Heavens: Return Merits Starting from Mortals
by It's Really Hard To Choose A Name
About This Novel
A real mortal in the mortal world, he finally changed a bottle of elixir, but it attracted immortal cultivators to covet him. Fortunately, he still has a golden finger, which allows him to overdraw tens of millions of merits and get the opportunity to go to the heavens. It's just that this system doesn't feel right! What an electronic wooden fish, what a cyber merit! Mortal world: Xin's father said, "I'd like to ask fellow Taoist Li to take care of my little girl." Li Changsheng: "Don't worry, Fellow Daoist Xin, I will do my best." Some years later. Xin Ruyin said angrily: "Is this how you take care of me?" Li Changsheng remained silent. Merit +10 0000 The world of Zhuxian: Li Changsheng: "Hey, obediently hand over your skills, and both of you can live." Baguio: "If you lie to me, I will never let you go even to the ends of the world!" ... Li Changsheng: "Okay, there are hundreds of millions of minor problems. I believe you won't care." Baguio: "Don't run!" Merit +10 0000
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It's suitable for writing original works, which may attract people, but writing fan fiction is a waste.
I can't calm down and keep watching.
The writing of the plug-in is not concise and clear, and the key points cannot be grasped after time travel. I always care about inexplicable details. In addition, traveling back too fast after time traveling is the biggest drawback, and there is also an inexplicable choice of three.
Some plots are unreasonable and even a bit outrageous
The author himself said that Baguio was only six years old, so how could he know the Ghost King Sect's Kung Fu and the Heavenly Book? Even if he knew it, how could he have the Ghost King's insights? The Immortal Cultivation Techniques are not martial arts moves and yet he could teach them along with the insights. That would be a way of cutting off a person's path to immortality. Furthermore, six-year-old Baguio can drag away one-third of the people of the Ghost King Sect to build a new mountain. Do you want to read what you are writing?
Comparison between the realm of mortals and Zhuxian (if you have different opinions, please leave a comment)
Divide Zhuxian's world skills into three major realms, corresponding to the mortal world. Take Qingyunmen Tai Chi Xuanqing Dao as an example. Yuqing has nine levels in total, the first four levels are the Qi training stage; the last five levels are the foundation building stage. Note: The fourth level is the object-controlling realm, but generally speaking, the fifth level can perfectly control the magic weapon (the magic weapon in the Zhuxian world can only be used in the object-controlling realm); Supernatant - golden elixir; Taiqing - Nascent Soul; Beast God, Zhuxian Sword Formation (Unlocked Version) - Transformation into God. The world is different, and realm is not exactly the same as combat power. The author considers longevity and the mobilization of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth. He has different ideas. Please point them out.
The plug-in is vague, and no explanation is given. The writing style is too funny in the context of this simple fairy tale, which is very uncomfortable. The writing is very boring, not very high-energy, mainly because it is unpleasant and very procrastinating. I don't like it very much.
It looks a bit messy. I write a little bit here and a little bit here, and I suggest you change it. At the very least, you can't write like this in Chapter 10 of Pier.
It's too confusing, inexplicable, and the overall plot is unclear and uninteresting.
I can't understand Goldfinger, and I can't understand the character of the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist is always replaced.
It's just so so. I always travel quickly. Since merits are hard to come by, why do you travel so quickly? Just for the plot? It makes you angry.
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Official(51)Scraped 3d ago
Give me a membership
Send a benefit to brothers, come and get membership
Literary Youth and Riddler
It's suitable for writing original works, which may attract people, but writing fan fiction is a waste.
I can't calm down and keep watching.
The writing of the plug-in is not concise and clear, and the key points cannot be grasped after time travel. I always care about inexplicable details. In addition, traveling back too fast after time traveling is the biggest drawback, and there is also an inexplicable choice of three.
Some plots are unreasonable and even a bit outrageous
The author himself said that Baguio was only six years old, so how could he know the Ghost King Sect's Kung Fu and the Heavenly Book? Even if he knew it, how could he have the Ghost King's insights? The Immortal Cultivation Techniques are not martial arts moves and yet he could teach them along with the insights. That would be a way of cutting off a person's path to immortality. Furthermore, six-year-old Baguio can drag away one-third of the people of the Ghost King Sect to build a new mountain. Do you want to read what you are writing?
Comparison between the realm of mortals and Zhuxian (if you have different opinions, please leave a comment)
Divide Zhuxian's world skills into three major realms, corresponding to the mortal world. Take Qingyunmen Tai Chi Xuanqing Dao as an example. Yuqing has nine levels in total, the first four levels are the Qi training stage; the last five levels are the foundation building stage. Note: The fourth level is the object-controlling realm, but generally speaking, the fifth level can perfectly control the magic weapon (the magic weapon in the Zhuxian world can only be used in the object-controlling realm); Supernatant - golden elixir; Taiqing - Nascent Soul; Beast God, Zhuxian Sword Formation (Unlocked Version) - Transformation into God. The world is different, and realm is not exactly the same as combat power. The author considers longevity and the mobilization of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth. He has different ideas. Please point them out.
The plug-in is vague, and no explanation is given. The writing style is too funny in the context of this simple fairy tale, which is very uncomfortable. The writing is very boring, not very high-energy, mainly because it is unpleasant and very procrastinating. I don't like it very much.
It looks a bit messy. I write a little bit here and a little bit here, and I suggest you change it. At the very least, you can't write like this in Chapter 10 of Pier.
It's too confusing, inexplicable, and the overall plot is unclear and uninteresting.
I can't understand Goldfinger, and I can't understand the character of the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist is always replaced.
It's just so so. I always travel quickly. Since merits are hard to come by, why do you travel so quickly? Just for the plot? It makes you angry.
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