Traveling at the Same Time: Everyone in the World is a Talent

The more leisurely the protagonist is, the more ruthless and meaningless the writing feels. To be honest, I don't want to write it now. It's my personal feeling. To be honest, to be honest, the writing is quite good. But looking at the characters of the protagonists in these three worlds, I always feel that the protagonists are terrible. That kind of character in the bones. Anyway, this is how I feel in novels. To be honest, I often read novels about the same time, and many books have the same character. In the early stage, I felt that the character was okay, but the more I wrote, the more I wrote about the character.

The sentences don't make sense, and the fight scenes are written in a mess.

This writing is really messy, messy! Messy! Messy!

It's so messy, I can't tell the difference even though I'm wearing it back and forth.

First of all, it's very messy. You can even mess up some small details. Secondly, you are following the chat group routine with the name of traveling at the same time. That is to say, changing the kernel is not a chat group, and the rest are all chat groups... The spirits and spirits of each world are not superimposed or added. Persistence, non-real-time, etc., Have nothing to do with traveling through genres at the same time. It is as if the body is a toy, and everyone is playing with each other. Every time the core is changed, in the eyes of outsiders, it is a different person. The person who originally knew it was not able to do it, and the person who did not know it suddenly became able to do it a little bit, and it is still limited.

It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. You can't exchange memories or exchange information back and forth.

It seems to me that I am in a fog, and I have access to everything. TM came up and did it like this. I don't want to give it a try. Everyone will hold a grudge in their hearts. This is not purely an offending person, but it is thankless. Also, there is a very powerful person opposite this thing. Are you sure that Xu San's telekinesis can save people?

I can only say that the writing is so messy! At the same time, there are too many differences in time travel characters and wisdom. You might as well just write a chat group type in the heavens from the beginning.

There are some problems. The transitions in several worlds are too abrupt. Sometimes it feels like a story has not been finished, and there are still some unfinished feelings that have been transferred to another world. There is also a brief introduction to the default background. You have to understand that some readers are. Cloud readers, for example, many people don't understand the heroes you mentioned. They don't know what the default background of this world is. You can't write some things as default facts. Most people may only have a rough understanding of it, but if you ignore these things, it will be awkward and uncomfortable to read. Like some popular anime, you can ignore the background setting, but for unpopular anime, you can't ignore anything other than the main line. If what you write involves, for example, the well-known Bleach Naruto One Piece, because this is the most involved in fan comics , even if you don't write about the things involved, most people know the plot. For example, I have never watched One Piece, Bleach, or Naruto. I only know one or two episodes, but I know most of the plot. I will understand it after reading more novels. For another example, what you wrote involves these three events. Of course it doesn't matter if you are alone. This is a very popular anime some time ago, so it doesn't matter even if you don't write the background setting. But Qin Shi Mingyue's popularity has dropped a lot now, but it's still barely enough. But what I can understand about the group of heroes you wrote is that in the version of Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying, you mentioned that the players also have plots such as going down the mountain. I have no idea what they are like, so there is no sense of substitution in reading, and it is a bit strange. Also, I feel a bit unsatisfied about what I wrote. I don't know why. Come on, logically speaking, when you write about Dian Lao Le Zi, you should have the feeling of destroying the plot, but one of the stories you wrote is about practicing in the mountains, and you also cosplayed a story about Monkey King in Journey to the West. A world is written about one person who is just practicing. Qin Shi is a little better, and engages in some competition for hegemony. But I feel that your thinking is too restrictive. There is no need to be so restrictive. This kind of fast-traveling novel about multiple people traveling through time is originally meant to be enjoyable. If you don't feel excited at the beginning, it will be difficult to continue watching later.

In the early stage, the descriptions of Yi Tianli and Bei Jinyi looked very awkward, and the sentences in some places did not make sense. Although the meaning can be understood, it affected the perception. In Yi Ren, the protagonist is forcibly tested by Nadu Tong. After injuring the opponent, he is imprisoned and has to please the opponent before he can be released. Although I know it is for the development of the plot, I still feel a little uncomfortable watching it. After all, the protagonist was tricked without doing anything bad. It was pretty good after that.