I Happily Started My Journey to the Heavens from a Young Age

Are you sure it was written by one person? It feels very strange. I remember that it was previously set that each world would have initial funds, and then it would become assets that match the identity at each time! Now it's gone! This article about Zeng Juvenile feels very strange! It should be said that it has been very strange since 1988. Although you feel uncomfortable, you do not change or interfere with the plot, and write it purely for the sake of watery words and watery plot. It is disgusting! The attributes are so high, but a superhuman time traveler protagonist lives such a humble life. He can only follow the plot and only touch on the necessary parts when they are related to the protagonist! And you have never returned to the world you have experienced, so you are traveling with a game mentality. In this case, you should not even have the courage to be a playboy! It's very frustrating, you know? I have been an emperor several times, but I am still so petty. No wonder my grades are not that good. I am only a member of QQ. Otherwise, I will never read your book! Don't talk about cool articles! At least some of the things you don't agree with can be changed by stretching out your hand. Why can't you change it? You can't write without the plot? Are you afraid of collapse?

The writing is not good to read, so just deal with it and read it to save yourself the trouble of looking for it.

Various water plots since 1988! The role of the protagonist is minimal! You look pitiful and humble... You are the protagonist of the time traveler! Can't make any changes you want to make? The Qiao family was like a joke. Nothing was done. The mother didn't die, and then the mother didn't die. The life trajectories of the younger brothers and sisters basically didn't change? It's so funny. The butterfly effect doesn't exist at all? A child has been without a mother since he was a child, and there is a huge difference between having a mother, isn't it? What's more, the protagonist started making money at the age of thirteen, and there was actually a situation where Simei was given away for adoption? Do you have any brains? It was because Qiao's father was away from home all day, and his uncle's family helped raise a child, but he still couldn't take care of the four other children in the Qiao family, so he thought of letting the youngest one who needed care be adopted! The result actually still appears now? If you don't know the plot, you can't write it? Or is it a convenient word count? Is it deliberately disgusting? It feels like being brainless and insulting your IQ

This author is very good at writing about modern times, but is not suitable for writing about ancient times, especially the ancient times of war. There is no common sense at all, it looks too dramatic. Especially in the copy of Jiuzhou Piaomiaolu, the author established the Central Plains military system in the prairie, as well as infantry phalanx and archer phalanx. There is no shortage of horses on the grassland. Everyone rides a horse from childhood to adulthood, so you can forget about setting up an infantry phalanx. They also concentrated on training and military centralization. The total area of ​​Inner Mongolia and Outer Mongolia is 3 million square kilometers. The ancient nomadic people have remained unchanged for thousands of years, with only over one million people. On average, 2 square kilometers support one person. It's not because they engage in family planning. It's because the grasslands can only support so many cattle and sheep, and the dairy products and meat produced by cattle and sheep can only feed so many people. The author has high military centralization in the grassland and trains together every day. Just ask the hundreds of thousands of troops, plus hundreds of thousands of other people. How to feed 300,000 people? If it relies on dairy products and meat produced by cattle and horses. It would take 600,000 square kilometers of grassland to feed these cattle and sheep. This is equivalent to 6 Zhejiang. Both dairy products and meat have a shelf life. I just want to ask how the logistics deliver these things across 6 Zhejiang provinces to the protagonist within the shelf life. And there are so many people delivering them every day. I guess the author was watching the Mongolian expedition to the west, driving cattle and sheep to protect an army of hundreds of thousands. But others marched every day, and the cattle and sheep ate grass along the way. Because in the same place, so many cattle and sheep were gathered together, and they ate all the grass in two or three days. But if you march every day, that will give you time to train the army. Forget about training, we will engage in a blitzkrieg of hundreds of thousands of troops during the war. Huo Qubing only dared to bring 8,000. With hundreds of thousands of troops, what do you eat? Bring supplies to whomever you attack. Individuals bring dry food. They all starve to death before seeing anyone. You don't think that fighting on the grassland is like fighting in a small Japanese village. You will be at the other side's house within two days of leaving home. The reason why Huo Qubing only led 8,000 men in his blitzkrieg was because he relied on war to support war, relying entirely on seizures. However, the seizures were only enough to feed a few thousand people. Because more than a million people were spread out over a grassland of 3 million square kilometers, the land was vast and sparsely populated, so there were countless tribes encountered every week. The things that could be seized, regardless of the future, were to kill the chickens and devour all the eggs, which would only be enough to feed a few thousand people. If you don't meet anyone for a long time, the group will be wiped out in minutes. Therefore, there was only one Huo Qubing in thousands of years, and others did not dare to fight such a risky war. The protagonist led hundreds of thousands of people in a blitzkrieg, and they would starve to death after leaving home for ten days and a half.

Qing Yunian's writing is like a piece of defense. Immortal cultivators are still afraid of the great master, so they can just push it flatly. Moreover, the plug-in is too big. Silly girls can travel to the future to save Ye Qingmei. I also write a request. The Machiavellian drama was written as a dog for you. How did it get the score of 8.4?

