Lords Starting from Rune Fishing

I wrote 22 pictures before I killed the bear. Is it such a long way to lay the groundwork? What else do you want to introduce? It's enough water. I regained a healthy body in 20 pictures. I haven't learned any martial arts. I haven't caught any fish yet, and I've been chatting here awkwardly.

Alas, the subject matter is quite good, but the writing is completely incomprehensible. If you don't write about invincibility or about farming and development, look at what you wrote is nothing. It gives people a desire that they can't read anymore. The author has a suggestion for you. If you want to write, you don't need to slow down the pace. This way, no one can read it and you will feel like you are alone in an awkward conversation. You have not grasped the outline at all. Don't feel that you have to write a long one at the beginning. Write to feel. It is a small hedging point. After writing so many chapters and not getting into the topic, why write it?

The parts that are not written will be updated. ***Can you please stop updating and update quickly?

It's a very interesting novel. Everyone is welcome to read it.

The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist goes around saying that he has space. How to describe it? He is just like a child pushing a cart full of gold and money through the market. My suggestion is to stop talking about it everywhere. You won't be afraid that the person you talked about will have an accident and be soul-searched. Also, don't mess with the Martial Saint's Heart Technique. It's just a dirty thing, just like martial arts. It has no practical ability. I guess the author has watched too much of a certain music. Since they have traveled through time, just practice step by step according to that system.

Let's reopen! Nice idea, but too sloppy

The writing is very good, and the subject matter is good. The combination of fog, spiritual realm, and lord is very good. There are just too few updates. I have had this book for more than a month, and the quantity is very small.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is terrible. The protagonist is too useless

Update quickly, add more, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Keep writing! I think the setting of the book is very good. It has just over 100 chapters. Many people have not paid attention to it. More people will read it later.