The Great Salvation of All Heavens and Worlds

It seems that the shadow has not been found yet! Could it be that I missed it? It's impossible. I shouldn't have read it all without missing a chapter! ! By the way, this dungeon contains a number of spy movies. I feel it would be best to write them separately. It can also produce several dungeons, and the ending is a bit unfinished! ! ! ! It's a bit regretful that Xiao Gu, Fang Min, Wang Shu, and Junzi didn't receive a harem, and there was no ambiguity. They were mentioned in one stroke. Of course, it was hard to understand and write it down, right? ! ! It's time to go. I wish I could just write about urban reality and science fiction. I have no interest in ancient martial arts and immortality. .

To be honest, it's annoying for people who read it. I don't think people who read this novel are rushing to learn knowledge. Although I also know that you have done a lot of research for this, but to be honest, Xiao Ao Jianghu has written 130 chapters, and more than half of them are about scientific examinations. Forget about the scientific examination, after all, this is a relatively new development route, but you have at least 50 chapters talking about the scientific examination topics, ancient texts, translations, answers, and quotations from classics. Sometimes you talk about a chapter for each question. Are you popularizing science or writing a novel? Your title and introduction attracted me, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I came here in high spirits and left disappointed.

The writing is okay, but the biggest failure is the soul travel. What will you do in the later stage? Use Lu Xinghe's body to turn yourself green? The child with Geng Geng is not his biological child, so there is no one else he can cuckold with!

In the second world, Lin Pingzhi simply couldn't see that the world was all officialdom, and then in the scientific examination, he simply said: "Ocean, you are all water."

I don't know if I've read too many books, or if I'm tired of fantasy, fairy tales and other major genres. It's good to read urban fan fiction like this once in a while. This book can be said that every world is a short story, especially the urban ones. I can say that I have never watched the original drama, but it still looks pretty good in this book. Each short script has the kind of daily dog ​​food that looks very comfortable. It's just that the martial arts plots are a bit unsatisfactory. I don't know if it's a mental issue. In this book, I can't stand the small scripts outside the city. I just skip reading.

In the world of martial arts, if you take the imperial examination and it has almost nothing to do with martial arts, what's going on?

I would like to give you a suggestion: don't write too many pictures about the daily world, especially about school, such as homework, etc. Don't write too clearly. Blurring is done in one stroke. We are here to read novels, not to see you do homework. Don't write too many pictures about the daily world. I think ten pictures are enough. You can write more about what we are familiar with. For example, you can write 20 pictures about martial arts. The only drawback is that there are too many pictures about the daily world, and there are so few about what we are familiar with. Who the hell wants to read about the daily world?

This is my first time writing a novel. I want to express the story in my heart. I am very happy to see people reading it. I'm happy to see the growth of collections and recommendations every time in the Writer's Backstage. Every collection and recommendation you make is important. Thank you everyone for your recommendations and collections, thank you!

Most of them are urban and period dramas, and there are two or three martial arts dramas. The one with the highest combat power in the world seems to be the one who breaks through the Grand Master (the division of military force seems to be acquired, innate, grand master, grand master, and then it becomes extraordinary (I don't know)). Furthermore, each world can be viewed as a small plot without conflict (it doesn't matter if you skip it). As for whether to breed horses or not, it shouldn't be the case. Each time the world comes out, the memory will be blurred? (Is it still sealed? Is it a documentary?) I can't remember clearly.

The author should write about modern times. You really can't write ancient times or martial arts well. The whole process is smooth and the plot has no waves. Just like the Ming Dynasty, the Jianghu did not appear. The writing in modern dramas is okay and very warm. Come on.