Chinese Students at Hogwarts

Um. . . . I feel that this protagonist is not likable. He is not mature and steady at all when he is over 30 years old. He is not likable. I have been rua Hermione for several times. The author said that there is no heroine. If there is no heroine, you should not flirt with her. In school, you are such a rua in front of other people's parents. Mintou, let my parents misunderstand you. You are so innocent and irresponsible. If Hermione likes you later, she will have to wonder why she likes you. 2. You and Harry took a speed car to the academy, knowing that something would happen, and what happened to you was even more serious. It was obvious that You must have a powerful family, Longhu Mountain, and they can settle things for you later. What makes people feel wrong is why there are so many eight-eyed spiders in the Forbidden Forest in the academy, putting students in danger. 3. When you were drunk and rode a dragon, Norbert, went out to fly with Muggles. You didn't see it afterward and felt that you were wrong. It's better for the family to deal with the situation. Most of the purebloods in the family give face to it. I don't think it's a big deal. It's too indulgent. The main character is too unlikable. The main character's strength is currently better than that of the same level, but it's not as satisfying as not feeling boring and unlikable after more than 100 pictures. . . . . .

Many friends compare real-life religion with the book. The author once again solemnly declares that it must not be combined with real-life religion. Everything mentioned in this article is limited to this book and does not reflect any real world. It's not easy to write code, please let me go

The beginning of your novel really amazed me, but as you went on to write it, you made the same mistakes as other old novels or most of the current novels. As I write, the quality gradually declines, and it becomes more and more serious. When it reaches more than 160 pictures, it's so messy. It's really hard to put into words. I saw Chapter 168. To be honest, I really wanted to curse people. There are also changes in the plot. To be honest, you have changed a lot, but there are also many things that you have not changed at all. Gradually, it feels like the protagonist has become a nanny. There are other plots that follow, which makes me want to curse. Let's talk about the method of dealing with it based on interests. Everyone talks about that elf. House elves are trained and then become a company, let's just say, that you can hire. What kind of manager is Ron's mother? Or something like that. You still do this. Can. But what do you think? I think what that sentence means is, do you want to give that company to others? This thing of yours is no longer helping you, this thing is taking advantage of you. When I saw this, my whole brain was buzzing. My impulse at that time was to click on this thing and that one. Introduce the cover of your novel, and make sure I can follow the introduction. An hour ago, the novel that I felt was amazing was the urge to confirm it, which was very strong. Just can't believe it. A novel that had amazed me a few hours ago could do this. In short, the more I watch it, the more disappointed it becomes, and the more I watch it, the more disappointed it becomes. Okay, no more pushing. So be it.

Meng Xin, please read, please vote, please... Hey, what are you asking for, no more

Qingluan has been with your family for several generations! Do you call her Bird Sister? Your family has been called "Senior" for several generations, but now you have become "Sister Bird"? Qingluan is so casual!

This Harry Potter fanfic is one of the best I have read so far. Whether it is the background setting of the protagonist or the plot direction, it is very novel and interesting, and it can catch the eye. Big cheers for the author! ! !

When you were watching Harry Potter as a child, did you ever feel that every magic cast by the characters seemed to connect the thoughts of the ancestors when they released the same magic in the long history, and connect the determination and will of today's people after going through ups and downs? When your fantasy of mystery and beauty boils in your chest, and you want to fight side by side with them, have you ever felt a little unwilling? I am not willing to be full of enthusiasm, but I am inspired by Western articles. I am not willing to be filled with enthusiasm, but I can only imagine fighting side by side with Westerners. There is no doubt that Chinese culture is vast and profound, and its charm lies almost in the principles themselves. So much so that when people summarize, they always simplify and omit those touching stories, because their charm will always be discovered in new stories, and there is no need to waste pen and ink to write stories to prove it. But this creates barriers to understanding for those who have neither special interest in understanding Chinese culture nor sufficient life experience to understand it. I don't think we need to be particularly eager to let the influence of Chinese culture cover every corner of the world, but seeing the fertile land of HP in front of us, and the Chinese culture that is unknown and even misunderstood and belittled, I can't help but feel an unstoppable ambition in my heart - to give HP people some small Chinese shock. For this "China Shock", I think we should create a mysterious, powerful, majestic and modest "Magic China". The "Magical China" I want is not like "Fantastic Beasts III", where Chinese culture is arbitrarily tampered with and enjoyed; it is not a powerful and superior cultivation of immortality and dimension advancement, which is the fantasy of the Qing Dynasty; nor is it a portrayal of the Chinese magic world as corrupt and incompetent to maintain the legitimacy of the original book's lack of description of the Chinese magic world. The "Magic China" I want is independent, with a strong country and a prosperous people; gentle but domineering; fair and just, with the world in mind - yes, it is the dream of a big country that changes the soup without changing the medicine. It is the dream of a big country that must be realized even if there are more magic and more variables! The rabbits in the magical world also have the same dream of a great country as we do. Now it's time for us to realize her! We need articles to explain our dreams, we need works to fill it with flesh and blood, and we need the emotions of thousands of readers to give it life. This is the first novel that builds her into a comprehensive skeleton, but it will not be the last. As long as this high-quality market exists, novels that follow this path will continue to emerge, and we will protect this path, eliminate the bad and retain the good, and escort it until it prospers!

