Witch's Strange News Diary
About This Novel
Since the birth of the original witch in ancient times, women with special powers have continued to emerge in the world. These women with special powers are called "witches". The power of the witch is unpredictable and will never die. After the witch dies, she will leave behind "witch relics" with special powers. Zhang Xiaoyang, who just wanted to live a peaceful life, picked up a witch's relic called "Future Notes" one day. He took this as an opportunity to come into contact with the other side of the world and started his own wonderful adventure. In short, this is a story in which the protagonist meets various young ladies with extraordinary abilities and fights against evil capitalists and secret societies. -------- PS1: Similar theme, containing elements of Arknights, JOJO-style fighting style, the middle and rear parts may have a Cthulhu style, and overall it is more plot-oriented. PS2: Newbie, new book, hope everyone can support it! Underworld book club group: 298414065
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Official(8)Scraped 24d ago
When writing about a witch, I should add Sister Bei.
Shocked😨, why are all the beautiful men opening this comment?
I think the author's protagonist is a bit reckless, he goes to save a person who doesn't deserve to die. But because the villain is stronger than him. He failed to rescue him. Then the opposite of the protagonist lives a very cool life, and maybe the opposite of the protagonist is not bad either. It is because of strength that the protagonist fails to achieve his own ideas. This is different from that in Chinatown. The protagonist in Chinatown just keeps killing enemies, but here it feels a bit submissive. It's very frustrating. Maybe what the author wants to express is the difference in strength between individuals in state agencies and governments. But this seems a bit frustrating. Maybe your author doesn't define this book as a light novel, but generally successful works are a bit satisfying in the end. Except for individual cases. Compared to using wisdom to make up for the gap in strength. Well, most of them probably prefer to watch the villains show off their intelligence, but the protagonist just rushes over. The protagonist has sufficient strength or background. Of course, you may want to say that this book is a novel with both joy and sorrow. But if you say that due to certain strength reasons, the protagonist missed things that he shouldn't miss. You might get sprayed badly. Famous example of Jiangnan Uesugi painted pear clothing. , My personal recommendation. It is to give the protagonist a strong background, because some of your plots are because the protagonist is not strong enough. This causes people around you to have some unspeakable secrets. It looks very frustrating. Of course, my advice is purely personal. After all, everyone has different tastes. Come on, author!
I feel that the protagonist has no emotions. The author may want to create a person with a more rational heart.
I feel that the protagonist has no emotions, and the author may want to create a person with a more rational heart and stable emotions. Your volume-by-volume descriptions are great, but you rarely mention other supporting characters in each volume, especially the female supporting characters. It feels like the protagonist doesn't care enough about the people around him and has weak emotions. So I personally hope that the author will put more effort into emotional communication. This is purely a personal suggestion, but the author's writing is still very good.
This book is probably gone. There will be no good results if you continue writing.
If the author didn't regard this as entertainment, he wouldn't have written it. Start a new book again. Change a new account and start a fan novel about Arknights
By the way, why didn't anyone watch it?
. . . . [Emot=default,15/]. . . . . . . Ah ah ah ah crystal flame water experience water experience
Why is there no one?
Come on, author. Are you also an Ark fan? Have you reached the new year?
The new book "The Cat and the Detective and the Old City" has been uploaded
Interested friends can take a look.
I haven't read it yet, I'll ask first before deciding.
The author said in the introduction that it contains porridge ingredients. Can anyone help explain it? Because this setting seems to have nothing to do with Zhou...
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Official(8)Scraped 24d ago
When writing about a witch, I should add Sister Bei.
Shocked😨, why are all the beautiful men opening this comment?
I think the author's protagonist is a bit reckless, he goes to save a person who doesn't deserve to die. But because the villain is stronger than him. He failed to rescue him. Then the opposite of the protagonist lives a very cool life, and maybe the opposite of the protagonist is not bad either. It is because of strength that the protagonist fails to achieve his own ideas. This is different from that in Chinatown. The protagonist in Chinatown just keeps killing enemies, but here it feels a bit submissive. It's very frustrating. Maybe what the author wants to express is the difference in strength between individuals in state agencies and governments. But this seems a bit frustrating. Maybe your author doesn't define this book as a light novel, but generally successful works are a bit satisfying in the end. Except for individual cases. Compared to using wisdom to make up for the gap in strength. Well, most of them probably prefer to watch the villains show off their intelligence, but the protagonist just rushes over. The protagonist has sufficient strength or background. Of course, you may want to say that this book is a novel with both joy and sorrow. But if you say that due to certain strength reasons, the protagonist missed things that he shouldn't miss. You might get sprayed badly. Famous example of Jiangnan Uesugi painted pear clothing. , My personal recommendation. It is to give the protagonist a strong background, because some of your plots are because the protagonist is not strong enough. This causes people around you to have some unspeakable secrets. It looks very frustrating. Of course, my advice is purely personal. After all, everyone has different tastes. Come on, author!
I feel that the protagonist has no emotions. The author may want to create a person with a more rational heart.
I feel that the protagonist has no emotions, and the author may want to create a person with a more rational heart and stable emotions. Your volume-by-volume descriptions are great, but you rarely mention other supporting characters in each volume, especially the female supporting characters. It feels like the protagonist doesn't care enough about the people around him and has weak emotions. So I personally hope that the author will put more effort into emotional communication. This is purely a personal suggestion, but the author's writing is still very good.
This book is probably gone. There will be no good results if you continue writing.
If the author didn't regard this as entertainment, he wouldn't have written it. Start a new book again. Change a new account and start a fan novel about Arknights
By the way, why didn't anyone watch it?
. . . . [Emot=default,15/]. . . . . . . Ah ah ah ah crystal flame water experience water experience
Why is there no one?
Come on, author. Are you also an Ark fan? Have you reached the new year?
The new book "The Cat and the Detective and the Old City" has been uploaded
Interested friends can take a look.
I haven't read it yet, I'll ask first before deciding.
The author said in the introduction that it contains porridge ingredients. Can anyone help explain it? Because this setting seems to have nothing to do with Zhou...
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