Start Writing a New Story from American Comics

After reading most of the free chapters, I can only say that this book has a lot of room for improvement. The first point: Let's talk about the anime characters summoned by the protagonist. It is explained at the beginning that the summoned anime characters retain their own minds and personalities, but is it reflected in the novel? It would be better for the author to just delete the previous setting. Every summoned character is unconscious. It would be more appropriate for the protagonist to extend his vest. Second point: Let's talk about the plot. It can be summed up in four words: "meaningless". It follows the plot of the original work without any large-scale original plot or reshaping of the world view. I understand everything! Point 3: Let's talk about the protagonist. Sociopathic, stupid, arrogant and half-baked. Without any benign characteristics, this kind of protagonist should be liked by no one except elementary school students who have no understanding of society and find him handsome, right? I feel stupid anyway. Let me give you a template for authors. If you want to write an anti-social and trouble-making protagonist, you can refer to DC's Joker. Things are planned and very simple, and everything is connected to each other, vividly displaying the ugliness of society. Even the plan cannot be called a conspiracy, but a variety of conspiracy. Simple, direct, crazy and full of charisma!

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But you have to be very skillful. You copied and pasted that system panel several times, so I only give you two out of five stars.

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First of all, regarding Guilty Crown, although the series is darkened, it does not mean that it is not kind. Even if it acts cruelly, it cannot be seen as kind. The sacrifice symbolizes gentleness, and when the sacrifice dies, it takes away all the king's gentleness. The gentle king disappears, leaving only cruelty, but that is just an appearance. The king is still a kind king. Even if he loses the most important person, everything the king does is not for himself, but for his "people". Even if he is mistrusted, even if he is betrayed, the king is still a kind king, achieving his goals for his people, even if he is not gentle. Therefore, it is recommended to write some plots in which "American comic characters think that Ji is cold and ruthless, but accidentally discover from something that he is actually very gentle." Generally speaking, if you read a book and find that the author has a harem for characters other than the protagonist, you will think that it is "giving away girls", which will make you feel disgusted and give you a negative review. But Ji's words are different. If I open a harem for Ji, I won't be disgusted at all. On the contrary, I would agree with it. No one is worthy of a beautiful girl like Kojojosai, only Tsumugi can, because the gentle Tsumugi is the one Kojojosai likes and his choice. Although the first girl is annoying in the early stage, she can really do it in the later stage. She sacrifices herself for Tsumugi, so she won't tear her down. Although it doesn't matter to the female partner who can't stand on her legs, it is also good to be a harem for Ji. In short, when writing a collection, don't write too coldly and heartlessly, but show kindness. Ji is recognized and liked by many people, isn't it because of his kindness? Gentle king, kind king, it is difficult to calm down. I once wanted to write a novel in which the protagonist was an extremely gentle king, but I gave up until I saw Guilty Crown. Episode 2333 is even gentler than the extremely gentle king I imagined. It exceeded my imagination! It made me stupid. From then on, I became a fan of the series and liked this character very much. There is no need to change Ji's character. Ji is no longer the Ji that people admire. If you want to follow someone like a righteous partner, it must be Ji and not Ya. This is the charm of Ji. As a man, I am willing to admire a guy who will not envy him. If others get good things, they will be jealous. Ji will take it for granted. He deserves it! As for the drawing characters, I suggest you get some Chinese ones, such as the American comic book Infinite Clone, which writes about immortals, some of which are so handsome. What you wrote is a bit vague about Western mythology, especially God and angels. The myth itself is not as old as ours, and I really disdain it. There is also a system that can write great points, and you can come to American comics. If you are bold, it is better than AOO. The father is Lu Xilu or something. I can't accept it. How could a white-skinned person give birth to a yellow-skinned son? The system parts on the gay sister were also recycled. The personality charm is one thing, but after all, he is a villain. He kills people without blinking an eye. The infinite sword system used by the protagonist is really disgusting, but everyone has their own preferences, so don't worry about me. Finally, although I don't have monthly tickets for you, I still have recommendation tickets. I give them all to you. The writing is still to my liking.

The revenge scene was also poorly written, a pure inferior imitation. I'm not ignorant, let me give you an example. Catch those with vested interests together, tie ropes to fish on high platforms, and tie bombs to their tops. Give each of them a button that randomly controls the rise of others' ropes, and tell them that only one person can survive. If they don't press the button, the ropes will rise together. This is the revenge of those who crave power. The author copied the "Eating Seed" formula and did not write about the essence of mental torture. It is complete garbage. The five-star review is just because I am interested in other settings. If there will be a seventh chapter in the subsequent plot, the plot of the original work will be copied without any improvement or the essence of the content. I will definitely leave five one-star negative reviews!

Is there a female protagonist? If so, who is the heroine?

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