All power has a source. Marvel's magic is borrowed power. What about the source of magic in the Harry Potter world? There is also the need to carry the power, which is the core point of the magic world. The wand is just a medium, and the magician is the bearer of power. The author has always deviated from the core and made whatever he wishes come true. Putting aside the source of power, the world of Harry Potter was developed based on alchemy (refer to the Philosopher's Stone). Everything needs to be supported by knowledge (refer to Potions). The release of magic also has its own principles. At least it affects reality through power. It is necessary to understand the magic first and then release the magic. The protagonist releases it directly from the imagination. It is too ridiculous. It is like others learning the structure of a vehicle and then manufacturing it.

I don't want to say too much. I personally don't think this book can achieve such a high rating.

Only those little kids with snotty noses often miss their beautiful sister, and will bring some biscuits, hard candies and the like for themselves to eat, thinking about her goodness. It wasn't until Uncle Wang said he saw her on the stage that the memory that had just sunken came to the surface again. But what Uncle Wang said was too scary. In the middle of the night, Leng Qianyu, who had been missing for several months, was singing on the stage... The villagers who heard about this couldn't help but tremble and laughed that the old man must have been alone for a long time and drank too much. Uncle Wang thought about it. He drank half a kilogram of liquor at that time, which was quite a bit too much. But despite this, everyone is still a little scared. Within a few days, people began to die in the village. Some people's faces changed. ............ "Dad, the missing Leng Qianyu has a younger brother? Where is her younger brother?" Zhang Xiao recalled the information he had seen before. Leng Qianyu's parents died early and because her parents insisted on giving birth to a boy. The family was fined for exceeding the childbirth limit and was completely destitute. The child was still a fool and became the laughing stock of the town. Within two years, he died in a car accident while going to the provincial capital. He left behind Leng Qianyu, who was just 18 years old, and his 3-year-old brother. Thanks to Leng Qianyu's singing ability and good looks, she was chosen by the theater troupe and was able to support herself and her younger brother. There are also cases where Dad communicates individually with the person in charge of the case. Zhang Chengdao's tone was a little heavy: "He starved to death... No one thought of him. He starved to death in the small bungalow. It is said that someone once heard his howling in the room. He thought he was mentally ill and no one cared about him. " He paused and said softly: "When a neighbor finally came to see me, he had been starved to death for several days. The one who was found was said to have eaten feces from hunger (Note 1)" Zhang Xiao stopped and looked at Zhang Chengdao in shock. Starved to death? Why did you starve to death? Are all the neighbors dead? Even 30 years later, Zhang Xiao still feels that his neighbors are still full of humane feelings. Especially during the three years of isolation, countless people have realized the true meaning of distant relatives being inferior to close neighbors. Isn't this the simple nineties? How so? Zhang Chengdao shook his head: "They all insisted that they thought she was ill. They also said that Leng Qianyu often left early and came back late. No one knew she hadn't come back." This case was just an ordinary disappearance case at first, but a few months later, when Uncle Wang heard someone singing on the stage. One after another, people reported hearing the sound of opera on the stage at night. At this time, something started to go wrong. People began to die one after another in the town. The dead looked ferocious, as if they had suffered a great fright. In three consecutive months, nearly twenty people died. At first it was men, but now women also started to die. The appearance of death is different, the tongue is stretched out long, like hanging. Only the child was safe and sound. After a long period of local investigation, there were no clues at all. There was widespread panic in several nearby towns and countless people moved away. Even the superiors from Anqing came over in the first month, but the people from Anqing couldn't find anything either. In this way, the report was made level by level, and when it reached Zhao Yuanxu, the scene of calling his father happened. The father and son walked forward in silence. The geographical location of Wangjiang was not good, and the development was not very advanced. The landmark of the county was a big carousel. Except for some factories and government departments, few high-rise buildings are seen. Even more so in the town they went to. Where you enter, the doors of every household are closed, with yellow symbols stuck on the doors, and not far away there are traces of burning incense and paper money. Not even a human figure could be seen. Zhang Xiao finally couldn't help but break the dull atmosphere: "Dad, how should we investigate this situation?" Zhang Chengdao held his chin and thought for a moment: "In the past, it was all about 'seeing, hearing and asking'. When I arrived at a place, I would ask the locals about various legends and the like. No matter how bizarre they were, they should not be taken lightly. Because chances are, that's the truth. But this is what ordinary disciples would do, your father and I... I'm used to going straight to Huanglong, finding the rightful owner directly, and catching him first! " Zhang Xiao nodded, touched it, and suddenly reacted: "Huh? Let's talk about it after we catch it?" "Of course, the appearance of ghosts is not a normal thing. Most of them will hide something and kill them without asking anything. It is no different from killing people directly. Generally speaking, in addition to calming down these things, we also need to understand the cause and effect. If there is any last wish, if it is not too difficult, we can do it. " Zhang Chengdao raised his head and glanced at the sky. It was still early and the sun was shining brightly in the sky. The July sun radiates its own light and heat unscrupulously, making the surrounding area white and hot even at a glance. In other words, neither father nor son are ordinary people. If ordinary people stand in the sun like this, they really can't stand it. "Find a place to rest first and see if there is anyone who can ask. The yang energy is too strong now and nothing can be found. Let's wait for the transition of yin and yang at dusk." Zhang Xiao naturally has no objection. Just because he is not afraid of heat does not mean he likes to bask in the sun. The two walked for a while and finally found a canteen that was still open. It is said that the canteen is actually its own square. A square opening is opened in the back wall and equipped with sliders. The boss stays at home. When the door is closed, small wooden boards are stuck into the chute to seal it.