no one will read this kind of novels mixed together. You should write them separately. Just like me cooking, I like to put various spices in it.

It's all narration, and it feels like reading an instruction manual.

It's okay. There are too many narrations and the article is terrible. Overall, it's not bad. I know how to develop it. It can be read as a fun article. Write more.