Douluo: Bibi Dong's Jiu Sword Immortal
About This Novel
Jun Moxi accidentally obtained the inheritance of the Jiujianxian and traveled through the Holy Soul Village of Douluo Continent. Cultivation was accidentally broken by Tang San, who knelt down and begged to become a disciple of Shushan. Jun Moxi decisively refused and was recorded in the small book of ways to die. Fortunately, Jun Moxi awakened his twin martial souls, the Jiu Xian Sword and the Jiu Gourd, and his innate soul power reached level 20, so he was recommended to Wuhun Palace Academy. Bibi Dong personally visited him, devoted all his efforts to cultivate her, and even made his daughter Qian Renxue make a marriage contract with him. While Tang San was studying with the master, Jun Moxi had already led Bibi Dong to plunder the fairy grass. When Tang San entered Shrek Academy, Jun Moxi had already begun training in the Killing City. When Tang San participated in the Soul Master Competition, Jun Moxi had already successfully obtained the Killing God Domain and made a strong return. When the Wuhun Empire was established, Jun Moxi had already reached level 100. Before the two empires could form an alliance, the fourth prince of Tiandou was beheaded by him. Before the Star Luo Empire could gather its forces, the capital city was besieged. The sword rides on the wind to slay demons in the world, drinks hundreds of cups of fine wine, and dances drunkenly to kill the god king with the long sword. One person, one sword, arrogant in the world. From then on, Bibi Dong's family has one more Jiu Sword Immortal... Dai Mubai said: "I surrender, Tang San. If you want to fight, you can fight yourself." Tang San: "He became a god before I even rose up. It's such a bully!" Bibi Dong: "As expected of you, you are my son-in-law. I have nothing to worry about." Qian Renxue: "Why do I feel like I'm not worthy of him!" Hu Liena: "Mo Xi is so handsome!" ...
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Official(7)Scraped 4d ago
Here comes another sword player. You don't know how to swing a sword, so just kill a dragon in one go. And the name of the soul skill is blood boiling, right?
I probably won't update this book
Let's all disperse
Author, when will your book Jiujianxian be updated?
New book released, incomparably cool writing, no abuse in the whole process!
New books need care, collection, and praise. The author guarantees that there will be no less than four updates a day. The more support there is, the more powerful the updates will be.
They are all invincible. They don't accept a few female protagonists, and then grab the female protagonists in other planes. All kinds of invincibles, fighting, devouring, using force, crushing the protagonists, and stealing their female protagonists.
The writing is excellent and good, don't stop and update more.
Some personal opinions and new book suggestions
It's quite good. The protagonist has his own principles. At the same time, this writing method can also feel the growth of the protagonist more intuitively. But there are also some flaws. For example, Matthew Nuo, the master of the branch hall, can actually know information about God. Although this information may be public, it also makes people feel untrue. Secondly, Tang Hao actually had no intention of killing the protagonist. After all, Tang Hao must have known that the Wuhun Palace would recruit talented civilian soul masters. Although Tang Hao may have wanted to use the protagonist to train Tang San, it was unlikely that someone like Tang Hao, who had the hatred of killing his wife, would do such an act of fraternizing against the enemy. Of course, these two points are based on reality, and this is writing a novel, so the flaws cannot be concealed. As for the protagonist's soul ring, it must have light and dark attributes. If possible, try to merge the two attributes into one soul ring. I suggest that this soul ring should be the last link of the Jiu Xian Sword. After all, it feels like adding it to the Jiu Xian Gourd is not as good as directly adding it to the Jiu Xian Sword. The recommended attributes of Jiuxian Gourd are the five elements, plus the three attributes of wind, electricity, and space. The seventh soul skill, Wuhun Avatar, has an enhanced attribute added to it to strengthen the other eight attributes and also help teammates. At the same time, if the author opens a new book, he can try not to participate in the awakening of the martial soul. After all, the restrictions of the soul master are written in the article, and he can try to find his own way. This kind of subject matter is also more attractive. If possible, he can add a villain who uses the martial soul to control the world. Finally, I hope my suggestions can help the author
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 4d ago
Here comes another sword player. You don't know how to swing a sword, so just kill a dragon in one go. And the name of the soul skill is blood boiling, right?
I probably won't update this book
Let's all disperse
Author, when will your book Jiujianxian be updated?
New book released, incomparably cool writing, no abuse in the whole process!
New books need care, collection, and praise. The author guarantees that there will be no less than four updates a day. The more support there is, the more powerful the updates will be.
They are all invincible. They don't accept a few female protagonists, and then grab the female protagonists in other planes. All kinds of invincibles, fighting, devouring, using force, crushing the protagonists, and stealing their female protagonists.
The writing is excellent and good, don't stop and update more.
Some personal opinions and new book suggestions
It's quite good. The protagonist has his own principles. At the same time, this writing method can also feel the growth of the protagonist more intuitively. But there are also some flaws. For example, Matthew Nuo, the master of the branch hall, can actually know information about God. Although this information may be public, it also makes people feel untrue. Secondly, Tang Hao actually had no intention of killing the protagonist. After all, Tang Hao must have known that the Wuhun Palace would recruit talented civilian soul masters. Although Tang Hao may have wanted to use the protagonist to train Tang San, it was unlikely that someone like Tang Hao, who had the hatred of killing his wife, would do such an act of fraternizing against the enemy. Of course, these two points are based on reality, and this is writing a novel, so the flaws cannot be concealed. As for the protagonist's soul ring, it must have light and dark attributes. If possible, try to merge the two attributes into one soul ring. I suggest that this soul ring should be the last link of the Jiu Xian Sword. After all, it feels like adding it to the Jiu Xian Gourd is not as good as directly adding it to the Jiu Xian Sword. The recommended attributes of Jiuxian Gourd are the five elements, plus the three attributes of wind, electricity, and space. The seventh soul skill, Wuhun Avatar, has an enhanced attribute added to it to strengthen the other eight attributes and also help teammates. At the same time, if the author opens a new book, he can try not to participate in the awakening of the martial soul. After all, the restrictions of the soul master are written in the article, and he can try to find his own way. This kind of subject matter is also more attractive. If possible, he can add a villain who uses the martial soul to control the world. Finally, I hope my suggestions can help the author
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