This Game is Unusual

I typed so many words to criticize! I am reading this book very seriously and writing reviews very seriously! I don't understand where those 5-star reviews come from. There are obviously so many poisonous points, but the praise is overwhelming.

The subject matter is quite good and can be regarded as novel. If the writing is better, this book still has the potential to become a hit. However, there is one disadvantage, that is, in terms of the emotional plot, the writing can be said to be terrible. The first emotional drama queen meets the ex-girlfriend. How can I put it, it gives me the feeling that it is just your wishful thinking, and there is nothing else at all! Some of it is just that you feel that the relationship should be like that for you, but the reality is not. The emotional scene in the second act should be considered later. When you want to kill the boy of the brother and sister because of money, I know you want to express that kind of humanity, but didn't you guess before that this game is a different world? And you also deliberately described the little girl's help to you at the time, and how you regarded the brothers and sisters as your own after you brought the leopard corpse back to the village for the first time. When you wrote about your ex-girlfriend, I already felt very discouraged, but I still read on. After all, the subject matter and settings are good, and it can even be said that your description of the captain teaching you the skills is quite good. It's just that you later wrote about someone giving you 100,000 yuan to kill a boy. I saw this was also misunderstood. I didn't understand it. You still hesitated. Forget it, you are still doing a lot of mental activities! Is it necessary? If you write like this, it can be said that the setting of your book and other things have retained readers, but these two things will cause you to lose nearly half of your readers. After reading what you wrote, it can be said that the emotional drama is a failure, including the emotional drama with parents. Do you know why there is the term Qidian Orphanage? Do you think others want to write it like this? It's because writing the plot of an emotional drama requires too many conditions. In addition to writing, it also needs to be promoted by the plot, etc. Otherwise, it will be very miserable! Just like when you write about your ex-girlfriend, you just need to write about how you still feel a little nostalgic and bitter when you look at her. It doesn't need to be too much, just a few dozen words. When you write about whether you want to kill a little boy because of money, you just need a few words. If not, that's enough! As a result, you have written so much, and you have given me the same feeling, which can be said to be the feeling given to many readers who have been persuaded to give up. That is, before you, you felt that emotions must be based on what you think they are. But later, you actually wrote about human nature. Yes, you are right to write about human nature, but you did not After all the foreshadowing, you already know the extraordinary aspects of this, and you already have a rough idea that this game is probably just a game. Now that you know this, think of this, and the relationship between you and the brother and sister, shouldn't you reject it immediately? As for you, you didn't write it like this. You still wrote it in the same way as you wrote the emotional drama of your ex-girlfriend! The most ridiculous thing is that many of the comments are the most critical. After knowing the premise, I actually feel that the hesitation and inner movements are human nature. I can tell you clearly that that is not human nature, that is a perversion, a pathological idea, and an inhuman belief! Okay, that's it, if this post is not deleted, everyone with those "human nature" is welcome to comment!

A group of high-level people together should be able to give this book a certain recommendation. Otherwise, the comments will all be low-level, and others will think they were written by the author. (◔◡◔)(◔◡◔)(◔◡◔)

The seven realms of novels! Which one have you arrived at? The seven realms of novels! You got to that one. Obsession period: As the name suggests, when you first enter the world of novels, you will be extremely obsessed with a novel. Whenever you have free time, you will read the novel, and the time spent reading the novel will become longer and longer. Fanatical stage: The state after the entranced stage is no longer enough to satisfy you just by reading novels. You often materialize novels, and occasionally your dreams are all about the world of novels. Addiction period: At this stage, you are already a top-notch master in the novel world and you can no longer satisfy yourself with one novel. You often read two or three novels at the same time, and when you are a complete novel, you will read four or five novels at the same time. Book-hunting period: At this point, one can be called a first-class expert in the novel world. The number of novels he has read is no less than double digits. The ordinary novels have satisfied him and he begins to pay attention to classic novels. Reading novels is no longer limited to a range of fairy tales, fantasy cities, and all major classics. Book-short period: At this stage, the novel can already be called the overlord. Ordinary novels are dismissive. If you open a new account and read the first twenty chapters, you will know whether the novel has the qualifications to become a god (note: it is not 100% accurate, it can only be said to be highly credible). Calm period: In this state, you can be called an emperor. Whether you read the novel or not is all a matter of thought. You can read the novel if you want to, and it can no longer influence you. If you are not satisfied with it, you can forget it and give up without even a trace of hesitation. You will never look back afterwards. The state is so powerful and terrifying. (Note: The credibility of predicting whether a new novel has the qualifications to become a god is much higher than the previous level) Antique Period: This state has become a god. All the legendary figures in the novel world, Shenlong, have the ability to write books (Note: Of course, we will not say that a completed book is a masterpiece. After all, this is the state of reading novels, not writing trumpets). Nine of the ten people who recommended the book read it and the remaining one could not help themselves because they had not read it yet. There is no doubt that the predicted book will come true. This realm of gods also has the legendary eighth realm of eternity, but that realm is too heaven-defying and is not tolerated by the laws of heaven in novels, so it cannot be expressed clearly. Maybe it is because of my lack of strength. No one can express it clearly except those in the eighth realm.

