Douluo: Martial Spirit Qilin, the Lord of Heavenly Stems and Earthly Branches!
by It's Really Not A Face Control
About This Novel
Ye Ruilin traveled through Douluo and became the legitimate son of the three hidden sects of the Qilin Ye family. He awakened the divine beast-the auspicious Qilin martial spirit. At the beginning, the auspicious power protects the body, I pick up gold soul coins while walking, and I encounter a thousand-year soul bone when I go shopping. The ancestor of the Ye family stipulated that the first three spirit rings of the Kirin Martial Spirit must increase physical strength, which is the highest level of cultivation. Ye Ruilin, who was a purple-robed heavenly master in his previous life, didn't think so! The martial spirit of Tang Yuge in later generations was the Five Elements Kirin! If you let your martial soul evolve into a five-element unicorn, you can control the power of the five elements, activate the ten stems of the sky, control the power of the twenty-eight stars, and control the four spirits of the sky! With the green dragon, white tiger, red bird, and Xuanwu, the four locked the middle palace and awakened the fifth holy beast in the middle. Yellow Dragon Qilin! In front of him, the God King could only bow his head and surrender! Therefore, Ye Ruilin directly broke the Ye family's inherent soul ring model and began to intend to evolve the martial soul. In a fit of anger, his father kicked him out of the house to reflect, and wanted to rub off his energy. Unexpectedly, Ye Ruilin turned around and left without leaving any room. ... A few years later. Ning Rongrong: "Thank you very much, brother Ye for the black and yellow glazed pagoda!" Ma Hongjun: "Thank you, big brother, for arranging the Suzaku martial spirit and the evil fire phoenix? Who would use this rubbish martial spirit!" Dai Chengtian: "Four Spirit White Tiger Martial Spirit, I think the Star Luo Empire can change its surname to Ye!" Yu Tianxin: "I hope my eldest brother will accept this gift from the Martial Soul Evolution Azure Dragon and Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus family." Xu Xuanhan: "Returning to the ancestral martial spirit Xuanwu, our three major hidden families regard the Ye family as the most respected." After living in seclusion for many years, I, the Qilin family, should return to the center and assume the imperial power! Everyone, give way! ! !
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Official(58)Scraped 6d ago
Oh my God, the beginning of your book is 80% similar to Bai Hu's book😑I don't know if I copied it😑
It's a fantasy and mindless novel that's dressed up as a Douluo fanfic, but it's still the kind of novel that you don't know what's cool about it. Many of the plots are too abrupt, making people feel inexplicable, too seriously separated from the original text, and the settings are also very strange. In summary, this is a mediocre cover story, it feels like it was written by AI, using the fantasy template of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.
Wuhun nine-color unicorn evolution nine-color unicorn
As the young master of a hidden clan. He went to the Qibao Glazed Sect to get resources and became a little licking dog. I've seen people who know how to lick, but I've never seen people who know how to lick like you. You are really the most ridiculous person in the world. It made me laugh so hard.
Since when did the Star Luo Empire have so many titled Douluo?
He was persuaded to quit in the early stage, a pure-blooded true dragon, a descendant of the Fire Dragon King, ah, I am so speechless, do you think Ditian is so grand and casually puts a young pure-blooded fire dragon outside...
Douluo fantasy
1. The writing is completely unlike Douluo. 2. If you take the route of transforming into a martial soul, why not take the route of transforming into a dragon in the early stage? The Douluo Beast Clan Dragon is the end point. You can directly refer to "Huainanzi·Chen Xingxun": Maodu gives birth to Yinglong, Yinglong gives birth to Jianma, and Jianma gives birth to Qilin. According to this basis, there is no need to prescribe unreasonable skills to the protagonist, just absorb the dragon soul ring, and the Ice and Fire Eyes copy will guarantee the evolution of the horse. Yinglong can also think about it (after all, they are two divine skeletons). On the hour of title ban, the flower activity evolves into a hairy calf to start the story line of becoming a god. Isn't this more reasonable than your yellow dragon and unicorn? (There is no Huanglong or Qilin among the central five spirits. Huanglong is Huanglong and Qilin is Qilin. Both of them can sit in the center.) If you still want to take the five-spirit route, there happens to be a saying that Yinglong is the fifth spirit. Isn't this more reasonable than your unreasonable exercises to promote the evolution of the Five Elements? What you are writing now is like the protagonist in an ancient novel playing with a Zanpakutō in Naruto. It has to be forced. Naruto does not have the growth resources of the Shinigami. You still have to write that the protagonist uses the Shinigami's power system to beat Naruto. You have to write it hard or use it to cheat without thinking. If you have a reasonable route, you must not take it, but you must go the wrong way.