Finished reading a great book. Although the novel was a bit toxic in the early stages, it was quite exciting later on. If you want meat and meat, you need dry goods and dry goods. Meat is meat show, you understand? If you want useful information, there is useful information. It's a pity that there are only more than 540 pictures. It's a pity after reading it. It should be said that I was quite reluctant to part with it. After all, it is extremely difficult to find a novel that suits my taste and has a lot of meat. Especially in today's novels, each protagonist looks like a monk, a eunuch, or Liu Xiahui. Don't eat any meat that comes to your mouth. Write an emotional scene. If you like it, just ask for it. Straightforward and quick. As for the emotional drama written by the author, the most outrageous thing among game novels is the emotional drama that has nearly seventy-six or seven hundred chapters. I'm not exaggerating. I fucking watched it. Six to seven hundred pictures are written about emotional scenes. Can you imagine how delayed that thing is? There were at least 200 or 100 films entered that were about emotional scenes. They are all writing emotional dramas, and they are all so damn late, and as for that novel, there are at most ten pictures of me. I even ate it right from the beginning. If you compare goods, you will have to throw them away, if you compare people with others, you will die, and if you lose, you will lose. No place to be ashamed of. Oh, by the way, to get back to the topic, this novel really has a systematic start, which I quite agree with, but what the hell is this little joy? I was confused. There is also a series of events in the author's introduction. Except for a certain detective, which I am quite looking forward to, to be honest, I am not interested in the rest of the content at all. On the contrary, I am quite disgusted. A time traveler, if he has to travel through these ordinary worlds, the best he can do is martial arts. If you want to insist that there is a fairy, then it is a little bit. After all, the system in the Magic Phone is strong, right? It can travel through time and space, but is it weak? It can actually be poisoned by pesticides. It was extremely embarrassing. I don't understand why such a world is so easy to travel through. Forget it, no more pressing. Do you have any family? Is there such a book shortage? Is there one that has a lot of meat? As for the classmate who wrote the emotional scene, it was easy and quick. For example, if you accept a heroine, the number of photos should be limited to less than ten, or twenty or thirty photos are acceptable. As for accepting a heroine, I insist on dragging out hundreds of photos, or if it's more than 30 photos, don't tell me (›´ω`‹) I really don't understand it(›´ω`‹) That novel seems to be called Uncle or Big Boss -_-|| It's still on my bookshelf. If you're interested, you can click in and read it. I believe I won't let you down╮(￣▽￣)╭ Although the front is a bit poisonous, the following content will not let anyone say it, as long as your aesthetic sense is not bad, such as those who like hat novels, or those who have a son-in-law, or those weird and weird books-_-|| Then you can watch you won't be disappointed Okay, let's get back to the topic, do you have any recommendations? I want meat, I want meat The best ones have both meat and dry goods. Of course, I only have meat, so I can accept that. After all, the novel I read recently is better than the monk. The monk is better than the eunuch. The eunuch is better than Liu Xiahui. He is simply inferior to pigs and dogs, inferior to beasts, he has no place and is extremely disgusting (=_=)

Anyway, you don't care about anything, so just kill them all. If you don't write emotions, stories, or backgrounds, then you will fight the world alone. Be the Emperor of Liyang at the beginning. After traveling through so many worlds, you still have to call others dad. In fact, there is no second person in the world who can be your dad. You can grab what you want. No need to compromise or reason, but the Lord The character still hopes that others will listen to his reasons and that others will recognize him. He has no goals, no direction and just drifts with the crowd. Others hit me, I hit him, others, me, me, her. Neither the protagonist nor the supporting characters are highlighted, making all the characters dispensable. There is no plot, no dialogue, no story. The protagonist will only stand in the shadows, and the whole world is collectively demoralized.

It's well written, but I think a drama should last a lifetime.

The writing is too poor and rubbish. Can you write it well?

Every time I see Young Guy Xing and Shao Bai, I feel that Xiao Se, King Langya, and Xiao Ruofeng are quite hypocritical. They all play with the Xiao royal family and compete for the throne. In the end, they are uncles and nephews, and they have a lot of fun. , Each one plays brother and brother, in the end, the Xiao royal family, no matter what, are the winners, but in the end, whoever they chase, they play to fight for the throne. Hundreds of thousands of soldiers were disrupted and organized into other armies. The commander, general Officials and soldiers have no hope of promotion in the future. They are either squeezed out or marginalized. They have no hope of promotion. They may even be secretly killed on the battlefield. They will be labeled in the future. Who is the military member of such and such, and the family is dead. The hunted, hunted, descendants. The sect must live carefully. The disciples of the sect are either killed by the dark river of the royal family's black gloves or assassinated. Being related to these two uncles and nephews will bring bad luck for eight lifetimes.