Ancestor, Times Have Changed

The subject matter is quite unique! But it feels like there's something wrong with the details! It is reasonable to cultivate immortality through science and technology! But being too protective of the equality of all living beings is a big problem! Just practice! Talents must have their pros and cons! Even if you can suppress the strong and the weak! But you are always afraid of death, right? Afraid of death and always rushes away from life! What to do if you can't catch up! Then I can borrow it from everyone! No one else is willing to grab it! Wouldn't it be unfair if you robbed it? So unless we stop cultivating, everyone will be the same! Slight equality is possible! Or it would be reasonable to write it directly as combining pure technology with cultivating immortals.

The world view is actually very good. Most of us fans of the book "Cultivation of Immortality" want to see the modifications under this world view, but your entry point is not good. The plot feels very fragmented, and there is no desire to read.

If he is not a supporting role, this male lead has more roles😔😔. If you don't know, you might think Zhang Yunlu is the protagonist😙😙

The book is quite new, but the writing is so boring. I didn't understand it. What does Zhang Yunlu have to do with the protagonist? The protagonist said he was just giving some pointers, and you spent so many chapters writing about her. It's boring. I'm here to show off the protagonist who has advanced cultivation, not to see the life of a cultivator from scratch. If you don't have particularly good writing skills, then write some exciting openings to attract readers. I can only tolerate boring plots at the beginning. There are books like Feng Yu Jiuqiu, In the Snow of Beacon Fire, and Lan Ke, which are of a high level. Instead of looking at the title of your cool article and conceiving the cool article and then writing some boring content, maybe your plot will be very good later, but you can persuade me at the beginning. In conclusion, either your writing skills are very high, let me know that you are a good book, and guide me to read patiently, or Just write cool articles to attract me and make me feel comfortable reading them. Thank you.

The writing is pretty good, but it looks a bit like a group portrait

The subject matter is good, but the idea is not good, and the protagonist's role is pitiful.

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At first I thought the setting was good, but later I found that the worldview was a mess and contradictory, the main plot was messy, the protagonist's purpose was inexplicable, the characterization was bland, and the author's writing style was generally the smallest problem.

The book is quite new, but unfortunately it is too watery. After reading more than a dozen chapters, only 4 or 5 are related to the protagonist. The sea, you are all water

There are two updates a day, and they always start at 10:50 and 11:00. Every time it's just the same, I must be lazy, and there must be stock, but they don't ship.