Weirdly, Emperor Xingluo seems to regard titles as pigs and dogs. Those titled Douluo dare not go back until they have completed their tasks. They will be severely punished if they go back, but the emperor seems to be only level ninety-five. Then there are a lot of titles in Xingluo. On the surface, there are only three or four titles in Wuhun Palace. Then there is the Hidden World Family. Qilin sounds so powerful. Before there was the main character Herb, there were only two Douluo. This Xuanming turtle is worthy of being on the same level as Qilin. Is it right for the Xuanming Turtle Martial Spirit to resist Ma Hongjun's anger and say some contemptuous words? The fire of the single evil fire phoenix can crush that turtle, okay, it's all Suzaku. The most important thing is the number of Star Douluo. It would be okay if you strengthened all of them. With the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect as the background, only two titles will be banned. Then Emperor Dai is in a bad mood and orders ten titles to be sent. The Seven Treasures Glazed Sect will be destroyed.
New author, first time Douluo, please bear with me, thank you
Dear reader, this is my first time writing Douluo. I have never written a book before. I have worked very hard to finish it. The manuscript has been revised. If there are any problems with the settings, please give me suggestions. Glass Heart QAQ. After I see it, I will revise it as soon as possible. Thank you very much.
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Official(58)Scraped 6d ago
Oh my God, the beginning of your book is 80% similar to Bai Hu's book😑I don't know if I copied it😑
It's a fantasy and mindless novel that's dressed up as a Douluo fanfic, but it's still the kind of novel that you don't know what's cool about it. Many of the plots are too abrupt, making people feel inexplicable, too seriously separated from the original text, and the settings are also very strange. In summary, this is a mediocre cover story, it feels like it was written by AI, using the fantasy template of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.
Wuhun nine-color unicorn evolution nine-color unicorn
As the young master of a hidden clan. He went to the Qibao Glazed Sect to get resources and became a little licking dog. I've seen people who know how to lick, but I've never seen people who know how to lick like you. You are really the most ridiculous person in the world. It made me laugh so hard.
Since when did the Star Luo Empire have so many titled Douluo?
He was persuaded to quit in the early stage, a pure-blooded true dragon, a descendant of the Fire Dragon King, ah, I am so speechless, do you think Ditian is so grand and casually puts a young pure-blooded fire dragon outside...
Douluo fantasy
1. The writing is completely unlike Douluo. 2. If you take the route of transforming into a martial soul, why not take the route of transforming into a dragon in the early stage? The Douluo Beast Clan Dragon is the end point. You can directly refer to "Huainanzi·Chen Xingxun": Maodu gives birth to Yinglong, Yinglong gives birth to Jianma, and Jianma gives birth to Qilin. According to this basis, there is no need to prescribe unreasonable skills to the protagonist, just absorb the dragon soul ring, and the Ice and Fire Eyes copy will guarantee the evolution of the horse. Yinglong can also think about it (after all, they are two divine skeletons). On the hour of title ban, the flower activity evolves into a hairy calf to start the story line of becoming a god. Isn't this more reasonable than your yellow dragon and unicorn? (There is no Huanglong or Qilin among the central five spirits. Huanglong is Huanglong and Qilin is Qilin. Both of them can sit in the center.) If you still want to take the five-spirit route, there happens to be a saying that Yinglong is the fifth spirit. Isn't this more reasonable than your unreasonable exercises to promote the evolution of the Five Elements? What you are writing now is like the protagonist in an ancient novel playing with a Zanpakutō in Naruto. It has to be forced. Naruto does not have the growth resources of the Shinigami. You still have to write that the protagonist uses the Shinigami's power system to beat Naruto. You have to write it hard or use it to cheat without thinking. If you have a reasonable route, you must not take it, but you must go the wrong way.
Weirdly, Emperor Xingluo seems to regard titles as pigs and dogs. Those titled Douluo dare not go back until they have completed their tasks. They will be severely punished if they go back, but the emperor seems to be only level ninety-five. Then there are a lot of titles in Xingluo. On the surface, there are only three or four titles in Wuhun Palace. Then there is the Hidden World Family. Qilin sounds so powerful. Before there was the main character Herb, there were only two Douluo. This Xuanming turtle is worthy of being on the same level as Qilin. Is it right for the Xuanming Turtle Martial Spirit to resist Ma Hongjun's anger and say some contemptuous words? The fire of the single evil fire phoenix can crush that turtle, okay, it's all Suzaku. The most important thing is the number of Star Douluo. It would be okay if you strengthened all of them. With the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect as the background, only two titles will be banned. Then Emperor Dai is in a bad mood and orders ten titles to be sent. The Seven Treasures Glazed Sect will be destroyed.
New author, first time Douluo, please bear with me, thank you
Dear reader, this is my first time writing Douluo. I have never written a book before. I have worked very hard to finish it. The manuscript has been revised. If there are any problems with the settings, please give me suggestions. Glass Heart QAQ. After I see it, I will revise it as soon as possible. Thank you very much.
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