Image, first of all, he and the rich second generation spent money to buy his younger brother's life, but were rejected by the protagonist. At that time, the protagonist was in my brother's modification group and could not be sold for any amount of money. Then I told him that this was a test. I fucking vomited. The rich second generation initially gave me the image that the city was a little deep and purposeful. Anyway, the author's description gave me this impression. I felt that the characters were contradictory. I had read this kind of plot in other novels and thought it was somewhat interesting. However, due to various descriptions in the previous chapters, I felt that the characters of the rich second generation were contradictory. I felt that the author was writing it to disgust me. Then we became friends in less than half a month. I felt that the protagonist was not smart and couldn't be more cautious in doing things. At the beginning, the author wrote that the protagonist had some IQ but he felt that he was very smart even though he had an IQ of 250. After that... The most vicious thing is that after the boss came to the village to rob people, the protagonist thought that the boss was a strong foreigner who did it. The author even described this paragraph: He had the impulse to expose the boss's weakness in front of everyone, and then killed the boss. Here I want to say what a despicable villain the protagonist is. He actually imagined that someone else was worth 100,000, and then wanted to kill him. , I said earlier that the protagonist has some IQ, but here the animation is carried away by interests, and then it is forced to calm down! Be sure to calm down! Author: Your determination was not calm when you were a child. How did you survive until now, or have you been so calm since you were a child? ? ? And be calm. Every time I have a psychological analysis, I have to say it again: "You must be calm when you are calm." It is so tempting. So I vomited the character of the protagonist... There was also a section in the middle (the author said that the readers said it was too poisonous, so the author wanted to write it more realistically, and then write it more noblely, and then the author said that the readers said the protagonist was too virginal, too despicable and vicious. Anyway, it is all my fault) After seeing this, I was poisoned again. Author, have you ever thought about the reason for this? You can't just think about all aspects and then use your own writing style. This is the strange result. If you only focus on one aspect, the readers will at most say that the protagonist is ruthless and cold-blooded. Some may even say that the author is decisive in killing. In other words, the author is somewhat of a saint, but he wouldn't call her a bitch. . It is because of the cold-blooded reality, the nobility, and the final reason, the writing is not good, it is equivalent to the Virgin Bitch, who looks more noble and emotional, but is actually a despicable and selfish villain at heart. I even think the most serious thing is the period of calmness. You must be calm and suppress any impulse. It feels like the protagonist is a despicable and shameless villain, adding insult to injury and being bullied by dogs. The main reason is that the author wants to have more aspects and be realistic and noble at the same time. In the end, a Virgin Bitch was formed, and the success poisoned me to the point of being poisoned. I had survived the previous points, but the success of Boss Ba poisoned me away. . . . I hope the author can absorb his shortcomings and reduce this type of bad writing...

A bit poisonous. Author, you wrote the protagonist's character so well that I am speechless. I can successfully embody this without you. Without Yang Xi's mistakes and reminders, the protagonist would have died of starvation or poisoning. Without Yang Xu's combat power and Yang Xi's perception, you wouldn't have gotten the first prey, let alone the food you borrowed later. I can understand that Sunset Perception is useful for early protagonist development. Yang Xu was different. He had just become a warrior and couldn't keep up with the players. If he wanted to take Yang Xi away, he would have to die. But this way of death? Yangxi was taken away, but as a 'brother' you were indifferent. Kindness no matter what. Favorability will also be reduced. After being rescued, his brother died. And then the protagonist will take her to town? Would you follow someone who has abandoned you? You can also follow the old routine of becoming stronger and resurrecting your brother, then take him away and work hard to finally resurrect him. But that would be boring. This is a novel with a game wallet, and Yang Xu can be resurrected within the rules. Just like a trainer. You might also say that with Yang Xu around, you don't have enough control over Yang Xi. I have nothing to say about this. Anyway, it poisoned me. I give you a full star and don't spray it. Even if I give up, I won't change it. Please write well!

I still have a little experience to reach level 6...

In the early stage, I wrote all about the psychological thoughts of being raped by my ex-girlfriend. This is considered a little bit poisonous. Someone paid him to kill half of his benefactor, but he hesitated. It was considered a little poison, after all, it was just a game to him. But later, Yang Xu, who was half a benefactor and always said he was his younger brother, was written off to death. Even if he was written off to death, he still said hey, he tried his best, who made him impulsive. I felt sick at the time, tried my best? When he saw it, he hid at first, saying that he didn't want to alert the snake. Then when Yang Xu was attacked, he just screamed, even used the blood-boiling skill, and even said that he had tried his best after death. It was really disgusting. How could he still watch this? All I see now is that the protagonist is a wolf with blank eyes, selfish, speaking in a low-key manner while telling others all his information, an imbecile. The summary is that the protagonist is an ungrateful, selfish and hypocritical imbecile with the attributes of a white-eyed wolf.

What is ringing is the bell, what is passing is the years, what is left is the story, what is taken away is the hope, what is expected is the beauty, what is sent is the blessing, I wish you: Happy New Year! Peace and happiness, and rise higher and higher!

The plot and characters are very good. The description is appropriate enough. Only the mystery of this game is well described, and it gives us some hints from time to time, making us have some guesses in our minds. Let us continue to read better. I hope the author will update more.