
Kill Spirits in Tokyo with a Zanpakutō
by Luoyu's Life
About This Novel
My name is Dongyun Kong. It seems like there is a Zanpakutō inside my body...
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(45)Scraped 20d ago
Okay, give up the trap
It seemed fine at first, but I had to find something to join a certain guild. Well, if you make me unhappy, I will make you unhappy too.
Feeling a little indecisive
You've inherited Kenpachi's swordsmanship, why haven't you learned his temper?
The update is a bit slow, short and weak and not enough to read
A eunuch?
There has been no update for 5 days. Is this a eunuch?
Absolutely
Okay, I've really given up. You'd better stop writing. I've been slowing down the pace. I looked at the previous review and it was pretty good. I also feel like I've found a good Death fan. But I found out that I was wrong. If you don't want to write, just stop writing. You've been dragging out the pace. Is it interesting? The reader is disgusted and the reader is uncomfortable. You still want to be scolded. What are you trying to do? Just stop writing. Look at what you have been writing these past two days. Not to mention anything else, the male protagonist is still a stranger. Did you write two male protagonists? Or three male protagonists? What's new? What is this? The character positioning is not clearly written, the main line is also unclear, the plot is forcibly triggered, a few chapters are written with a broken sword, and it is not the male lead at the end. The other person is a genius. The new Long Aotian, the rise of a typical waste, the protagonist template, the male lead becomes a passerby, nothing, nothing, not to mention opportunities, all are given to the male lead. Where is your male lead role? Come out for a test and chop twice and that's it? It's better to fight with strength. Shi and Yi are not as good as others. You rely on brute force to fight. Really, your setting of Death is really useless.
I just dressed up and went to Japan to slap you in the face. It's all the same routine, and the writing is very naive. Remember, I just went to Japan.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(45)Scraped 20d ago
Okay, give up the trap
It seemed fine at first, but I had to find something to join a certain guild. Well, if you make me unhappy, I will make you unhappy too.
Feeling a little indecisive
You've inherited Kenpachi's swordsmanship, why haven't you learned his temper?
The update is a bit slow, short and weak and not enough to read
A eunuch?
There has been no update for 5 days. Is this a eunuch?
Absolutely
Okay, I've really given up. You'd better stop writing. I've been slowing down the pace. I looked at the previous review and it was pretty good. I also feel like I've found a good Death fan. But I found out that I was wrong. If you don't want to write, just stop writing. You've been dragging out the pace. Is it interesting? The reader is disgusted and the reader is uncomfortable. You still want to be scolded. What are you trying to do? Just stop writing. Look at what you have been writing these past two days. Not to mention anything else, the male protagonist is still a stranger. Did you write two male protagonists? Or three male protagonists? What's new? What is this? The character positioning is not clearly written, the main line is also unclear, the plot is forcibly triggered, a few chapters are written with a broken sword, and it is not the male lead at the end. The other person is a genius. The new Long Aotian, the rise of a typical waste, the protagonist template, the male lead becomes a passerby, nothing, nothing, not to mention opportunities, all are given to the male lead. Where is your male lead role? Come out for a test and chop twice and that's it? It's better to fight with strength. Shi and Yi are not as good as others. You rely on brute force to fight. Really, your setting of Death is really useless.
I just dressed up and went to Japan to slap you in the face. It's all the same routine, and the writing is very naive. Remember, I just went to Japan.




















