Tony Stark of All Worlds
About This Novel
Tony, who was blacksmithing in a cave, suddenly saw that the scene in front of him turned into an endless sea. "Where did this come from? Is this still the earth?"
What Readers Think
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Official(9)Scraped 20d ago
I'll give you a picture. I need to update it more often.
Light up the 5-star review
It's still too young, but so far it's not bad. You can go to more different worlds and it's not necessarily the technology side. Technology has its limits. Only the science and technology can be powerful.
Write a draft, make an outline.
Having ideas is a good thing, but the author is like trying to describe the dream world to others after going to bed. It was a mess, with holes everywhere like fishnet stockings.
Okay, except for the fact that the character I wrote doesn't look like a big shit, everything else is okay.
It's pretty good. Why does the review have to be ten words?
The author writes well, don't stop.
I'm thinking it would be really interesting if Tony traveled through time in EVA.
It would be better to change the question
The subject matter is good, but there are too many questions. First, there are a lot of typos in the article, and many people have reminded me of them, but they have not been corrected. Second, most of the sentences are always lacking in quality, such as the spider sense. In the article, only the spider sense is left, and the bomb directly becomes an explosion. There are many examples like this, and they have not been changed. Third, there is inconsistency. For example, I know the purpose of your coming here, but then there is another sentence, what is the purpose of your coming here? There are so many sentences like this that it is a bit powerless to complain. There are also many small problems. Some characters are not well portrayed, some plots are too low-key to the IQ, and the plot is inconsistent. It is not smooth to read and cannot be connected at all. It should be better if these issues are corrected in the next book.
It's so beautiful, it's like nectar from heaven. Looking forward to the next big shit world.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(9)Scraped 20d ago
I'll give you a picture. I need to update it more often.
Light up the 5-star review
It's still too young, but so far it's not bad. You can go to more different worlds and it's not necessarily the technology side. Technology has its limits. Only the science and technology can be powerful.
Write a draft, make an outline.
Having ideas is a good thing, but the author is like trying to describe the dream world to others after going to bed. It was a mess, with holes everywhere like fishnet stockings.
Okay, except for the fact that the character I wrote doesn't look like a big shit, everything else is okay.
It's pretty good. Why does the review have to be ten words?
The author writes well, don't stop.
I'm thinking it would be really interesting if Tony traveled through time in EVA.
It would be better to change the question
The subject matter is good, but there are too many questions. First, there are a lot of typos in the article, and many people have reminded me of them, but they have not been corrected. Second, most of the sentences are always lacking in quality, such as the spider sense. In the article, only the spider sense is left, and the bomb directly becomes an explosion. There are many examples like this, and they have not been changed. Third, there is inconsistency. For example, I know the purpose of your coming here, but then there is another sentence, what is the purpose of your coming here? There are so many sentences like this that it is a bit powerless to complain. There are also many small problems. Some characters are not well portrayed, some plots are too low-key to the IQ, and the plot is inconsistent. It is not smooth to read and cannot be connected at all. It should be better if these issues are corrected in the next book.
It's so beautiful, it's like nectar from heaven. Looking forward to the next big shit world.
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