Da Feng: Demon Sealed Sword Soul, Wandering All over the World
About This Novel
The new book "Traveling at the same time: I am domineering in the domestic area" is now on the shelves. On Fuyun Mountain, The young man in black robe is carrying a black ruler, staring at the ray of Yang God in the ghostly fire above the sky to survive the catastrophe and achieve the first rank; The holy body with the giant cauldron above its head specializes in martial arts, and its golden energy and blood shake the sky; The black dragon lay high in the palace, its eyes were filled with gold, and its wings were waving, covering the sky. The Crown Prince and the Emperor sat at the same table, discussing the ideal life of Xianyun Yehe. One sword kills evil and one sword calms souls. Adhering to the way of a hunter, wandering between dawn and dusk. During the period of Xia Ningzi, there was a wanderer who traveled across the world. "Dafeng", "The Legend of Tiangang", "Bad Man", "Qui Ba", "Jiang Ye", "Dou Po", "Secret", "Original God", "Under One Person", "Zhu Xian", etc. PS: The protagonist doesn't know the plot of The Watcher for now, but he will know it later, so don't enter if you don't like it.
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Official(18)Scraped 18d ago
You wrote it for yourself. How come you are in another world and others still know that you have become invisible and even used the vibration sword? Isn't it embarrassing?
Rubbish, rubbish, rubbish, what a fighter among rubbish
The content is too messy and complicated, and there are too many self-pleasure plots.
Very messy
There are only two worlds, and I can't understand them.
A messy bunch
It's very messy, with all kinds of plug-ins and chat groups. . . The main reason is that the system is simply incomprehensible, and the rhythm is messy. The author has to sort it out a bit. If you don't have such a strong writing skills, you can only write a hodgepodge of two sides.
The plot of Zhu Xian is really messed up. You have to reshuffle your numbers at the beginning and you face the old one, but it's almost the same. The protagonist doesn't fight the old one. At the beginning, Zhongli gives you a shield. With Dao Zun and Zhongli showing that they can fight the old one, it's easy to leave. But in the end, you can't leave. If you want to fight, you can send the protagonist back and fight again. There is also the protagonist's teleportation, injury, and escape. It's actually a random world. Why doesn't he return to Dafeng? It's outrageous! You were still unconscious for a while after the teleportation. What do you think? Shouldn't a normal person be transported to a world with acquaintances? What do you mean by random? You just let it go at random. You got dizzy at the beginning, changed your account, and wiped away your initial foundation. This is outrageous, and you almost fell out of state, so what do you think? If the protagonist goes to a world with acquaintances, I won't say anything. In this case, it's best to go to a random world. There is also Zhang Xiaofan, who can withstand the pollution of the past that even the protagonist cannot.
The further you get to the back, the more chaotic you look. It makes my balls ache.
Are you writing for people to read? Practice more
What he wrote was very messy, and I was really confused when I read it. It might be my first time writing a book, and everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables.
What does a time traveler care about the plot? Bad guy, who can threaten you? That man named Zhang took action against you, but you didn't kill him? It's inexplicable, and time-traveling has been discovered, so forget it if you are a big fan, even a bad person, is it so embarrassing to time-travel?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(18)Scraped 18d ago
You wrote it for yourself. How come you are in another world and others still know that you have become invisible and even used the vibration sword? Isn't it embarrassing?
Rubbish, rubbish, rubbish, what a fighter among rubbish
The content is too messy and complicated, and there are too many self-pleasure plots.
Very messy
There are only two worlds, and I can't understand them.
A messy bunch
It's very messy, with all kinds of plug-ins and chat groups. . . The main reason is that the system is simply incomprehensible, and the rhythm is messy. The author has to sort it out a bit. If you don't have such a strong writing skills, you can only write a hodgepodge of two sides.
The plot of Zhu Xian is really messed up. You have to reshuffle your numbers at the beginning and you face the old one, but it's almost the same. The protagonist doesn't fight the old one. At the beginning, Zhongli gives you a shield. With Dao Zun and Zhongli showing that they can fight the old one, it's easy to leave. But in the end, you can't leave. If you want to fight, you can send the protagonist back and fight again. There is also the protagonist's teleportation, injury, and escape. It's actually a random world. Why doesn't he return to Dafeng? It's outrageous! You were still unconscious for a while after the teleportation. What do you think? Shouldn't a normal person be transported to a world with acquaintances? What do you mean by random? You just let it go at random. You got dizzy at the beginning, changed your account, and wiped away your initial foundation. This is outrageous, and you almost fell out of state, so what do you think? If the protagonist goes to a world with acquaintances, I won't say anything. In this case, it's best to go to a random world. There is also Zhang Xiaofan, who can withstand the pollution of the past that even the protagonist cannot.
The further you get to the back, the more chaotic you look. It makes my balls ache.
Are you writing for people to read? Practice more
What he wrote was very messy, and I was really confused when I read it. It might be my first time writing a book, and everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables.
What does a time traveler care about the plot? Bad guy, who can threaten you? That man named Zhang took action against you, but you didn't kill him? It's inexplicable, and time-traveling has been discovered, so forget it if you are a big fan, even a bad person, is it so embarrassing to time-travel?
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