
Personalized System
About This Novel
The new book "Attack Paladin" seeks support~ A genius scientist spent all his efforts and ten years of hard work to refine himself into a system! Not for wealth and glory, not for controlling the world! Personalized system - just to get you back from the hands of death! ! Welcome to join the book club group: 761951225
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Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
I'll take a seat here too, haha
Well, what would be the score in the exam↓
It's to my liking. Whether it's the protagonist's character or the plot, it's objectively great. To put it in a more literary way, the plot is ups and downs, exciting, and the protagonist's character is vividly described.
Author, I think you should write system flow, it looks better that way. In exchange for equal value, it doesn't feel that good. I suggest the author rewrite. If I want to turn it into a system after writing it, I must have a system-like process. There are other tasks, there must be one. I think the system can develop like Bankai. Well, I feel like I can't see the real system this time, so I give you four stars.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
I'll take a seat here too, haha
Well, what would be the score in the exam↓
It's to my liking. Whether it's the protagonist's character or the plot, it's objectively great. To put it in a more literary way, the plot is ups and downs, exciting, and the protagonist's character is vividly described.
Author, I think you should write system flow, it looks better that way. In exchange for equal value, it doesn't feel that good. I suggest the author rewrite. If I want to turn it into a system after writing it, I must have a system-like process. There are other tasks, there must be one. I think the system can develop like Bankai. Well, I feel like I can't see the real system this time, so I give you four stars.
















