
Longevity Martial Arts Begins with Becoming a Disciple of Zuo Ruotong
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False immortality: Be cautious and sincere, work diligently to refine elixirs of water and fire, and honestly observe the rules and regulations. As for female lust, you must put aside it. True immortality: I can break the void road with one punch, I can reach the other shore without a boat, and I can build an immortal body. Which immortal dares to raise his head! How old are you now, and you are still looking at the face of heaven? Shen Mingyuan recited the full text for himself on the spot - to give Shen Zhenjun the governorship of the three realms and six realms, to enter the heaven without rushing, to praise and worship without name, to go to the palace with swords and shoes, to prepare the rituals of Daluo, to have the same etiquette as the Three Pure Ones, and to be above all the immortals. ... There has been no immortal for a long time, and since then, the true king Mingyuan has been prosperous. --"The Biography of Immortals" (The current world is under one person.)
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Official(3)Scraped 27d ago
The power gained in a very short period of time beats everyone at the same age. Are you writing a novel or a game? What is the central idea of your book? Is it a simple upgrade? The difference between the first level and the second level is earth-shaking. It is an understatement.
It's well written and skillfully written. The only flaw is that the protagonist doesn't know the plot.
I'll give you the monthly pass next time. It's written in great detail.
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Official(3)Scraped 27d ago
The power gained in a very short period of time beats everyone at the same age. Are you writing a novel or a game? What is the central idea of your book? Is it a simple upgrade? The difference between the first level and the second level is earth-shaking. It is an understatement.
It's well written and skillfully written. The only flaw is that the protagonist doesn't know the plot.
I'll give you the monthly pass next time. It's written in great detail.









