Reborn as a Dragon, Turn Yourself in at the Beginning

My evaluation is that it can be maintained, and it won't be too bad if I write it normally.

The writing is messy, not attractive at all, and there is no foreshadowing in the previous text of the Ruins Realm. It is like writing whatever comes to mind without filtering it in my mind. It is not good to use China as the background. It makes people remember it more easily and sounds more comfortable. Maybe you think you can create a small country in Eastern Xia and then rely on dragons to become a big country. , It gives a sense of accomplishment, but it makes others feel uncomfortable when watching it. From the name, Dongxia is a nice name, and the cultivation resources are written in such a way that people have no desire to read on. I couldn't stand it after seeing Chapter 3.4 (Personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The beginning is a poisonous point, describing China as an ordinary small Southeast Asian country.

Hmm... I feel like I just changed the protagonist from a human to a dragon. It will be a bit fresh, but the subsequent plot is a bit ordinary, but not attractive enough.

This novel is indeed good. There is nothing poisonous about it. It is just a pity that few people read it and it has no exposure.

Basically, there is no poisonous place, and the force value is not exaggerated. It is basically within a controllable range. It should not collapse within 100 chapters.

Anyway, I have read a book of this type that is probably plagiarized.

The first b of water is a bad start. Write Xia as a small country. If you want to go to a small country to develop, don't use the word Xia. What can you call it? Return to Dongxia and return to a small country.

It's okay to accept that he updates slowly every day. And not only is the update slow, but it also deliberately cuts off at the climax every day, which will piss you off. I don't know what happened after that, but now I feel that the pace is slow, boring, and updates are slow. How long has this garbage Dali been dragging on? You've been beating this snake for two days. Can you get excited? Get out of here.

It's so well written, but it takes hundreds of chapters to transform?